The One-Eyed Heir: Legacy of the Spirit System
Tom Burro was born with one eye clouded gray, the mark that cursed his life.
His father called it an omen. His stepmother called him a monster. His only friend was Snowly, a mysterious white dog that seemed to understand everything he said.
When Tom’s mother died under strange circumstances, he was abandoned and left to rot in a crumbling orphanage. His half-brother, Gabby Miles Burro, inherited everything, wealth, reputation, and the Burro name, and used it to make Tom’s life a private hell.
But on the night Gabby nearly beat him to death, something awoke inside the “bad eye.”
The world slowed. The air shimmered. And a voice whispered inside his mind:
“The Spirit System of the Matriarchal Line has found its heir.”
Suddenly, Tom could see opportunities: glowing threads that led to fortune, danger, or salvation. Every decision revealed invisible paths, the Spiritual Economy of reality itself.
From scavenging junkyards to hacking fate, Tom begins climbing from the ashes.
But with every gain, he feels someone watching him.
The system’s power is evolving, and with it, ancient forces long buried are stirring.
Gabby’s greed isn’t just human anymore. Something ancient has chosen him too…
By the time Tom learns the truth, that his cursed eye isn’t just a gift but a key to a divine inheritance, he’ll already be trapped in a web of bloodlines, betrayal, and fate.
And Snowly, his loyal companion, might not be a dog at all
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Chapter: CHAPTER 16 — THE FACE OF THE FIRST VESSELTom could barely breathe.The armored man stood at the end of the Sanctum hall, silver flames reflecting off his mirror like eyes, the same eyes Tom saw every time he looked into water. His own eyes. His future eyes.Except this man’s spirit felt ancient. Heavy. Worn.Gabby whispered, “Tom, that guy looks like you.”Snowly stepped in front of Tom, fur bristling. “Vessel ,. Identify yourself,” he commanded, voice trembling with something close to reverence and fear.The armored man slowly removed the last clasp of his helmet.His hair fell forward long, silver white, perfectly matching Tom’s mother.His expression remained eerily calm.“I am not your enemy,” he said. “Not yet.”Tom forced himself to step forward. “Who are you?”The man tilted his head slightly. “I am the first successful Vessel of the Spirit Thread. The prototype. The beginning.”His gaze sharpened. “And you are the last.”Gabby muttered, “Great. Just great. So he’s like Tom but evil?”The man’s eyes flicked to Gabby. “I
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Chapter: CHAPTER 15 — THE WOMAN IN SILVERThe wind went still.Snow froze mid air, suspended like shards of white glass. Even the hunters stopped, rigid and unmoving, as if an invisible force had wrapped around the entire clearing.Tom stared at the hooded woman who looked exactly like his mother,only older, alive, and glowing with the same silver radiance as his bad eye.Snowly was the first to speak.His voice trembled,not in fear, but disbelief. “Liora?”Gabby blinked. “Liora? Wait,Tom’s mother? But she’s,”“Dead?” the woman finished, lowering her hood fully. Her hair spilled out,long, silver white, untouched by time. Her eyes glowed like polished moonstone. “I was supposed to be.”Tom couldn’t breathe. His chest tightened painfully. His voice cracked. “M-Mom?”The woman’s expression softened with both pride and sorrow. “Tom. My son.”The words hit him like a punch.Tom stepped forward, legs shaking.“You,but you died. I saw your grave. They told me,Father told me,Snowly said,”Snowly bowed his head. “Tom, I never lied. I tr
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Chapter: CHAPTER 14 — THE BOY WHO REFUSED TO BREAKSnow covered the abandoned field like a thin white shroud .Tom Burro’s breathing came in ragged bursts as he pushed himself up from the frozen dirt.Bruises darkened his ribs.Blood trickled from his lip.But he stood.He always stood.Snowly, his white guardian dog, paced in front of him, fur bristling and glowing faintly. “Tom,” the dog warned, voice low and ancient, “we must leave. Now.”Tom wiped the blood from his mouth. “No. I’m done running.”Because the person walking toward them calm and amused was Gabby Miles Burro.His adopted brother and tormentor.The same boy who once tried to drown him in the well behind their old home and the very boy who believed he deserved everything Tom didn’t.Gabby stopped a few paces away and smiled. “Look at you. Still breathing. Still pretending you’re something more than a broken eyed freak.”Tom didn’t react. “If you are here to kill me, do it. Otherwise, stop wasting breath.”Gabby chuckled. “You think I came here just for that little ple
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Chapter: CHAPTER THIRTEEN – Heart Thread CollapseWhite light consumed everything, Sound and Air vanished while Time paused.Tom felt weightless ,like his body had separated from the world,floating between existence and nothingness. His heart thread pulsed erratically inside his chestlike a broken drum.“Corruption Saturation: 97%, 98%, WARNING,HEART THREAD UNSTABLE”Tom tried to breathe, but air wouldn’t come. “Tom!”A distant voice, a woman's voice Frantic, Breaking.The Soul Anchor.He forced his eyes to open.It was Blurry, too much Light and Pain as reality rushed back.He collapsed onto shattered concrete, clutching his chest. Blue threads around his body flickered like dying sparks.Snowly’s white fur bristled, teeth bared. “TOM, MOVE!”Gabby was still midstrike ,a crimson spear of condensed corruption inches from Tom’s heart.The city trembled beneath the force of it.The Soul Anchor threw herself in front of Tom,“NO,!” Tom managed to choke out,but Gabby’s spear was already descending ,Crimson, Sharp and Unstoppable. As Tim
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Chapter: CHAPTER TWELVE – The Breaking PointThe city was no longer a city but a battlefield made of threads as Blue lines hummed across rooftops.Silver threads pulsed like living veins.Crimson cracks tore through the ground like a wounded beast bleeding rage into the night.Tom Burro stood at the center of it,chest rising with each slow, heavy breath, Snowly snarling beside him, and the Soul Anchor gripping his arm, her silver thread wrapped around his like a lifeline,stitched by destiny itself. A cold wind swept through the ruins. Silence followed, it was too quiet but Snowly’s ears twitched. “He’s here.”The air suddenly tore open when Gabby stepped out of a rupture of crimson energy, threads swarming him like parasites. His smile was sharp,a predator satisfied with the terror he brought. “Well,”Gabby whispered, “look at you, little brother standing tall now.”Tom’s eye blazed white blue. “This ends tonight, Gabby.”Gabby’s laughter burst across the sky, shaking broken buildings. “Ends?"No!, not yet cause "tonight is w
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Chapter: CHAPTER ELEVEN – Tier III ThresholdThe city groaned under the aftermath of Gabby’s previous assault. Smoke and debris coated the streets, neon lights flickering through the haze.Every puddle reflected threads of energy,blue, silver, crimson ,weaving a chaotic tapestry across the ruined skyline.Tom Burro crouched atop a shattered overpass, Snowly at his side, and the Soul Anchor gripping his arm. Threads of blue and silver hummed around him, pulsing with Tier II+mastery, yet something deeper stirred within the System. “Gabby’s close,”Snowly growled, nose twitching. “I can feel his crimson threads and they’re stronger, denser. He’s converging on your position. Full engagement imminent.”Tom’s eye narrowed. “Then we confront him. No more waiting.”The Soul Anchor’s silver thread pulsed in tandem with his blue. “I, I’m ready. Whatever comes, I’ll stay with you.”“Soul Anchor Synchronization: 100%. Tier II+ Fully Operational. Tier III Potential Detected , Preliminary Activation Available.”From the misty streets below, G
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