All Chapters of What Remains Unsaid: Chapter 1
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11 chapters
Chapter One- The Call
The phone rang just as the fog began to rise over the hills. I was halfway through my second cup of coffee, the kind that tastes more like rust than caffeine, when the sound cut through the silence of my small cottage. The clock on the wall read 2:47 a.m. Calls at that hour never brought good news.“Detective Crowe,” I answered, my voice rough from sleep.“Sir,” came the voice of Officer Grant from the station. “We’ve got a situation out by Miller’s Creek. A woman’s been found dead. It looks… bad.”The line went quiet for a moment. I could hear the distant hum of radios on his end, and the soft rustle of papers.“Who found her?” I asked.“Neighbor. Said she heard shouting around midnight but didn’t check until she saw the front door open.”I jotted the address down with a shaking hand. My first thought wasn’t about the crime, it was about who lived near Miller’s Creek. A faint ache stirred in my chest, one I hadn’t felt in years.“Name of the victim?” I asked, though some part of me a
Chapter Two-The Unsaid
The morning sky hung heavy with rain when I reached the station. The countryside always looked peaceful after a storm, but peace has a way of lying, it hides the rot underneath. I parked beside the patrol cars and sat there for a moment, watching the droplets run down the windshield.Inside, the station smelled of old wood and stale coffee. The kind of scent that clings to your clothes. A few officers nodded as I walked in, their voices low, eyes full of sympathy. Everyone already knew who the victim was. Small towns carry news faster than light.Detective Lee was waiting in the hallway, a file tucked under her arm. “He’s here,” she said quietly. “Marcus Hale. We put him in Interview Room Two.”I nodded but didn’t move.“You sure you’re up for this?” she asked, searching my face.“I’m fine,” I said, forcing a small smile. “I’ve handled worse.”She didn’t look convinced, but she didn’t press. Lee was good like that, she let silence do the asking.Marcus was seated at the metal table, h
Chapter Three-Clues And Shadow
The rain had washed the fields clean by morning, leaving the air sharp and thin with mist. Miller’s Creek stretched quiet under a gray sky, its stillness heavy, watchful. I drove slowly, the tires hissing over wet gravel, the cold biting through the cracked window.Sleep had been impossible. Every time I closed my eyes, Lydia’s face reappeared, pale, unblinking, the faint curve of fear still etched on her lips.By the time I reached her house again, the forensics van was parked by the gate. Yellow tape cordoned off the path, fluttering in the wind. A couple of neighbors lingered behind their fences, whispering the same question over and over: Did her husband do it?Detective Lee met me on the porch, notepad under her arm, expression steady but grim.“They’ve finished the sweep,” she said. “No forced entry. Only the victim’s and her husband’s prints inside.”I raised an eyebrow. “No sign of anyone else?”She shook her head. “None. But there’s something else, something you should see.”
Chapter Four-The Interrogation
The interrogation room was small and bare, lit by a single fluorescent light that buzzed faintly above the table. The rain had started again, whispering against the windows. I preferred it that way, rain softened the edges of sound, made confessions feel inevitable.Marcus sat across from me, shoulders slumped, fingers laced together. His clothes were rumpled, eyes red from lack of sleep. He looked less like a killer and more like a man already broken by the weight of his own thoughts.Lee stood near the door, quiet, pen ready. She didn’t speak, but I could feel her eyes on both of us, watching, judging.I opened the file in front of me, spreading the photographs across the table. Lydia’s body. The rug. The blood. The torn fabric. I let the images rest between us like an open wound.“Marcus,” I began, my tone measured. “We’ve gone over this before, but I need you to walk me through the night of the murder again. Every detail.”He rubbed his forehead. “I already told you, I left for Gl
Chapter Five-The Media Storm
By the next morning, the town wasn’t quiet anymore.News travels fast in small places, faster than truth, faster than reason. The local radio carried Lydia Hale’s name before dawn, and by midday, her husband’s face was on every screen in the county.MARCUS HALE IN CUSTODY FOR WIFE’S MURDER. The headline ran across the paper like a verdict.When I walked into the station, two journalists were waiting outside, cameras ready despite the drizzle. They didn’t care about the facts; they wanted the image, the story of another husband turned monster.Inside, the bullpen buzzed with low voices and the hum of printers. Lee was already at her desk, scrolling through reports. Her hair was tied back, her expression unreadable.“Busy morning,” I said, setting my coat aside.“They’ve been calling nonstop,” she replied. “The Gazette, Channel Seven, even the Chronicle from the city. Everyone wants a quote.”“Let them wait.”She looked up. “They won’t. They’re saying it’s an open-and-shut case. You’ll
