All Chapters of The Rise of John Raymond: Chapter 11
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The Unexpected Call
The trio, full of anticipation, buzzed with excitement over the upcoming car showcase event. They’d spent hours flipping through catalogues, scrolling through online showrooms, and arguing over which cars had the best designs, horsepower, and tech features. Each of them wanted something extraordinary—something that would turn heads and silence every critic on campus.Collins was particularly loud in his enthusiasm, bombarding Anna and John with his options every two minutes. Anna was leaning toward a sleek, hyper-feminine luxury coupe with rose gold accents, while Collins couldn’t decide between a matte-black muscle car or a European concept design that looked like it had time-travelled from 2040.But in the midst of all the chatter, John sat silently, calm and collected, his eyes fixed on the clouds outside the window.“I trust Mr. Carter to deliver as always,” he thought to himself.Mr. Carter—brilliant, eccentric, and deeply loyal—had once been the lead engineer for one of the worl
Welcome Home
He answered the call with suspicion, assuming it might be someone from his grandfather's estate calling to confirm his location so the car could be sent to pick him up."Hello, how can I help you?" John asked, voice cautious but polite."It's me, silly!" a familiar voice chirped over the phone.He furrowed his brows in confusion, unsure who it was at first."It's me, Anna. I was really excited because my car is finally ready for the showcase and I sent you pictures, but you haven’t even said anything about them, so I decided to call you," Anna explained, sounding a little impatient but still cheery.John blinked, then quickly realised it was already afternoon. The entire day had slipped through his fingers—his thoughts consumed by the upcoming dinner and what his grandfather might say. He hadn’t checked a single message.While Anna spoke, he minimized the call window and glanced at his notifications."Geez… twenty messages? Is the world ending or what?" John exclaimed, startled.His s
Let’s Make It Official
John stood still, eyes wide, his chest rising and falling faster than normal. He had to pinch himself once, twice, and a third time just to confirm that he was still alive and that everything around him wasn’t some elaborate dream."Shit!" he whispered unconsciously, overwhelmed by the magnificence before him.He was standing at the edge of a glimmering bridge leading to what looked like a castle on water, floating gracefully at the centre of a perfectly manicured garden. It didn’t look real. The light bouncing off the glass-like surface of the water reflected the structure’s symmetry and impossible design—sharp edges blended with organic curves, marble mixed with glass, and green vines scaling the stone walls as if they were part of the plan all along.It defied every rule of architecture and logic.John didn’t even need to ask. He could already feel Mr Carter’s fingerprint all over it."Young master, this way please," came a voice from beside him.John turned his head slowly, still
Beginning of a New Era
“Who the heck is this man, and how many doors does this bloody house have?” John thought, his brows furrowed as he stared in disbelief at the man who’d just stepped out of the revolving bookshelf.The walls behind the shelf were lined with guns rows upon rows of firearms ranging from sleek, modern models to vintage pieces that looked like they belonged in a spy museum. Some were familiar, others completely alien to him. Each one gleamed under the soft lights, polished to perfection, mounted like trophies or warnings, he wasn’t sure which.John swallowed hard. Whatever the reason, it was clear now that this house—this fortress—wasn’t just a home. It was a stronghold. A kingdom. And he was being ushered into its throne.He straightened his posture and tried his best to look composed, realising quickly that any misstep might be taken the wrong way. Best to behave himself before he ended up one of the stories the weapons whispered.“John, meet Bruce,” his grandfather said, walking forward
Mr Carter:The Force
“What is the meaning of this?” John exclaimed, his voice sharp as he stared at his phone screen.The headline on the event bulletin flashed ominously in bold red text: “Showcase Date Moved: New Date – Day After Tomorrow”His fingers clenched around the phone.He knew exactly who was behind this: Jerry and Noel. The pair had a history of pulling strings behind the scenes, twisting timelines, and sabotaging competitors. It didn’t take a genius to see their fingerprints all over this. The sudden schedule shift wasn’t a coincidence; it was warfare.Still, John wasn’t fazed.He had seen this coming.From the moment his name was submitted for the elite car showcase, he had prepared not just to compete but to win. He didn’t need the extra time. His victory was being constructed with precision.“I’m not only participating,” he muttered under his breath, swiping across his phone screen, “I’m winning.”He opened his contacts and tapped on the name Mr Carter.The line rang once. Twice.Mr Carte
Change in Plans
Flustered with joy, John felt a warmth rise in his chest. His vision blurred. Without warning, a tear traced its way down his cheek.He tried to hold it in, but failed.Mr Carter, standing a few feet away, watched with a puzzled expression, clearly more confused now than when John had first entered.“Do you… not like your car?” Mr Carter asked hesitantly, unsure how else to interpret John's emotional outburst.John took a deep breath, his hand wiping his cheek quickly as he stepped forward.“I…t’s so be…au…tiful. It’s everything I dreamed of and more,” he said, the words trembling out of his throat before building into a scream. “It’s everything and more!”He rushed forward like a child seeing his favourite toy come to life, his arms stretched out as if he could hug the entire machine. His palms pressed gently on the smooth, matte finish of the car’s front hood.CLICK!“Unlocked,” the AI voice embedded within the car rang out in a calm, polished tone.John's eyes lit up in disbelief.
