All Chapters of Midnight Driver: Five Stars or Die : Chapter 1
- Chapter 10
10 chapters
Ch 01. ZERO HOUR
The second hand on Ray’s analog watch touched twelve just as the neon light in the underground garage flickered once. Midnight. The hour when Los Angeles shed its glamorous mask and revealed its true, sinful face. Ray stood straight in front of his matte black 1970 Dodge Charger, The Phantom. In his right hand, a microfiber cloth moved methodically across the hood, each stroke stopping at the exact same point, as if following a ritual his muscles had memorized. The car was not just a vehicle. It was the only system in his life that still obeyed logic and control. The phone in his suit pocket vibrated. Ray did not respond immediately. He finished one final stroke, folded the cloth neatly, and set it on the workbench without a sound. Only then did he take out his phone. The screen lit up. St. Jude Medical Center, Administration. “Ray here.” His voice was steady, low, stripped of unnecessary emotion. “Mr. Raymond.” The voice on the other end was smooth, almost ple
Ch 02. Code of Ethics
The road toward the Los Angeles Harbor District felt like a descent through an isolated circle of hell. The glittering lights of skyscrapers slowly faded in the rearview mirror, replaced by the towering shadows of container cranes that loomed like iron dinosaur skeletons beneath a pale moon. Smooth urban asphalt gave way to cracked concrete that smelled of salt, diesel fuel, and rotting fish. Ray drove his matte black Dodge Charger with the calm of a surgeon performing a delicate operation. Here, among a labyrinth of containers and illegal storage warehouses, a single navigational mistake could mean running into corrupt customs patrols or worse, crossing into the territory of local gangs who enjoyed stripping visiting cars along with their drivers. The navigation system on the dashboard chimed softly, cutting through the cabin’s silence, filled only by a Chopin nocturne. DESTINATION REACHED: WAREHOUSE 4. Ray eased off the accelerator. His headlights washed over a r
Ch 03. Rat Street
Rain began to fall over Los Angeles, not a storm that washed away sins, but an acidic drizzle that made neon lights shimmer across wet asphalt like oil on a black canvas. Ray parked The Phantom in a back alley behind an art deco opera house downtown. He killed the engine and let the car’s silhouette dissolve into the darkness. Only the app indicator on his phone glowed faintly, counting down the client’s arrival. 3… 2… 1… The steel door beside the building flew open. A woman stepped out quickly, struggling to preserve what remained of her elegance. A blood red silk evening gown clung to her body, its hem soaked by puddles. Around her neck, a heavy diamond necklace caught the streetlight and shattered it into cold sparks. Isabella. The young wife of a real estate baron, or a young widow, depending on how fast the poison in that champagne glass did its work. Ray unlocked the door. Isabella slipped inside, carrying the scent of Chanel No. 5 mixed with a faint meta
Ch 04. Bloody Transaction
Van Nuys Airport slowly disappeared in the rearview mirror, leaving only the fading trail of jet exhaust from a private plane that had just lifted Isabella beyond the reach of American law. Ray did not wait for a thank you. The moment the aircraft door closed, his job was done. The night was still long, and Ray’s wallet was nowhere near full enough to satisfy the appetite of the hospital where Agatha lay. 02:15 a.m. The Car Gow app on Ray’s phone blinked again. Not gold this time, but a deep, pulsing red, the mark of extreme risk. CLIENT: “MARCO THE BUTCHER” (Sinaloa Cartel, LA Branch). LOCATION: Fish Cold Storage Warehouse, San Pedro. DESTINATION: “Dead Man’s Drop” rendezvous point, Long Beach. FARE: $35,000 + Variable Risk Bonus (paid after drop). Ray let out a long breath and rolled his stiff neck until it cracked. He knew who Marco was. The loud, crude type who usually carried more trouble than his fee justified. The rate still felt low for a jo
Ch 05. Old Man Joe's Workshop
Dawn had not fully broken, but the eastern sky was already bruised with a dirty purple-red hue. Ray left the city’s noise behind, pointing the nose of his Dodge Charger toward the edge of the Mojave Desert, where civilization thinned out and gave way to forgotten industrial carcasses. His destination was The Boneyard. On both sides of the cracked asphalt road, thousands of wrecked cars and decommissioned military trucks stood in rows like headstones in a massive graveyard. Ray turned onto a gravel dirt road leading to an old World War II era aircraft hangar. A neon sign with half its letters dead flickered weakly: J E’S A TO RE P AIR. When the car stopped in front of the iron gate, Ray did not signal right away. He went still. His hands, still gripping the steering wheel, suddenly shook hard, a tremor he could not control. He did not curse his body. He simply waited for the shaking to pass, the same way he once waited for gunfire to stop. Ray reached into his pocke
