All Chapters of The Untouchable Commander : Chapter 1
- Chapter 6
6 chapters
Prologue
The house on Mega Street was too quiet now. No laughter from the kitchen. No football games in the backyard. Just silence, thick and heavy, pressing down on the two boys who had nowhere else to go. Kael, fifteen, sat on his bed staring at nothing. His mind was stuck on the telegram. The one that arrived a month ago. The Department of the Army regrets to inform you... He could still see his father's face. Not the stiff photograph on the mantel. The real one. The one who laughed too loud, burned pancakes on Sundays, and taught them how to throw a punch. All of it gone. Taken by a war in a country they'd never visit. The door creaked. Dorian walked in, his face the same as Kael's but softer, more open. They were twins. Three minutes apart. Different in almost every way except the grief that now lived in both of them. Dorian sat down next to him. Their shoulders touched. Neither spoke. "She was crying again," Dorian finally said, his voice low. "In the kitchen." Kael nodded. T
Chapter 0NE
~D.K HOSPITAL~. Kael stared at the ceiling. His leg was suspended in a complicated web of wires and pulleys, the cast heavy and immobile. The doctors had said he was lucky. The accident during training could have crushed his spine. Instead, he'd only shattered his femur. Six weeks of recovery. Then physical therapy. Then back to active duty. Lucky. He didn't feel lucky. He was supposed to be on that mission. Mount Thai. North face. The most dangerous climb of their careers. He and Dorian had trained for it together. Spent months preparing. They were supposed to be a team. Brothers watching each other's backs. Then the training accident happened. A faulty vehicle. A rollover. Kael had been thrown clear, but his leg had taken the worst of it. The doctors said he'd recover. But he wouldn't be climbing any mountains for a while. So Dorian went without him. Kael had argued. Begged. Tried to convince the CO to delay the mission. But the timeline was fixed. The intel was time-sensitive
Chapter TW0
The box sat on Kael's kitchen table for three days before he opened it.His apartment was small. Bare. The kind of place a soldier kept when he was never home long enough to care about decorating. A couch. A TV. A bed in the other room. That was it.He'd been discharged from the hospital two days ago. The doctors had wanted him to stay longer. More physical therapy. More observation. But he'd signed himself out against medical advice. He had work to do.His leg still ached. The crutches were gone, replaced by a cane. He limped around the apartment, ignoring the pain. Pain was temporary. Revenge was forever.The box was dusty. Aunt Claire hadn't taken care of it. That didn't surprise him. She'd never cared about anything except Marcus. The box was just a relic. Something to store in her basement and forget about.Kael opened it slowly.Inside were his mother's things. Old photographs. A few pieces of jewelry. A locket with a picture of his father. A letter, yellowed with age, written i
Chapter Three
The address was in a bad part of town.Kael limped down the cracked sidewalk, his cane tapping against the concrete. The buildings were rundown. Graffiti covered the walls. Broken windows stared out like hollow eyes. This wasn't the kind of place where soldiers lived. This was the kind of place where people went to disappear.Reyes had given him the address. Dawson's last known location before he was reassigned. A cheap apartment above a laundromat. The kind of place you rented when you didn't want anyone to find you.Kael climbed the stairs. His leg screamed with every step. He ignored it.The door was at the end of the hallway. Number 4B. The paint was peeling. The lock was cheap. Kael pulled out the tools Reyes had given him and got to work. Thirty seconds later, the door swung open.The apartment was empty.Not just empty. Cleaned out. No furniture. No personal items. No sign that anyone had ever lived there. The windows were covered with newspaper. The floor was swept. The kitche
Chapter Four
The training facility was hidden in the middle of nowhere.Kael had been driven there in an unmarked van. No windows. No landmarks. Just hours of winding roads and silence. When the doors finally opened, he was standing in front of a compound that looked more like a prison than a military base.Old walls. Barbed wire. Guard towers. The kind of place that made you feel small the moment you stepped inside.Kael limped through the gates. His leg was better now. Not perfect. But better. The doctors had cleared him for light duty. He'd pushed for full clearance. They'd compromised.It would have to be enough."Vance!" A sergeant barked from across the courtyard. "Get your ass over here!"Kael moved as fast as he could. The sergeant was a wall of muscle with a shaved head and dead eyes. He looked like he'd never smiled in his life."You're late," the sergeant said."The transport—""I don't care about excuses. I care about results. You're here to become something more than a grunt. You're h
Chapter Five
The warehouse was in the industrial district. Abandoned. Dark. The kind of place where deals went down and bodies disappeared.Kael had been watching it for three hours. His leg ached from the crouched position. The cold seeped through his gear. But he didn't move. Didn't blink. His eyes were fixed on the entrance.Marcus was inside. A source had confirmed it. He'd been meeting with someone. Someone connected to the people who killed Dorian.Kael's hand rested on his weapon. His finger was steady on the trigger guard.Cole was positioned on the roof across the street. Cover. Backup. If things went wrong, he'd provide support.But Kael hoped it wouldn't come to that. He wanted to do this himself.Marcus.His cousin. The golden child. The one Aunt Claire had always favored. The one who'd smiled at Dorian's funeral while planning his next move.Kael's jaw tightened. He thought about the kitchen. Beatrice on the counter. Marcus's hands on her. The laughter. The wine. The complete disregar