All Chapters of REDEMPTION SYSTEM : I Choose to Sin Again: Chapter 21
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Part 21: Ghosts of the Past
Smoke was still chasing them when Darin kicked open an emergency door and dragged Rian into an underground service corridor.Strip lights flickered.Water dripped from leaking pipes.Their footsteps echoed, heavy and uneven.Mara covered their rear, firing wildly back toward the repair shop door before sprinting after them.A small blast followed from a flash grenade.White light flared down the tunnel.“Move!” Darin shouted.They ran.Rian wheezed, his breathing short and fast. Darin carried him for a moment, then set him down again when the corridor narrowed.“Run on your own,” he ordered.“I… I’m tired”“If you stop, you die.”Rian clenched his teeth and forced his legs to move.Behind them, heavy footsteps followed, more than one.Hunter units.Not cartel.The formation was too tight.Darin glanced back and caught black silhouettes moving through the smoke, reflective helmets, long-barreled rifles.The Warden’s forces.He grabbed Mara and pulled her aside.“Take Route B.”“It’s cu
part 22 Purge Operation
The black convoy moved without sirens.Vehicle lights were off.Only steel silhouettes glided slowly through the tunnel.Darin pulled Rian behind a concrete pillar and pressed the boy to the floor.“Quiet.”Rian nodded quickly, holding his breath.Darin peeked through a narrow gap.Four light armored vehicles.Two unmarked vans.Personnel dismounted in synchronized, silent movements, trained, wearing dark helmets, heavy vests, and suppressed automatic rifles.Not police.Not cartel.Internal units.The force used when the city wants something erased without a trace.Darin knew that style.He had once worked alongside them.Once.After that, an entire district vanished from the map.“Brother…” Rian whispered, barely audible. “Are they bad?”Darin did not answer.He checked his pistol, three rounds left, and the broken knife still tucked at his waist.He took a slow breath.They began to fan out.Two units swept the left side of the tunnel, one climbed to the upper track, the rest seale
CHAPTER 23: The Point of No Return
Darkness.Not just the lights going out.A darkness that felt deliberate, as if the entire building was holding its breath at once.Darin stood frozen in the middle of the empty shopping mall corridor. Emergency lights were dead, escalators locked at an awkward angle, and the storefront glass reflected their shapes like ghosts.Rian clutched his sleeve.“Brother…” The boy’s voice was barely there.Darin raised the pistol.Empty.He tossed it aside.The broken knife was still in Rian’s hand.“Hold it tight,” Darin whispered. “If I go down, you run to the back.”“I don’t want to—”“Rian.”Darin’s tone hardened.Rian fell silent.In the distance, the echo of boots came from multiple directions.They were coming in.Not sweeping anymore.They were surrounding them.Darin pulled Rian into an abandoned electronics store filled with empty shelves and dangling labels that hung like exposed entrails. He lowered the rolling door halfway, leaving a narrow slit to see through.Dark shapes passed
CHAPTER 24: The Unfair Choice
The floodlights bleached everything white.The air in the alley felt stretched too tight, as if one wrong move could snap it apart.Darin stood at the threshold of the metal stall, hands half raised, his breathing heavy and uneven. In front of him, dozens of gun barrels locked onto his body from every angle.Behind him, Rian.Out there, Loma.The scar-faced commander stepped forward casually, as if this were not an ambush but a meeting he had planned for a long time.“You’ve caused us quite a bit of trouble,” he said lightly.Darin did not answer. His eyes were fixed only on Loma.The woman knelt on the asphalt, her hands bound behind her back, her lips split open. One eye was already turning blue. Yet when she saw Darin, she still managed to shake her head slightly.Don’t.The movement was so small it was almost invisible.Almost.But Darin saw it, and something inside his chest tightened.The commander followed his gaze and smiled faintly. “She’s stubborn. Even after we asked nicely
CHAPTER 25: Seventeen Percent
The smile appeared without warmth.Thin and sharp, completely unnatural for a situation like this.The commander caught it immediately.His brow lowered slightly. “You think this is funny?”Darin did not answer.Behind his consciousness, the whisper was still there.Seventeen percent.A terrible number.But not zero.Darin’s breathing slowed as his eyes moved rapidly, scanning the alley washed white by the floodlights.Helicopter above.Twelve shooters on the rooftops.Six in the front alley.Four on the left side.Three behind the tactical vehicle.Total, too many.If this were the old Darin, he would have already chosen the fastest, bloodiest path. But now there was Rian. The boy’s small fingers still clutched his shirt, trembling.“Brother…” Rian whispered, almost soundless.Darin did not look back.His focus was locked.The commander raised a hand slightly. “Five seconds.”The threat was calm and certain, no need to shout.This man was used to killing.Darin finally spoke, low.“Y
