All Chapters of The Betrayed Professional: Elian Athen's System Awakening: Chapter 11
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Chapter 11 – System of Betrayal and Integrity
The vacuum no longer spoke.It was filled with a low, thrumming vibration, the thunder of a huge engine accelerating from the bottom of emptiness. Elian Athen did not awaken so much as he was restarted. Perception slammed into him not as a golden dawn, but as a lightning strike. The physical ache of hunger, the chill ache of rain, the crushing weight of hopelessness—all were stripped away. Or better still, it was listed, recorded, and stored as data points.He was swimming in a sea of pure blackness, but he was seeing his own hands, white and whole, before him. The rot, the filth, the shakes—vanished."Integrity logged," a voice said. It was not male or female, not human or divine. It was simple information, presented as sound—cold, mechanical, absolute. It originated from everywhere and nowhere, resonating in the very core of his being."Betrayal registered."Elian was shocked, or felt the specter of shocking. His eyes, or the impression of them, opened wider. The shadow before him b
Chapter 12 – The First Quest
The emptiness did not reclaim him. Instead, Elian Athen forced himself awake through a haze of constant, cyan light. The announcements that had declared his rebirth were gone, but their stamp remained in a permanent, ghostly exhibit seared into the very fabric of his perception. In the lower left of his field of view, a pulsing status bar: [Vitality: 12%]. In the lower right, another: [Willpower: 9%]. They were not metaphors; they were quantifiable realities, as real to him now as the damp, cold concrete he rested against.The storm still stormed. The rain still came down in relentless sheets, and the wind screamed its scorn under the bridge. But the bitter cold, the bone-freezing chill that had been draining the life from him, was… contained. It was still present, a body sense, but not the kiss of death anymore. His physical body, while weakened, no longer trembled with spasmodic convulsions. Low-grade, systems-whir of energy was maintaining his vital systems humming, fighting the hy
Chapter 13: The Bread of Shame
The first assignment, {Acknowledge Your Truth}, had been an earthquake jolt to his spirit, a brutal, system-based therapy session that stripped him naked but lighter, somehow. The sorrow was still a physical burden in his chest, a cold rock of loss, but the choking mist of self-deceit had lifted. He could view the wreckage of his life with a wincing, crystalline clarity.This new quest, having appeared in shining, unbreakable runes the moment the first was checked off as done, was not the same. It was practical, to the point, and entirely degrading.New Quest Earned: 'The Foundation of Dignity'Task: Pay for your first earned meal with sweat of the body. Begging or thievery will result in penal measures.Reward: +1 Stamina, 1 Copper Integrity Credit. Failure: System withdrawal for 24 hours.With bodily labor, Elian groaned, his own voice a dry rasp in the wind of morning. The System was unkind to poetry. It did not want him trading a handful of loose naira for food; no, he needed to
Chapter 14: The Architecture of Ascension
The unadorned, unshakeable fullness in his belly was a surprise. For months, each meal had been an elegantly whispered secret, an exchange flavored with the bitter trace of failure—a reluctant offering from a past peer, the final residue of his funds spent on greasy, unfilling food that accomplished nothing to fill the empty space within. This was different, though. The oranges and moi moi stayed in him like a pillar, burdened by the weight of hard work. The five-hundred-naira note, wadded in his pocket, was worth more than all the paychecks he had ever received. It was clean.Straddling the low parapet, the disorder of the market fading into the distance, Elian allowed himself a moment to be still. He closed his eyes, not out of defeat, but in focus. He concentrated within, to the quiet, shining buildings which had unfolded in his mind. It had left him in a panic and confusion once. Now, it was a tool. And Elian Athen, in annihilation, had always been adept at learning to operate too
Chapter 15: The Unbreaking Lull
Survival's beat was a new, unfamiliar melody in Elian's heart. The five-hundred-naira note was a treasure hidden, the bottle of water a luxury. He walked with a purpose that had nothing to do with a point and everything to do with a destination: the feeling of solid ground under his feet. The ghost weight of the crates was a pleasant memory in his muscles, a reminder of his resilience. For the first time in a year, his head didn't ring like a mad, screaming chorus of regret and despair. It was filled with data, with levels, with the soft hum of possibility.He cut across the congested market street and took a quieter path that would lead him towards the bridge, to the empty spot under the overpass where he currently lived. The path ran past the reflective glass front of a new financial complex, a monument to the very world that had rejected him. The irony was not lost on him. He was a ghost of its own making, passing through its high-shine, germ-free now.He kept his head lowered, not
