All Chapters of The Ordinary Commander: Chapter 11
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Temple Secrets
The warmth of the temple’s interior hit Raka the moment he crossed the threshold. His soggy sneakers squeaked loudly against the polished obsidian floor, the sound echoing down the long, grand corridor. Behind him, the remaining nineteen students filed in, shivering and dripping wet, their eyes wide with a mix of awe and lingering terror."Everyone inside," Raka said, keeping his voice to a sharp whisper. "Hurry up. We don't want any stray hounds realizing we found a back door.""Man, my clothes are literally sticking to my skin," Leo groaned, wringing out the hem of his ruined tunic. "I think I have actual fish in my boots.""Would you shut up about your boots, Leo?" Marcus hissed, his voice bouncing off the high ceiling. "We just survived a pack of apex predators and a fifty-foot drop into a raging river. A little water isn't going to kill you.""It's not just water, it's freezing water!" Leo fired back, shivering violently. "I can't even feel my toes!""Stop bickering, both of you,
The Escape
"I’ve got you! Grab my shoulder!" Raka screamed, his fingers clawing into the fabric of Chloe’s damp jacket."Raka! I’m slipping! I can’t hold on!" Chloe shrieked, her legs dangling into the pitch-black abyss that had opened where the altar once stood."No, you’re not! Sofia, grab her other arm!" Raka grunted, his sneakers sliding on the tilting stone."I’ve got her! Pull!" Sofia yelled, lunging forward and locking her hands around Chloe’s wrist. "Leo, Marcus, stop staring and help us!""The whole place is going down!" Leo panicked, his voice cracking as he stumbled back. "The floor is literally dissolving!""Just pull, damn it!" Marcus roared, throwing his weight into the effort.With a collective heave, they dragged Chloe onto the solid, trembling edge of the platform. She collapsed, sobbing and hyperventilating, clutching her knees."Are you okay? Can you run?" Raka asked, his chest heaving as he stared at her."I... I think so," Chloe whimpered, her teeth chattering."Good, becaus
Back to the Capital
The morning fog clung to the trees like damp wool, muffling the sound of nineteen pairs of wet sneakers dragging through the mud. Raka walked at the front of the line, his damp hoodie clinging to his shoulders, his boots heavy with clay. Behind him, the low murmur of the class was a constant, anxious hum."My feet are completely numb," Leo groaned, his voice cracking with exhaustion. "If I lose a toe to frostbite, I’m suing the Crown. I swear to God.""With what lawyer, Leo?" Marcus asked, not looking back. "We’re in a different dimension. Pretty sure suing isn't a thing here.""I'll find one," Leo muttered. "Or I'll make Raka do it. He’s the Commander. Isn't that his job?""My job is keeping you from getting eaten, Leo, not managing your imaginary legal team," Raka said, his voice flat. "Just keep moving. We’re still in the wild.""He’s right," Chloe whispered from the middle of the group, her fingers tightly clutching her staff. "I can still hear the river. What if those... those th
Guarded Silence
The scarred-jaw officer stared down at Raka, his lip curling in a slow, deliberate sneer. "Ready? You look like you're about to collapse on my boots, kid.""We walked all night," Sofia chimed in, her voice trembling as she wrapped her damp arms tightly around herself. She gave a weak, pathetic cough that sounded incredibly convincing. "We got chased by those massive wolves, we fell into a river, and we lost almost all our gear. Please tell me there’s actual food inside."The officer didn't look sympathetic. He turned to his men, his voice sharp. "Search them. Every single one.""Wait, search us for what?" Raka demanded, stepping in front of Chloe, who was shivering so hard her teeth were clicking. "Mud? We don't have anything left. Go look at the bottom of the riverbed if you want our packs.""The King’s orders were absolute," the officer said, stepping into Raka's personal space. "Clear the ridge. Retrieve the Heart-Crystal. Where is it, Commander?""We didn't get it," Raka said flat
The King's Wrath
"The Vesper Temple is gone. Its core was extinguished. And your unit was the only thing alive on that ridge."Raka stared at King Alaric, his jaw dropping in what he hoped looked like genuine, bewildered panic."Vesper Temple?" Raka asked, his voice cracking slightly. "What the hell is a Vesper Temple?""Do not play the fool with me, boy!" Lord Vane snarled, stepping forward, his fist clenching against the hilt of his ceremonial sword. "An ancient structure, hidden for three centuries, vanishes the exact moment your pathetic squad is sent to the ridge, and you expect us to believe you know nothing?""I don't just expect you to believe it, Minister, I'm literally telling you we have no idea what you're talking about," Raka said, holding up his hands defensively. "We were running for our lives from giant wolves with glowing eyes. If there was a temple up there, we sure as hell didn't see it. Do you think we had time to go sightseeing while being chased off a cliff?"King Alaric’s eyes n