Ch 06. Shadows
The morning sun in Los Angeles was never truly clean. Its light was always filtered through a layer of smog, turning blue skies into a dull, metallic gray. For most people, it marked the start of routine, gridlock on the I-405, overpriced lattes, and boring meetings. For Ray, it was the hour when the monsters of the night crawled back under their beds, giving him a brief chance to breathe. Ray turned his Dodge Charger into the parking lot of Mickey’s Diner, a 24-hour restaurant on the outskirts of Culver City whose architecture was frozen in the 1950s. A red neon coffee cup flickered on the roof, its E burned out, leaving the sign to read DIN R. He chose the farthest corner spot. The position gave him a strategic 180-degree view of the entire lot and the diner entrance. Ray shut off the engine. He sat still for ten seconds, letting the V8’s vibrations slowly drain from his body. He studied his reflection in the rearview mirror, now slightly thicker thanks to the ballistic
Ch 07. Package Delivery
Ray drove The Phantom along Sepulveda Boulevard, blending into the slow, working-class traffic that moved like blood thickened by clogged arteries. He was not carrying a passenger. The back seat was empty, yet the weight on his shoulders felt just as heavy. The sedative he had taken at the diner was wearing off, replaced by sharp alertness and a faint, restless edge. 10:15 a.m. The dedicated phone in the dashboard drawer buzzed. Not the refined chime reserved for VIP passengers, but a short, abrasive buzzer. Twice. Ray glanced at the screen. The Car Gow interface shifted to a cold blue. COURIER MODE: ACTIVATED. CARGO TYPE: BIOLOGICAL / TIME-SENSITIVE (CODE BLUE). PICKUP POINT: Private Ambulance 44, Rear Parking Lot, Dodger Stadium. DROP-OFF POINT: Noah’s Ark Veterinary Clinic, Burbank. TIME LIMIT: 18 Minutes. PAYMENT: $8,000. Eight thousand dollars for eighteen minutes of work. Ray ran the numbers in his head. That was an obscene rate for co
Ch 08. Breach of Contract
The crystal chandeliers in the lobby of the Beverly Wilshire Hotel cast a warm golden glow, a sharp contrast to the night air outside that had begun to bite. Along the valet lane, Rolls Royces, Bentleys, and Ferraris stood in neat rows, displayed like the expensive toys of Hollywood gods. At the very end of the line, Ray’s matte black Dodge Charger sat motionless, a wolf among pampered poodles. No valet dared approach it. The car radiated a sense of danger that made wealthy people instinctively uneasy. Ray tapped his index finger against the steering wheel, matching the rhythm of the digital clock on the dashboard. 9:00 p.m. The hotel’s glass doors spun open. A man stumbled out. He wore a black tuxedo with the tie loosened, the top buttons of his shirt undone, his face flushed from a mix of expensive alcohol and pure panic. This was his client, City Councilman Marcus Hartman. The same man whose face smiled confidently from campaign billboards under the slogan Law and Order
Ch 09. Cockpit Silence
Night in Los Angeles is never truly silent. Even in the most secluded spots, there is always the hum of high-voltage electricity, the hiss of distant tires, or sirens wailing like wounded ghosts. Yet inside the cabin of the Dodge Charger parked on the dark shoulder of Mulholland Drive, the outside world feels millions of light-years away. Ray shuts off the engine. The sudden silence feels heavy, pressing against his eardrums. He does not move right away. He sits still, letting his back settle into the contours of the Recaro racing seat, hard but gripping his body with military precision. This is not just a car. It is an extension of himself, a steel womb shielding him from a world eager to swallow him whole. Ray’s hand slowly traces the steering wheel. The Alcantara leather feels rough and cold beneath his fingertips, absorbing the sweat and residual tension from the confrontation with Hartman. He presses a small button on the dashboard. Click. The cabin lights
Ch 10. Before The Strom
The smell of a hospital is always the same, no matter what time you enter. A cold blend of seventy percent alcohol and despair, masked by synthetic lemon air freshener. To Ray, the scent is more suffocating than diesel exhaust trapped in a traffic-clogged tunnel. 11:45 p.m. Ray walks across the lobby of St. Jude Medical Center. His steps feel heavy. His leather shoes now bear thin scuffs on their toes, remnants of brutal pedal work during the heart delivery in Burbank earlier tonight. Behind the VIP reception desk, Mrs. Amber is still there. She is a corporate vampire who seems never to sleep. Ray drops a thick brown envelope onto the polished mahogany counter. It looks worn, slightly greasy, and smells of leftover adrenaline. Amber glances at the envelope, then peers at Ray over her glasses. “You came back quickly, Mr. Rayner. People with your profile usually need more time to gather liquidity.” “Count it,” Ray says flatly. Amber opens the envelope with tw