All Chapters of Criminal mind: Chapter 11 - Chapter 20
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Missing thumbs
Chapter 11Jay POV The clicking sound of cameras and it light made me rub my headThis case is on a whole new level. "The MOT,target and everything is the same" Drake whispered to me."The case of the missing thumb,i don't know we will one day be taking this case" he added From what I heard, the missing thumb is a cold case from 20 years ago.I don't know how it resurfaced again. Now we have to find the culprit from 20 years ago.Old cases are the hardest to solve. How in the world are we supposed to find someone from twenty years ago? It was hard to get evidence then though the world had changed now maybe we could solve it."The left thumb was cut off and she died from a stab in her throat, even the victim was the same.I think that case from 20 years ago,it can't be a copycat." Claire explained. I nodded in understanding but something doesn't seem right,I don't know much about the missing thumb so I will have to go read about it. "For now we will try to
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Gangsters
Chapter 12Jay POV I saw it clearly though his thumb was wrapped with bandage but it obviousI grew restless and couldn't wait to talk to him. "Drake deals with the kids, I need to see this one" I pointed to the boy.I pulled him into Ariel's office while she followed beside us puzzled. "Jay,what did you want with him?" Ariel asked, confused."Sit" I ordered and he sat"Your name?""It Jeffrey""Ohh I see,Jeff, how did you get your left thumb cut off or were you born that way?" I threw the question without hesitation. Ariel widened her eyes in shock and looked at Jeff's hand."I don't notice it" she whispered almost to herself. "My thumb was cut when I was little," he replied without much reaction."By who?""The murderer of my Mom,I was just a year old then" he spoke without emotion. "Is it the left thumb Murderer?" I asked to be sure."Yes,we lived in that neighborhood then,my Mom was also a victim"he added"The case has been 20 years, how old are you?""I'm 21"
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Mr Steve
Chapter 13Jay POV I know Ariel can't disobey the higher ups and the gangster must have been arrested and let go multiple times. I was planning on getting them arrested and sentenced to jail but this isn't the time, I still have a cold case to solve and that is my concern for now. Sorting out evidence,information and suspects on the board helps make things easier. I listed out the suspects from twenty years again and found out some are dead,some sick,some old and the normal between them are living their life so it can't be them. I know there's something I was missing,a clue I ignored,that clue is the key to all the doors I have been trying to open. I started from the first victim again and started reading the statements made by the neighborhood then. ( I saw him that evening when I greeted him,he ignored me,I felt there's something on his mind so I just let him Maybe I should have talked to him to find out what's wrong,maybe just maybe I would have been
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The victims
Chapter 13Jay POV I groaned and held my head,I was feeling headache I hissed and slowly opened my eyes. I blinked my eyes and try to see where I was.'White wall,white ceiling,curtain and beds, I must be at the hospital' I thought. I raised up with difficulty and gritted my teeth to endure the pain."Why are you up?" Ariel stood by the door staring at me she looked annoyed."I'm fine just a lil beating won't…." "Lil beating,you were kicked till you fainted and you call it little.you must not value your body,you have to be in good health to solve cases,if you fell ill and die,our team will move on and we will still solve cases" she was trying hard to suppress her anger. "I know,I have to be well but I need to do…..""Who asked you to approach Azchem patient? Jay you might die if you aren't careful!" She yelled and sniffle,I don't see that coming I was shocked Ariel was crying.the ice Queen was crying"Are you crying?""It all your fault" she came beside me a
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Miss Carmen
Chapter 15Jay POV "Any relatives of his? Or any friend of his?" I asked Drake. "The only relative he has was his sister and she lives alone,she works daily to feed herself and that was why she took him to the nursing home as to have time to make money and take care of him" Drake explained "then it must be her" I made a wild guess."What about her?" Drake looked at me confused. "She must be the one that was raped,remember how he reacted even though he has Alchezimer,it must be someone close to him and he only has one relative which is her so she must be the one and if am right she's 60 which means 40 then" I elaborated and Drake nodded in understanding."So we should find her right?""Yes we should" "Hmm her Address is… give me a moment" I watched as his hands danced on the keyboard,he's really fast.but not so fast I can tell every key he taps.He clicked enter,and all her information popped up.Name :Miss Carmen Drew Age : 60 years oldAddress : 16 FamigoRel
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The truth about the matter