City Under Siege
The stone floor beneath Raka’s feet groaned as another distant explosion rattled the stained-glass windows of the King's study. Dust drifted down from the vaulted ceiling, catching the purple glow of the flickering braziers."Your Majesty, we have to withdraw to the inner keep!" Lord Vane shouted, his hand gripping his sword hilt so tightly his knuckles turned white. "The eastern ward is completely down! If the plague-walkers bypass the lower districts, they’ll be at the palace gates in minutes!""No," King Alaric said, his voice flat, dangerously calm as he stared out the tall arched window. "We do not retreat from rabble. Vane, deploy the third and fourth regiments to the breach. Seal the inner gates.""And what about us?" Raka demanded, stepping forward, his wet sneakers squeaking loudly against the polished stone. "My classmates are still down in the barracks! They’re exhausted, they’re starving, and they don't even have their proper gear!"Vane sneered, turning his glaring eyes t
The Face of the Enemy
The wind howled through the shattered battlements, carrying the heavy stench of ash and decaying flesh. Down below, the army of plague-walkers stood perfectly still, their yellow eyes reflecting the fires consuming the lower district.Raka gripped the cold stone of the parapet, his knuckles turning white. He couldn't take his eyes off the figure in the dark armor."Is that... is that really him?" Leo’s voice shook, his spear tip rattling against the stone. "Tell me I’m hallucinating. Please tell me I’m just dehydrated.""It’s Kevin," Sofia whispered. Her daggers slipped from her hands, clattering against the rubble. "Raka, it’s him. But how? They told us he died during the first week. They said his body rejected the summoning.""They lied," Raka said, his voice flat and cold. "They lied about everything else, so why not this?"Below, the boy in the dark armor slowly lowered his pointing finger. He didn't speak. He simply turned his skeletal mount around, waving his hand toward the ruin
Void Connections
The damp chill of the palace’s lower archives clung to the back of Raka’s throat, a familiar, dusty weight that felt like a physical extension of the nightmare they were living. He leaned over the massive, scarred mahogany table, his eyes straining under the dim, flickering light of a single tallow candle."We don't have much time, Sofia," Raka whispered, his voice hushed but urgent. "The guards are still distracted by the cleanup at the eastern gate, but they'll notice we're missing from the barracks soon."Sofia didn't look up from her notes. Her quill scratched furiously against a scrap of stolen parchment, her movements sharp and precise. "I'm almost there. Just give me a second, Raka. This translation... it’s completely messed up.""What do you mean, messed up?" Raka asked, resting his hands on the edge of the table. "Is it about Kevin?""It's about the energy he was using," Sofia said, finally looking up. Her eyes were wide, heavily shadowed by exhaustion. "He called it the void
Library Shadows
"Don't breathe," Sofia whispered, her voice a ghost of a sound against Raka's ear."I'm trying not to," Raka breathed back, his hand squeezing the handle of his pocketknife until his fingers turned numb. "But the air is freezing. Seriously, is it just me, or is my breath actually fogging?""It's not just you. Look at the floorboards," Sofia murmured, her fingers lightly tapping his arm to guide his gaze. "They're icing over. The frost is crawling toward us. This isn't just a normal guard patrol.""Great. Another assassin?" Raka muttered, pressing his back harder against the heavy oak bookshelf. He could feel the cold wood vibrating slightly, as if the very air was trembling under a heavy magical pressure."Maybe," Sofia whispered, her eyes darting through the gaps in the books. "Or maybe Lord Vane himself came to finish the job because his little pet failed.""No," Raka whispered, his eyes scanning the pitch-black aisles. "The footsteps are too light for Vane. The Minister wears heavy
Betrayal Observed
"Ready?" Raka asked, positioning his hands under the splintered oak beam. "On three, Sofia. Don't let it slip.""I've got the leverage," Sofia said, her muscles tensing as she wedged her foot against a fallen ledger box. "Just lift. One, two, three—"They both grunted as the heavy wood groaned and shifted upward, the rusted iron of the pulley crane scraping against the stone floor."Elara, pull your leg out! Fast!" Raka yelled, his face turning red from the strain.Elara gasped, dragging herself backward over the dusty marble. "I'm clear! I'm clear! Drop it!"They let the heavy beam crash back down, sending a cloud of musty parchment dust into the freezing air. The sound echoed hollowly through the dark archives."Are you okay?" Raka panted, kneeling next to her. "Can you walk?""I think so," Elara whispered, clutching her bruised ankle. "It’s just... it’s throbbing. I’m sorry, Raka. I’m so sorry.""Save your breath," Sofia said, her eyes scanning the dark aisles. "We don't have time