All Chapters of Redeeming the Broken Stars.: Chapter 11
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CHAPTER 11: THIS CAN'T BE HAPPENING.
The situation would be funny if it weren't so horrifying.He tried to sit up. Pain lanced through his torso, broken ribs from the beating, still healing. Or trying to heal, though without proper nutrition or medical care, the healing was going poorly.Movement at the alley's entrance made Kaelen freeze.A figure shuffled into view. Ancient, bent nearly double, leaning on a gnarled walking stick. A woman, though age, had eroded her gender into something more elemental. She wore rags that might once have been robes, layers of filthy cloth that could have been any color originally.But it was her eyes that caught Kaelen's attention.Completely white. Blind.Yet somehow, impossibly, she turned her sightless gaze directly toward him with the precision of someone with perfect vision.She smiled."Kaelen Ashwright," the old woman said, her voice surprisingly clear despite her appearance. "The Nine Heavens thought you dead. They were wrong…completely wrong.”“Your dad, Soren Ashwright and
CHAPTER 12: PREPARATION FOR THE TOURNAMENT:
The silence that followed Kaelen Ashwright's words hung in the alley like smoke after a fire, heavy, suffocating, refusing to dissipate.All traitors must pay dearly.He'd said it with the voice of a boy barely seventeen, rasping and rough from days of disuse, from a throat that had dried out while its original owner lay dying. But the coldness behind those words belonged to someone else entirely. Someone nineteen years old with the weight of cosmic betrayal etched into his very soul.Old Moth studied him for a long moment without speaking.The rats in the refuse pile had gone quiet.Even the distant sounds of the Mortal Coil, the shouting of merchants, the clatter of cultivation tools, the grinding poverty that constituted daily life in the lowest of the Nine Heavens, seemed to hold its breath.Then she laughed.Not a short, polite laugh. Not a gentle, grandmotherly chuckle.A real laugh, dry and rattling and ancient, rising from somewhere deep in that skeletal chest, as if she had
CHAPTER 13: THE MORTAL COIL.
Old Moth's walking stick paused for half a second, then resumed. "Yes. He did. Most people in the Mortal Coil deserve better.”“That is rather the point of everything you're about to do." She turned down a side street. "Now. The tournament."Kaelen straightened slightly despite himself. "Tell me everything.""The Tournament of Shadows," Old Moth began, her voice taking on a cadence that suggested she'd explained this before, to other students, in other times."It is held in the City of Ten Thousand Sins, which is approximately three days' travel from here by conventional means, two days if you push, and one day if you're extraordinarily motivated and don't particularly value what remains of this body's structural integrity.""When does it begin?""In eleven days. Which means you have eight days of preparation before you need to travel."She immediately paused to let a cart rumble past, then continued."The tournament is organized by Feng Crimson-Hand, formerly Elder Feng of the Blaz
CHAPTER 14: ARE YOU SCARED ALREADY?
“He isn't the only one.”"Mirael Sunwalker. Foundation Establishment cultivator, formerly of the Celestial Lake Sect. A woman.”“She entered the tournament four years ago because her daughter had been taken by Ashenfang demon hunters, and winning the pill would give her enough power to pursue them into demon territory.”“She won six rounds before a formation array specialist from the Broken Chain Sect disrupted her cultivation base from a distance." Another pause. "Her daughter is still missing." Old Moth said, her voice now dropping low to barely above whispers."Chen Two-Shadows. A cultivator of unusual heritage, half mortal, half something that the records don't specify clearly.”“He could move through shadows as if they were water. He entered the tournament of Shadows twice.”“The first time he reached the semifinals. The second time he disappeared in the middle of his fourth round match.”“No one saw him fall. No one knows where he went. The tournament records list him as 'outco
CHAPTER 15: FAR FROM HOME.
"A stabilizing compound. Your soul is still partially fragmented from the consumption process.”“The fragments that made it into this body are integrating, but they're doing so in a chaotic pattern.”“Without assistance, the integration could take months and cause considerable internal damage." She folded her hands. "With the compound, the process will be uncomfortable for approximately two hours and then largely complete.""And if I choose not to drink it?""Then you spend the next several months feeling like your soul is trying to exit your body through your eye sockets while simultaneously hosting the memories, emotional residue, and muscle memory of a dead street rat whose cultivation was destroyed through his own impatience." Old Moth's expression was tranquil. "I recommend the compound."Kaelen drank it almost immediately.It tasted like regret and metal and something that had no business being a flavor.He managed not to make a sound, because some dignities survived death and
CHAPTER. 16: NO WE ARE JUST GETTING STARTED.
