All Chapters of The Ordinary Commander: Chapter 1
- Chapter 9
9 chapters
The Administrative Error
The air in the grand hall of the Aethelgard Palace smelled of ozone and ancient dust, a scent that clung to the back of Raka’s throat like wet wool. He stood within the center of a pulsating runic circle, surrounded by twenty of his classmates, their faces pale under the flickering violet light of the summoning seal.Outside the circle, King Alaric stood upon a dais of polished obsidian, his eyes scanning the group with the detached precision of a merchant weighing gold."Is it done?" the King asked, his voice echoing off the vaulted stone ceiling."The resonance is complete, Your Majesty," a robed High Mage replied, bowing low. "The Class of the Otherworlders has arrived in full."Raka shifted his weight, his sneakers squeaking against the cold floor. He looked at Sofia, who stood to his left, her eyes wide as she gripped the fabric of her school blazer. She looked like she wanted to cry, but she was holding it together better than him."So, what's going on?" Raka whispered, his voic
First Command
The barracks were not the regal, stone-carved halls the students had expected. Instead, they were a sprawling, subterranean expanse of iron bunks and damp flagstone that smelled of stale sweat and wet hounds. The flickering torches on the walls sputtered, casting long, nervous shadows that stretched across the floor.Raka trailed behind the group, his hands stuffed deep into his pockets. He felt every pair of eyes on his back—some lingering with irritation, others with outright contempt."So," Leo muttered, dropping his duffel bag onto a rusted metal bunk with a metallic clang. "We’re living in a basement with the kid who’s basically a walking handicap. Fantastic."Raka stopped by a bunk near the door. He tried to mimic a calm expression, though his heart was thumping against his ribs like a trapped bird. "Alright, everyone. Listen up. I know this is a disaster, but we need to figure out our inventory. Does anyone actually have food or water supplies in their packs?"The room went qui
The Training Grounds
The iron door groaned, its hinges screaming in protest as it swung inward, revealing not a hallway, but a vast, desolate training pit carved directly into the bedrock of the fortress."Is that... is that the borderlands?" Leo stammered, stepping into the opening."No," Raka said, his eyes scanning the horizon. "It’s a kill box. Look at the walls. See those grooves? They’re prepped for magical dampening. This is a practice ground.""A practice ground? While the alarm is going off?" Sofia moved up beside him, her daggers drawn. Her movements were fluid, predatory. "Raka, look."From the shadows of the pit, four hulking shapes emerged. They were golems—crude constructs of jagged slate and pulsing runic clay, standing nearly eight feet tall. Their limbs were heavy, cumbersome, but the way they carved through the stone floor suggested they were anything but slow."Golems," Marcus spat, gripping his sword so hard his knuckles turned white. "We’re really fighting rocks now?""Don't get cocky
Logistical Nightmare
The silence of the pit felt heavy, the kind of stillness that followed a thunderclap. Raka stared up at the balcony until his neck ached, his mind racing through the logistics of their survival. The victory against the golems had been a reprieve, not a solution."We need to move," Raka said, his voice cutting through the lingering tension. "Back to the barracks. Now.""Why the rush, Commander?" Leo asked, wiping grime from his shield. "I think I earned a moment to catch my breath.""Because the General isn't going to send us a pat on the back, Leo," Raka muttered, already heading toward the iron gate. "He’s going to send the quartermaster. If we don’t have our inventory set and verified before he shows up to audit, we’re going to be in a lot more trouble than a few stone statues."Back in the dim, cramped confines of the barracks, the atmosphere had shifted. The group no longer looked at Raka with open hostility, but the fear was still etched into their expressions. Raka didn't waste
The Midnight Meeting