Chapter 16: Garbage and Glory
The world had turned on its axis. The mockery of Tunde and Femi no longer rang in his head as rebuke, but as fuel. Their scorn had been coaxed through the System and converted into Resolve, cold hard cash of will that now supported his every step. He patrolled the city not as a ghost but as an inspector in hostile lands, senses on edge, Analysis talent a steady, subconscious hum in his mind.His "home" under the bridge had become less of a shelter of hopelessness and more of a forward operating base. It was there, in the darkest before-dawn, that he made his inventory. Not of possessions—he had none—but of himself. Stamina: 6. Resolve: 11. The numbers were a mantra. He was no longer just Elian; he was a work in progress.The quest for an "honest meal" had turned into a daily survival routine with a mission. Mama Chidi had been as good as her promise. He'd appear at her stall every morning, and there was always something for him to do: pacifying the cranky plantain driver, whose bombas
Chapter 17: The Currency of Words
The world hadn't simply changed; it had added a dimension. In the wake of the unstated, earthquake triumph of the Nysos exposé, Elian walked through Lagos with a different vision. Lagos's chaos wasn't a barrier to his survival anymore; it was an opportunity market, a system of city issues interconnected and waiting for the right key to unlock them. The 150 Integrity Points throbbed in the periphery of his vision, a reservoir of strength he hadn't yet even started to tap. The Whistleblower's Veil was a peaceful, soothing force in his mind, a serene veil over his perception which made him feel faintly less observed, faintly more ghost who could choose when to be seen.It was during the meditation one of his mornings under the bridge, reviewing his Status, that he felt the shift. His sole source of guidance up to now, the {System Initiation: Path of the Betrayed} quest line, now sported a sub-header: Stage 1: Foundation - Complete.A new line of options had opened within his Skills & Abi
Chapter 18: Protector of the Weak
The rhythm of his new life was a slender, fine one. The dawn no longer heralded yet another day of despair, but a series of small, surmountable obstacles. The four hundred and fifty naira that Mr. Gowon offered him was not just cash; it was a promise. It was proof that his brain, the very instrument his betrayers had deemed old-fashioned, was being remolded into a keener, stronger one. The Negotiation ability hummed at the edges of his consciousness, a new lens through which he interpreted all transactions.His horizons had now broadened from the marketplace to the store of provisions, a small but essential territorial gain. That night, he walked back to his bridge, not with the stumbling gait of the defeated, but with the deliberate stride of the man who surveyed his kingdom. He took another route, a one that wound through a labyrinth of dirty, unpaved side streets running behind the city's central market—a world where the city's shiny facade gave way to rough, raw brick and stench o
Chapter 19: The Road to Restoration
A man's value in Lagos had too frequently been a suit, a car, an address. Elian Athen had lost the three, all he had left with what the city saw of his pieces: a worn shirt, dirty trousers, and the vacant-eyed look of defeat. But now the pieces were shifting, reforming into something else, and the city, in its own subdued way, was taking notice.The whispers started at Mama Chidi’s stall.“See him?” a woman buying plantains would murmur to her friend, her eyes darting towards Elian as he effortlessly hefted a sack of rice that would make two younger men stagger. “That one. They say he was a big man before. Now, look at his eyes. No more sorrow. Only… fire.”The plantain merchant, whose bluster Elian had toppled with a few crisp, irrefutable questions posed in his Negotiation skill, now simply nodded respectfully and handed over the consignment note without protest. "Oga Elian," he'd address him, the title no longer derisive, but respect.At God's Will Ventures, Mr. Gowon had begun to
Chapter 20: The Unmasking
The Path of Restoration was not a straight path. It was a series of small, measured steps, such as a bricklayer laying bricks. A new shirt. An open door. A naira saved. The Foresight talent was a steady hum in the back of Elian's mind, a different way of thinking that allowed him to see beyond the immediate need for food or shelter. He began to plan, considering the ecology of the area, the flows of favor and information. Tade, the street boy, was a familiar, welcome visitor by now, his sharp eyes and ears a valuable source of the street's beneath-the-surface realities.Tade arrived with the news, his small face furrowed in concern. "Oga Elian, they are having a party. At the new party hall by the lagoon. Your. your old people."Elian's hands, that had been mending a rip in his second-best shirt, still. "My old people?" he asked, although he already knew."The men with nice cars. The one, T-Boy. And the other, Femi. They are getting ready to celebrate a big deal. Everyone is saying it