"That's how Kaelen Ashwright would have fought in his original body if he'd had to fight upward, against stronger opponents." Kaelen's voice was distant, remembering Typhon's lessons about conserving power against superior foes. You are not always the strongest in the room. Learn to make that irrelevant."You were taught well," Old Moth said, and it was the first time she'd acknowledged the tragedy of that directly. Taught well. By someone who betrayed you with everything he taught you.The silence that followed had weight to it."There's something else," Kaelen said. "The tournament. The fallen men. You listed cultivators with genuine motivations, genuine reasons to enter. The woman looking for her daughter. The man trying to help his student." He looked at Old Moth steadily. "Most of the people I'll be fighting aren't villains. They're desperate people in an impossible realm trying to survive.""Yes," Old Moth said."And I'm going to have to kill them.""Yes.""That doesn't trou
CHAPTER 17: THE ENFORCERS ARRIVAL.
Three days passed in a rhythm that Kaelen would not have recognized as preparation if he hadn't been on the receiving end of it.Dawn brought Old Moth already seated at the table, the archaic scrolls open and the lantern lit, as if she'd been awake for hours or possibly hadn't slept at all.She would speak for an hour, dense and technical, covering aspects of the Essence Devouring technique that the manual's abbreviated text hadn't captured, the precise moment of contact at which absorption initiated, the way the practitioner's soul had to relax rather than grasp, the counterintuitive truth that fighting for the essence reduced efficiency while receiving it created better results."You're not taking it," she'd said on the first morning, when Kaelen had visualized the technique as a kind of aggressive reaching."You're making yourself available to it. The distinction matters more than you can currently imagine."Then came the physical work. Old Moth would have him practice the Soul Anc
CHAPTER 18: OPEN UP!
The voice that answered was male, rough, carrying the particular flavor of authority that came not from earned respect but from enforced compliance."Open up, old woman. We know the dead boy is in there."Kaelen's hands, which had been resting on the table, went still.The dead boy.Old Moth opened the door.The man who filled the doorframe was large. Not cultivator-large, not the refined power of someone who'd spent years channeling spiritual energy into their physique. This was the large of someone who'd spent their life in labor and violence, thick-shouldered and heavy-handed, the kind of large that breaks things without precision or elegance. He wore the mark of an enforcer on his chest, a crude iron badge in the shape of a clenched fist, and behind him, visible in the narrow street beyond Old Moth's door, stood more men. Kaelen counted quickly. Fifteen. Possibly more beyond his line of sight.He recognized the badge. Zain's memories surfaced with unpleasant clarity. The Enfo
CHAPTER 19: DAX, GO HOME.
Dax smiled arrogantly into Blind old Moth's face as he continued.“There's no version of this that ends with you winning.""Mmm," Old Moth said. Then: "You've been managing things in this district for, how long? Twelve years?"The question threw Dax slightly off his rhythm. "Thirteen.""Thirteen years. And in thirteen years, you've come to my door four times.""We've had occasion…”"The first time was nine years ago, when you wanted information about a demon-blooded child who'd been seen near my end of the street. I told you I hadn't seen her. You chose not to press the matter."A very slight tension in Dax's expression. "I didn't press because there was nothing to press.""The second time was six years ago. You wanted me to vacate this space because someone with more money than me wanted it for a storage facility. I declined.”“You and four men attempted to convince me otherwise." Old Moth's voice was still pleasantly conversational."You left having convinced no one. You also left
CHAPTER 20: MOTHS DON'T FLY.
"I want you to carry a message," Old Moth continued. "To Regent Voss, to the Mortal Coil Authority, to whoever in the formation cartel currently has an interest in this end of the district.”“The boy in my room is my student. He is under my protection.”“Whatever debt he carried as Zain is discharged.”“Whatever interest the Celestial Inquisitors have in forbidden cultivation will need to wait until he has left this city, and by the time he leaves, he will be beyond their comfortable reach." She paused. "And if anyone else comes to this door, I will not be nearly this considerate." Old Moth immediately said as she stared at Dax with powerful precision, even though he was blind.Dax immediately looked at his fourteen incapacitated men. Looked at Old Moth. Looked at the door of the hovel, where Kaelen had appeared in the frame, leaning on the doorjamb, watching."You're going to regret this," Dax said, and it lacked the conviction it would have had fourteen men ago."I very rarely reg