Chapter 17: Power on Full Display
At the Raymond mansion, silence echoed in the vast, polished corridors until the heavy, automated doors of the walk-in closet opened.The room wasn’t a closet. It was an empire of its own.John stepped into what could easily pass as a luxury designer showroom. Spanning the size of a full-sized apartment, every wall was lined with rotating racks displaying the finest pieces from elite designers, some collections already released, others not yet unveiled to the public.There were suits from Tom Ford’s unreleased winter collection, trench coats made from limited-edition crocodile leather, and silk shirts from Dior’s one-of-a-kind archive. Louboutin, Balenciaga, Armani, Off-White, each with its own dedicated shelf, sectioned and colour-coded. Even his accessories, from diamond-encrusted cufflinks to platinum timepieces, were arranged in a tiered, staircase layout.At the center stood John. Dazed.It was too much.He had once struggled to afford secondhand sneakers, and now he stood in the
Chapter 18: Gold Limousine
The Raymond mansion was a flurry of activity, but the tension was thickest inside the tech control room. Dozens of screens glowed under the dim lights, and voices overlapped one another as the IT team worked at an impossible pace. Every person was on the phone, fingers flying across keyboards, as they tried to track down one critical piece of information about Anna’s father.John had made one request. A simple one. “Find him, and don’t stop until you do.”Fifty-two calls. That’s how many it took before someone finally broke the silence. A nurse at a small clinic on the city’s outskirts hesitantly gave the team enough clues to trace his location. Within seconds, they cross-referenced hospital records, police dispatch logs, and insurance databases until a match lit up the screen.“There!” the lead technician shouted, pointing to the display. “St. Gregory's Medical Center. Private ward. Room 806.”“Send a specialist there immediately,” he barked to his assistant, his voice rising over th
Chapter 19: The Trap
The glint from the mirror caught Anna’s eye as she turned her face slightly to admire the full outfit. She had never looked this powerful.Dolce & Gabbana had outdone themselves.The sequined bodysuit was a custom one-off design, tailored to hug every dip and rise of her perfectly sculpted hourglass frame. Each seam sparkled under her vanity lights, embedded with hand-stoned embellishments shaped like miniature car insignias—a nod to the automotive theme of the competition. She paired it with thigh-high leather boots, a pair of dark-tinted cat-eye shades, and a thin belt of diamonds around her waist.It wasn’t just a look. It was a statement.She took a few selfies in front of the golden velvet drapes she had specially installed in her dressing room for this moment. Click. Click. Another. Then, a full-body mirror boomerang for her story. The backdrop of neon lights, a perfectly positioned perfume bottle, and a glass of champagne completed the aesthetic. If tonight was a battlefield, s
Chapter 20: I Said I Was Either Dead or Going to Hell
Anna was barely ten minutes away from the event venue when her eyes caught a familiar license plate ahead of her. She squinted. Her heart leaped. It was Collins.She honked twice, hoping to get his attention. As her car slowed behind his, she remembered the missed call from him earlier. She had seen it while finishing her makeup, but in the flurry of getting dressed and adjusting every stoned detail of her Dolce & Gabbana bodysuit, it had completely slipped her mind to return the call.Her car, a fully customised luxury ride fitted with a built-in AI assistant, responded as she gave the command. “Call Collins.”The dashboard lit up. The soft beep of the dialling sound filled the silence before his voice came through.“Heyy girl! Where’ve you been? And what’s with the crying emoji on your story?” Collins asked, light-hearted and curious.Anna forced a laugh, trying to mask the heaviness in her voice. “It’s nothing too much... My dad got involved in a plane crash, but—John handled it.”