All Chapters of ASH AND NEON: Chapter 21
- Chapter 24
24 chapters
Chapter 21: A City Inside a Man
Jace Arden did not feel whole. He felt inhabited.Voices moved through him like weather, some quiet, some furious, some grieving. Streets unfolded behind his eyes. Alleyways stretched where thoughts should have been. He could feel Detroit breathing through his ribs.Dex’s absence hurt more than any wound. Not because Dex was gone. But because the shape of him was still there.A negative space inside Jace’s chest where a person used to exist.Nora knelt beside him, hands shaking as she touched his arm. “Jace… look at me. Please.”He turned slowly.His eyes were layered now, reflections inside reflections, neon flickering beneath the surface like a city seen through rain.“I can hear them,” he said softly. “They don’t know he’s gone.”Nora’s throat tightened. “I know.”“No,” Jace whispered. “The murals. They still think he’s fighting.”A scream ripped through the city. Not human. Architectural.A building on the west side folded in on itself, its murals panicking, tearing free, crawling
Chapter 22: The First Forgotten God
Jace Arden drifted in a space without edges. Not darkness. Silence. No streets. No voices. No neon pulse.For the first time since the murals awakened, the city was gone. He should have felt relief. Instead, terror bloomed in his chest.This is what erasure feels like. A voice spoke, not aloud, not inside his head, but everywhere. You have emptied yourself.Jace tried to move. There was no body to move with. “Who are you?” he asked, or thought, or remembered asking. The silence shifted. I am what remains when remembrance fails.Light emerged, not neon, not color, but a pale outline, like a shape drawn where something had been erased. A figure formed, vast and incomplete, its edges dissolving as soon as they took form.The Null Architect. Not monstrous. Not divine. Lonely. “You’re not a machine,” Jace said slowly. “You’re… broken.” The figure pulsed. I was named once.Fragments flickered, ancient cities carved in stone, people pressing symbols into clay, stories passed mouth to mouth u
Chapter 23: If I Accept, I Disappear
The hand of Amon-Rae hovered inches from Jace Arden’s face. It was not solid. It was not light. It was the absence of forgetting, a shape carved out of everything the world had chosen not to remember.Jace could feel it pulling at him already, testing the boundaries of his identity. His name trembled inside his chest, fragile as chalk.Phoenix stepped between them without hesitation. “No.”The word rang like a blade. Amon-Rae paused. You oppose continuity?“I oppose replacement,” Phoenix said coldly. “He is not a vessel.”Lumen laughed weakly from the fractured platform below, blood streaking their face. “Oh, this is rich. The warden suddenly cares about the prisoner.”Phoenix didn’t look at them. “Silence.”Jace swallowed hard. His knees shook, but he stayed upright.“What happens if I take it?” he asked. Amon-Rae’s voice softened, not kindly, but honestly. You will no longer be singular. Your name will persist only as function. Memory will stabilize around you, but you will not be…
Chapter 24: What Remains on the Wall
Morning came without permission.Not sunrise. Detroit rarely bothered with romance, but a dull gray light seeping between buildings like it had someplace better to be. Jace Arden sat on the curb outside an abandoned liquor store, elbows on his knees, staring at a brick wall that no longer breathed.The mural was still there. Painted figures frozen mid-motion. Color intact. No whispers. No pulse. Just art. He didn’t know whether to feel relieved or hollow.Nora stood a few steps away, phone pressed to her ear, voice low but fierce. “No, listen to me. This isn’t a riot. It’s exposure. Cities don’t collapse because of truth, they collapse because of lies.” She paused, jaw tightening. “Run it. Or I will.”She hung up and exhaled, then turned to Jace. “They’re scrambling. Every outlet. Lumen’s data is everywhere. You broke the dam.”Jace nodded slowly. His head still rang, like a room after the music stopped. “Doesn’t feel like breaking. Feels like… surviving.”She crossed to him, sat besi