Chapter Six-Fractures
The days that followed blurred into one another. The town moved on, but the echoes hadn’t faded. Every café, every corner, every conversation carried Marcus Hale’s name like a whisper.At the station, the energy changed. People smiled when they saw me, pats on the back, quiet congratulations. They called it closure. I called it fragile.Lee was different, though. She didn’t smile much anymore.She came into my office late one afternoon, a file tucked under her arm. The blinds were half-drawn, strips of gray light cutting across the desk.“I’ve been going through the case notes again,” she said.I leaned back in my chair. “Still can’t sleep?”Her lips twitched. “Something like that.”She opened the folder and slid a page toward me, a forensics report. “Look here,” she said, tapping a line with her finger. “The fingerprint match on the window frame, one of them was partial. It’s only a 60% probability match for Marcus.”“That’s still within range,” I said.“It is. But the partial was li
Chapter Seven- The Cracks Deepen
The morning fog clung to the station like a ghost that refused to leave.When I stepped out of my car, Lee was already by the front steps, a coffee in hand and that look in her eyes — the one that meant she’d found something she shouldn’t have.“Morning,” I said.“Alan,” she replied flatly. “We need to talk.”Inside, she led me to the briefing room. The blinds were drawn, light thin and gray across the table. She laid a file down between us.“Remember the evidence log you signed the night Lydia’s phone came in?” she asked.I nodded slowly.“The timestamp doesn’t match your shift records,” she said. “It’s off by nearly two hours.”“That’s a system glitch,” I said. “It happens all the time.”“Maybe.” She tilted her head. “But I checked the CCTV footage from that night. You were still at the house when the entry was logged. Which means someone else signed it under your name, or you returned later without logging it.”The air between us went still. I forced my tone calm. “What exactly are
Chapter Eight-Echoes Of The Truth
The courthouse in Miller’s Creek was older than the town itself, stone walls, heavy doors, and the faint smell of damp wood that never left no matter the season.When Marcus Hale walked in that morning, the air shifted. He looked thinner, quieter, like someone who’d aged a lifetime behind bars. He didn’t meet my eyes, but I felt the weight of his silence.His lawyer, a sharp-eyed man from the city, placed a thick folder on the judge’s desk. “Your honor,” he began, “new forensic analysis raises serious doubts about the original investigation.”Lee sat beside me, her pen motionless above her notes.The lawyer continued. “The fabric evidence, the so-called ‘key link’ between Mr. Hale and the victim, has been proven contaminated. Chain of custody errors, improper labeling, and most importantly, missing timestamps on the original data logs.”The judge frowned. “Are you implying the evidence was tampered with?”“I’m saying,” the lawyer replied, “that it was handled carelessly. And my client
Chapter Nine-The Unravelling
The first thing I noticed when I walked into the precinct that morning was the silence. Not the usual kind, this one was heavy, deliberate. Conversations stopped when I passed. Papers shuffled louder than necessary. Someone had been talking about me.I set my coffee down on my desk and opened my laptop.The Hale case file blinked on the screen, the same one I thought I’d buried beneath a mountain of other reports. But it had been reopened. A new tag sat on the header in bold red: “Independent Review: Active.”Lee’s desk was empty, but her jacket hung on the chair. She was here somewhere.The sound of footsteps came from behind me, Chief Donnelly, flanked by two people I didn’t recognize. Suits. Not locals.“Crowe,” he said, his voice carefully neutral. “This is Agent Rosner and Inspector Hale from Internal Affairs. They’ll be going through our open and closed casework this week.”“Internal Affairs?” I forced a half-smile. “Didn’t know we were that interesting.”Rosner didn’t smile bac
Chapter Ten-The Vanishing
They started calling it “The Crowe Case” on the news the kind of irony that only small towns and gossip could twist into legend.By the time the reporters arrived at the station, I was already gone.No one saw me leave. No one stopped me.The last thing they had of me on record was a keycard swipe at 8:47 p.m., the night Lee turned in her report to Internal Affairs.She had done what she promised: told the truth.I sat in my car at the edge of Miller’s Creek, engine off, watching the reflection of the courthouse lights shimmer across the black water.The night was colder than usual, the kind that seeped into the bones and refused to leave. A storm was coming, the clouds low and bruised, pressing down on the earth.Inside the glove compartment sat the letter. My confession. Or maybe it wasn’t. Maybe it was just another version of the truth, written to sound like remorse.I’d written it three times and torn it up twice.What do you even say when the person you’ve been chasing your whole