All Chapters of Foolish Soldier: Reborn With A Broken Limit.: Chapter 1
- Chapter 7
7 chapters
Chapter 01: Foolish Soldier
The soul is the principal thing.All the treasures of the earth cannot outweigh it. Proceeding out of it is an invisible energy. A Halo. It cannot be seen by the eye, only felt. Some souls emit a vast halo, others emit a quiet one, barely a stir in the air, easy to miss.But the soul beneath is the same.Doran's halo was weak. It had always been this way.But the soul beneath it was his, and he had chosen what to do with it. The sky above Wall Iros exploded.Not fire. Not lightning. A sphere of absolute darkness, darker than the night around it, streaking across the sky like a hole in the world. It struck the outer wall at the western gate, and the sound that followed was not an explosion. It was a swallow.The wall that was supposed to be protected by The Great Aldric's seal, the wall that had stood for centuries, crumpled inward. Stone shattered. The shockwave hurled soldiers from the parapets like dolls. Dust and debris rained across the outer district, choking the air. People ra
Chapter 02: Under The Wrong Roof
The breakfast ended the way all breakfasts ended in the house of Rordan Vail.His mother pressed a quick, warm kiss to his forehead and swept out in a rustle of linen. His father was already gone, his voice carrying down the hallway as he fired orders at a servant about a shipment for House Regulus."This family didn't build its reputation on excuses."The doors swung shut. The house seemed to exhale.His brothers went their ways. Aldric, the firstborn, headed to the counting house. He was named for the great hero—a burden he carried the way a statue carries its own weight. Their father had given him that name hoping it would shape him into something worthy of legend. Instead it had shaped him into a man who never laughed at dinner.Bran, the second son, headed for the stables. He had been spared the weight of a hero's name. His interests were horses and hunting and reminding Soren, at every opportunity, that the family hierarchy was a ladder with only two rungs that mattered.Neither
Chapter 03: Something About That Stance
The training grounds sat in the shadow of Wall Aldric, a wide yard of packed dirt and trampled grass wedged between the garrison barracks and the eastern guard tower. It smelled of sweat and iron. Soldiers drilled in clusters. City guards sparred with wooden blades. You could feel their halos. A blacksmith's apprentice hauled a crate of practice swords toward a storage shed, his arms trembling under the weight.Soren stood at the edge of the yard.His legs had carried him here without permission. He had meant to go back. He had told himself to go back. But his body had other instincts, and those instincts had led him through the inner gate, past the markets, past the guild halls, and brought him here. At a training yard. Like a soldier reporting for duty.He didn't belong here. His clothes announced it. Blue wool. Silver buckles. A few of the soldiers glanced his way, assessed him as harmless, and looked elsewhere.He found a spot against the outer fence, half-hidden by a stack of wor
Chapter 04: Lessons and Truth
"Soren. You'll be late."His mother's voice. Soft. Close. A hand on his shoulder, gentle.He opened his eyes. The ceiling was wrong. The light was wrong. For a long moment, he was nowhere. Then the room settled around him. The blue wool tunic draped over the chair. The window.He had lain awake half the night. Kael's words turning over in his skull. You move like someone who's trained before. The demon's voice. The other voice. And beneath it all, his halo—faint, steady, there. He had pressed his palm to his chest in the dark and felt it answer."Your lessons," his mother said. She was already dressed, her dark hair pinned back. "You've missed two this month. Your father won't be pleased if you miss another."Soren sat up. His body felt heavy. He had slept poorly. Dreams he couldn't remember. Voices he couldn't place."Lessons," he muttered.The word felt foreign. Doran had never taken lessons. Commoners didn't. They learned to fight. Or a craft. Or they farmed. There were not many op
Chapter 05: The Morning Drills
Soren returned to the training yard at dawn.He had barely slept. Again. Every time he closed his eyes, he felt the pulse in his chest—surging, contained, but undeniably there. A halo. His halo. Not something inherited. Not something remembered. Something entirely new. The Stone had shown nothing when he was six. The Stone had been wrong. Or something had changed. He didn't know which. He only knew that the pulse was growing, and he needed to understand it.The inner city was still waking. Cobblestones wet with dew. Woodsmoke from the bakeries. Servants with bread baskets. Soren walked with purpose, his hands loose at his sides.He was halfway to the garrison when he saw him.A company of soldiers was assembled near the inner gate. Their halos pressed outward in disciplined unison—not vast, most of them, but steady. Trained. At their head stood a man with a scarred face and brown eyes. Younger than the face in Doran's memory. Unscarred by years that hadn't happened yet. His halo was f
Chapter 6: pressing On
A month had passed since Soren first stepped into the training yard.The body he wore now was different. Leaner. Harder. The softness of the merchant's son had been replaced by something quieter—long muscle, tight against bone. His shoulders sat back when he walked. His hands, callused from the practice sword, hung loose at his sides. He had caught his reflection in the hallway mirror a few days ago and almost didn't recognize himself.His mother had noticed first."You're filling out," Maren said at dinner, her eyes tracing the line of his jaw. "You look different.""I've been training."Bran didn’t look up from his plate. "I know." The words were casual. Dismissive. But Soren caught the weight beneath them. I know you've been training. I just don't know why.Maren was still watching Soren. "Why the sudden interest?""I want to look manlier."His father had laughed. A short sound, unexpected. "Manlier. The boy wants to look manlier." He shook his head and returned to his meal. But h
Chapter 7: The Watcher
Bran had learned patience the hard way.As a child, he had waited for his father to notice him. Rordan had been busy with Aldric—the heir, the firstborn, the one who showed a flicker of potential at the Crimson Stone. A ring of light that wasn't vast but wasn't nothing. Enough to matter. So Bran waited. He learned to ride. To hunt. To close a deal before Aldric could finish his sums. None of it worked. His father's eyes slid past him the way they slid past furniture.He had waited for his mother to hold him the way she held Soren. Maren had been busy with the baby—the still Stone, the broken one, the one who needed protecting. Soren got the attention. Soren got the soft words and the searching looks and the hand on the shoulder at dinner. Bran got a kiss on the forehead and a reminder to wash before meals.He had stopped waiting years ago. He had made peace with it. The middle son. The weak halo. The one nobody invested in.But he had never stopped watching.The morning after the beas