CHAPTER 26: Forced Intervention
The world suddenly felt folded.Not ordinary darkness.Not unconsciousness either.Everything seemed to rewind for a fraction of a second, then lurch forward far too fast.Gunfire still rang out.The floodlights still blinded.Rian still stood at the end of the alley with three red laser dots fixed on his back.But for Darin, everything slowed.Not completely stopped, just slow enough to feel wrong.[Forced intervention protocol active.][Duration limited.][Do not waste it.]The system’s tone was no longer a passive whisper.There was pressure in it now, like something being forced to work harder than it should.Darin had no time to analyze.His instincts moved immediately.His body exploded forward.His first step slammed into the asphalt with inhuman speed.The soldier nearest to him had not even finished raising his weapon when Darin was already past him.One elbow.BRAK.Helmet cracked.Body dropped.The second step came lower.He slid beneath another rifle barrel, his shoulder s
CHAPTER 27: When the Body Became His Again
THUD!A straight punch struck Darin’s shoulder with precise, practiced force. His body was knocked half a step back, his heel scraping across the wet asphalt.Rian jolted from behind the container.“Brother!”“QUIET!” Darin barked harshly without turning.He had no room for gentleness now.The commander casually rolled his wrist, as if he had just been testing his opponent’s strength.“Mmm,” he murmured. “Now you feel more… normal.”Those gray eyes locked on, reading the situation as if Darin were prey.Darin spat lightly to the side. Thick blood showed. His body was fully his own again.That meant everything was slow again.Pain began returning to the places the system had frozen earlier.Damn.He shifted slightly to the left.Forcing the commander to adjust his angle while trying to buy time.Rian was still alive.That was the priority.The troops behind the commander had not fired.Why?The answer came quickly.The commander raised a single finger.A wait signal.They wanted Darin
CHAPTER 28 Cracks Within the Bone
The sensation came half a second after the blow landed, not just pain but something deeper. As if something inside Darin’s body had shifted out of place. His breath was cut off harshly, and his body was thrown sideways, slamming into the wet asphalt with a loud impact.BRAK.The air rushed out of Darin’s lungs all at once. His vision trembled, but he did not pass out.Not yet.The Commander did not pursue.Instead, he stood calmly a few steps from where Darin had fallen, observing him like a scientist watching the reaction of an experiment.“Left rib,” he said flatly. “At least cracked, maybe worse.”The tone was cold and irritating.Darin forced in a long breath that failed, sharp pain stabbing through his chest as it expanded.Damn.This was not an injury he could ignore.Behind the container, Rian’s voice caught.“Brother.”The small voice wavered, nearly breaking.Darin pressed his palm against the ground and forced himself up. His movements were slower now, but still steady.He s
CHAPTER 29 An Unstable Threshold
The sensation did not come as an explosion like before, nor as a brutal surge that tore at the limits of his body.This time it was subtler and more dangerous, like a small flame burning inside his bones.Darin felt it spread from his spine to his shoulders, down his arms, then pulse through the cracked rib.The pain did not disappear. It felt even clearer. But beneath it, there was a thin current of unstable strength.The system spoke again without emotion.[Partial stabilization.][Limited time.]Not full intervention. Not total berserk.Something in between.Darin’s body was still heavy, but now it obeyed.He lifted his head just as three rifle barrels aimed at Rian’s small back as the boy ran.No time to think.He stepped.The asphalt shuddered under the force of Darin’s stride as his body shot into the line of fire.Gunshots exploded.BANG! BANG!Darin twisted midair, dragging one soldier in as a human shield for a split second before shoving him toward another shooter.Chaos eru
CHAPTER 30 The Line That Was Crossed
The Commander saw it first.The change was small, only a fraction of a second, but it was clear enough for someone used to reading an opponent.Darin’s eyes sharpened.The Commander’s punch was already close to his face when Darin moved. Not backward, not to block. He stepped inside the distance.THUD!His elbow slammed into the Commander’s chest with a force that had not been there seconds ago. The impact forced the scarred man to step back.One full step.Something that had not happened at any point during the fight.The Commander immediately stabilized himself. His eyes narrowed as he reassessed.Darin stood upright. His ribs still hurt. His breathing was still heavy. But something about the way his body moved now was different.The system spoke again.[Conditional Mode activated.]No explanation. No statistics. Just that fact.The Commander raised an eyebrow slightly. “Interesting,” he said quietly.He stepped forward again, coming fast with a straight punch, a sweeping kick, and