Chapter 16Jay POV"Vanessa was a cheerful, she quite energic for her age,she's always giggling she's the most happiest thing that happened to me, Steve himself loved her,even though I was a single mother I was happy,she was my joy"Miss Carmen had calmed down,she was cleaning her tears with tissue."If she is still alive now,she would be 38,she probably will be married and I could have had grandchildren, Steve won't have been this sick" she blew her nose and continued."That day my baby came home crying, in sweat,with smell of sex,she was bleeding from her private part.I had to take her to the hospital down the street.when Steve came back home that day.the first time he asked was who did it. Vanessa told him and he lost his reasoning. That day I thought my daughter was lying,Adams is a good man he's an angel" she broke into sob again,I didn't interrupt,I waited for her to let out the pain and anger."Steve took a machete planning to kill him that night,I followed him to stop him to t
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Second victim
Chapter 17Jay POVMom quarreled with me when I got home last night, she nagged and nagged,explaining how important it is for me to get well.I tried as much as possible to explain to her that I am well but she wasn't hearing any of it.She locked the main door last night and kept the key but I jumped out of my window this morning and came to the station.I've got a lot to do anyways.It is time to find the person to uncover all the mystery.The last time I was checking the statement I saw the one of the neighborhood aunty she made a statement for everyone of the victims.Her statement was simple and clear,she did not support them nor did she accuse them she only said(Whatever they did wrong, no one deserved to be killed in that brutal way)I asked Drake to check on her and she lives in the neighborhood even though she has become very old now she must know something but I don't know if she can remember.Thank God she doesn't have Alc like Mr Steve. I can't afford to be beaten up again
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Secret Mission
Chapter 18Jay POV"Mama Coco,just tell him,how will they catch the culprit if you hide her story?" Betty was helping me convince her."Her story shouldn't be heard,I don't want the culprit to be caught. He helped clear a lot of mess." Mama coco closed her eyesBetty pleaded and pleaded but she wasn't gonna tell."Mama coco,we need to find the culprit. The victim from the last 3 weeks needs justice. If the culprit isn't found, how will give her justice?" I use the last card I had.She slowly opened her eyes"Right Diana is innocent,she shouldn't be killed that way and the only way to make her rest in peace is to catch her culprit" I nodded and she looked down and fixed her eyes on the flowers planted beside the house."Gwen i must say is the most disgusting human being I have ever seen,she pretend to be mother Theressa in the day and a whore in the night""She helped women with house and feeding but pleasured herself with their husband behind their back. They thought she was doing the
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The Caribbeans
Chapter 19Jay POVI yawned and stretched. we finally arrived in New York."Drake, Drake" I nudged him and he opened his eyes and closed it.I slapped him across his face and he woke up startled."We've arrived " Drake looked around and nodded,we took our bags and prepared to leave."Don't forget to come over to my café" the old woman remained"I definitely will," Drake vowed while I shaked my head.We came down off the train and started looking for the officers that were supposed to welcome us."Why are you ignoring me?" Drake askedI kept shut and continued looking."Jay""Jay am talking to you" I still ignored him."Because you cracked a few cases you must feel on top of the world" he scoffs,I don't know Drake is this stupid."You still don't get it,do you? You let us out and we might…." Before I could complete what I was trying to say.I heard a loud horn and screams from the crowd then aloud scream and just like that someone was gone."Did...did...you see...that?" Drake was sweat
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Preparation
Chapter 20Jay POV"Drake let go" "No""Drake I need to see that man's condition" I almost pushed it away.He reluctantly let go of my arm and I crawled to the man that was shot.I felt his pulse,he's still alive, that was a relief.I tore his shirt and covered the bullet wound.It needs to be removed but we can't right now.I can hear children crying and women wailing,the men were trying to be strong though."Careful Jay" Drake yelled and I rolled on the floor away from the man who got shot.The bullet hit where I was earlier and I breathed in relief."I'm with the police everyone, backup will come in 10 minutes just hold on" I showed my ID and took out my phone."Jane,we need backup,the address is….""Sweet pastries right? we are on the way" she answered before I could continue."5 minutes,just give me 5 minutes," she added."Ok,we are waiting" I hung up and looked in the direction where the shots were coming from.It's a tall building opposite the pastries shop but I can't see or t
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