Hello guys annoying author here, As you know it's my first novel so I don't have much experience in writing. That's why I wanted to ask what you think about the fighting scenes in the chapters I released recently. I will truly appreciate your feedback since I don't know if I was able to write the fighting scenes properly. Thanks for your support.
After kicking away Marx Ethan looked up into the sky as his eyes shined with power and the wind in the surrounding area picked up the pace.Currently, the only thought that occupied Ethan's mind was to completely destroy Marx.Marx who was lying on the ground with a broken body felt his mind going numb because of the pain and he felt like he will lose consciousness any moment.Although Ethan just attacked two times after standing up, Marx's body was completely destroyed with just those two attacks.Because of the earlier kick his entire face was deformed, his teeth were shattered, his nose was bleeding and his eyes were half closed.'Just what kind of monster did I provoke' Marx was regretting his earlier action.Marx clearly knew that whatever happened to Ethan was related to him mentioning about his grandparents.'I shouldn't have read about him before coming here' because the organization sent him and Jules to capture Ethan his curiosity was piqued out and he read the details about
In a dark room, a man was leaning on a black throne with his eyes closed.Suddenly the man opened his eyes and a frown appeared on his face."Both of them are dead" the man muttered and took out a crystal from his storage ring. After taking out the crystal the man injected his mana into it but even after five seconds nothing happened.The frown on the man's face deepen when he saw this, "Someone even blocked the connection with my recording crystal with them" the man muttered and put away the crystal.The man who was sitting on the throne was naturally the rank four member of the chaos race who ordered to capture Ethan. His name was Drowin.After putting away the crystal Drowik closed his eyes and a strange wave emerged from his body going somewhere.After two minutes someone knocked on the door and entered the room before kneeling before Drowin."Master, you summoned me" Murphy the leader of the chaos organization on planet Mirmid asked."Marx and Jules are dead" Drowin spoke without
Four days later..."Master please spare her" Skyla begged Ethan to stop while her eyes were red like she will cry out any moment because of the cruel scene in front of her.Ethan completely ignored what Skyla said and continue to do what he was doing."How dare you act smug in front of me, let me see if you will act all mighty after I am done with you" Ethan said in a tone filled with malice.Emma who was standing beside Skyla clenched her fist so tightly that her nails dug inside her palm flesh. She was looking at Ethan like he is the cruelest person in the world.Ethan didn't care about how Skyla and Emma were looking at him and looked at a certain red fox who was rolling on the ground like she is gone mad, while her cute face was stained in tears making her even more pitiful in the eyes of others.Seeing their master completely ignore them Skyla and Emma looked at each other and a determined look appeared on their face.Both Emma and Skyla lifted their hands while looking at the fox
Ethan sat down and opened his status window to see the notifications he got while fighting against Marx.Although Ethan already saw these notifications many times, each time he saw these notifications he felt butterflies are dancing inside his stomach because of the happiness."I wonder if there is anyone else who has two unique skills even before becoming a rank two evolver" Ethan said with shining eyes and looked at the new skill that he got four days ago.[As an elemental apprentice who already reached 100% affinity with wind element and has high familiarity with wind, wind elements are reacting because of your rage)(You have learned the unique passive skill 'THE RAGE OF WIND MONARCH')---) Rage Of Wind Monarch :- When the anger of the user reaches at a certain point the skill will activate automatically. While the skill is activated the mana cost for all wind-type skills is reduced by 90%. All wind-related skills power will be improved by 100% to 1000% depending on the anger level
(You have killed Rank two level 100 Marx. You have acquired +115 Health, +123 Stamina, +117 Strength, +125 Agility, 127 Magic, +130 Mana)Seeing this notification Ethan wanted to shout that he is the lord of the world since after killing Marx he was stronger than ever, but he can't bring himself to say something so embarrassing so he kept his mouth shut. [You have leveled up and reached level 45. You have acquired 3 free state points][You have leveled up and reached level 46. You have acquired 3 free state points][You have leveled up and reached level 47. You have acquired 3 free state points][You have leveled up and reached level 48. You have acquired 3 free state points][You have leveled up and reached level 49. You have acquired 3 free state points][You have leveled up and reached level 50. You have acquired 3 free state points](You have reached level 50 you can't level up anymore before you evolve and become a Rank two evolver)(Because you chose the 'ELEMENTAL APPRENTICE' c
Ethan knew destroying the main headquarter of the chaos organization is not a simple matter.Even if he somehow found the location of the headquarter it's not like the rank four evolvers of chaos organization will allow him to destroy their main headquarter.'I am sure the guy who ordered Edward to capture me will also be there' Ethan was sure that the person who ordered Edward to capture him is a Rank four evolver.Ethan was sure about this guess because Alice already told him that chaos poison is extremely rare and only rank four evolvers of the chaos race carry it with them.'And professor Stacey also told us that there is a rank four evolver of the chaos race on planet Mirmid' Ethan still remembered what professor Stacey told them in the class some days ago."Since there is a rank four evolver of chaos race and most like another rank four evolver who is the leader of the chaos organization of planet Mirmid, I will have to face at least two rank four evolvers if I want to complete t
"Ouch!" both Skyla and Emma who were searching for the truth of the universe after abandoning Ruby covered their head when someone bonked them."How long you two are going to act like this?" Skyla and Emma looked behind them and saw Ethan already stopped his torture and was standing behind them.They looked at Ruby who was looking at them with narrowed eyes like saying, 'I won't forget what happened today'Skyla and Emma were cowered but not stupid so when they saw Ruby's narrowed eyes they did what smart people like them should do."Master do you need anything?" they decided to get close to Ethan who can save them from Ruby in the future. Yes, it was a cowardly tactic but both shameless women didn't care about that after all, they don't want to get harras by that cunning fox."Ray is not back yet?" Ethan didn't care about the matters between Ruby and them and asked. Ray didn't come back to the capital with Ethan and others and left for somewhere after saying he has something to do an
"I was coming back after purchasing some flower seeds when suddenly Aldo approached me and asked me to follow him. It was not the first time he asked me to follow him so I ignored him just like every time" Lucy started to tell what happened. "Usually when I ignore him he will throw some vile remarks at me and won't do anything else, but today when I ignored him he grabbed my hand and tried to forcefully drag me with him" Lucy's voice trembled when she said this but she didn't stop and continued,"When I tried to free myself he slapped me and threaten me to follow him obediently if I don't want to die, although I tried to free myself from him I wasn't able to do anything because he was just too strong""But suddenly he stopped dragging me away and run away from there like he was afraid of someone, just as he run away I saw guards who patrol the inner district passing by from that area. When Aldo ran away I didn't stop there and quickly left that area and returned here" Lucy told everyt