The barracks were finally quiet, save for the rhythmic breathing of twenty restless teenagers scattered across iron bunks. Raka remained seated at the central table, the faint light of a single, dying candle casting long, trembling shadows against the damp stone. He stared at the ledger, his mind tracing the webs of power within the Aethelgard Palace."You’re going to burn your eyes out, Commander."Raka didn’t look up. He knew the soft, rhythmic click of Sofia’s boots anywhere. She sat on the corner of the table, her shadow merging with the dark grime on the walls."I’m not trying to read, Sofia," Raka whispered, his voice barely audible over the distant drip of water. "I’m trying to see if there’s a pattern I missed. Harlen said Vane wanted us weak. That means this isn't just about stealing bread. It’s about systemic neglect."Sofia leaned in, her gaze scanning the pages he had annotated with hurried, frantic scribbles. "It’s a classic squeeze. If we die in the borderlands, it looks
Assassination Attempt
The marble floor groaned under the assassin’s weight, the impact sending hairline fractures spiraling outward like a spiderweb. Before the dust could even settle, the figure was a blurred arc of steel, lunging toward Raka."Move, Raka!" Sofia screamed, her voice cracking the heavy silence of the library.Raka didn’t need the warning. His instincts, sharpened by a lifetime of near-misses in the last forty-eight hours, carried him to the side. He felt the cold breeze of the assassin’s blade slice through the air where his throat had been a split second before."Is that all you’ve got?" Raka gasped, his lungs burning as he dived behind a mahogany study table."He’s fast," Sofia said, weaving through the narrow aisles of the bookshelf, her own daggers flashing as she parried a strike that threatened to take her arm off. "Too fast for us to just brawl with.""We aren't going to out-fight him," Raka shouted, his eyes scanning the room, hunting for anything—a loose heavy book, a dangling cha
Interrogation Tactics
The dust from the toppled shelves hung in the air like a shroud, illuminated by the cold, moonlight filtering through the high library windows. Raka stood over the assassin, his chest heaving, while Sofia kept her daggers leveled at the man’s throat. The former thrall was shivering, his eyes wide with the trauma of a mind abruptly returned to its owner."We need to move him," Raka said, his voice low and urgent. "If the guard patrol comes back, we’re finished. There’s an alcove behind the archives. It’s soundproofed for researchers."Sofia nodded, sheathing one blade to help hoist the man up. "He’s dead weight, Raka. This guy is barely conscious.""Just drag him," Raka insisted. "I need to know exactly how deep this rot goes."They hauled the assassin through the shadows of the library, the man’s boots scraping against the marble floor. They shoved him into a cramped storage room tucked behind a series of heavy curtains. It smelled of mildew and stale ink. Sofia lit a single, sputteri
A Royal Audience
The shadows in the cramped storage room seemed to pulse in time with the King’s heartbeat. Raka could feel the oxygen thinning, the heavy, metallic tang of the King’s magical aura pressing against his eardrums like deep-sea pressure. Sofia stood like a statue, her daggers held low, but her hands were trembling—the first sign of weakness Raka had ever seen in her."Well, Commander?" the King asked, his voice dripping with an elegant, terrible patience. "You were so eager to play at being an investigator. Now that you have the attention of the throne, don't be shy. Tell me: what exactly is it that you think you’ve uncovered in my archives?"Raka’s pulse was a frantic bird trapped in his ribcage. He looked at the assassin—still curled in a ball of whimpering terror—and then back at the King. He had to lie. If he admitted he knew about the harvest, the King would end them both before they could blink."I found a thief, Your Majesty," Raka said, his voice straining to sound steady. He gest
Into the Woods
The transition from the oppressive stone of the Aethelgard Palace to the wild, overgrown brush of the Northern Ridge was jarring. The air here was thin, biting, and carried the rank, coppery scent of damp fur and stagnant earth. Raka adjusted his grip on the strap of his pack, his knuckles white. Behind him, the nineteen students were huddled together, a jagged line of nervous energy silhouetted against the encroaching gray of the pre-dawn sky."Stay close," Raka whispered, not turning his head. "If you see a rustle in the trees, don't scream. Just mark it for the scouts.""Easy for you to say, Commander," Leo muttered, his voice strained as he shifted his heavy shield. "I can’t see five feet into this fog. Is this really where the King sent us? It looks like a graveyard.""It’s a nest, Leo," Sofia replied, her voice smooth and alert as she scanned the canopy above them. "And we’re the ones trespassing. Stay sharp."Raka stepped over a rotting log, his boots sinking into the soft, loa