All Chapters of My System Devours Immortals: Chapter 1
- Chapter 10
15 chapters
The Beast Pit
Cris felt his ribs crack before he saw the boot coming.The third kick lifted him off the ground. He landed face-first in the mud, tasting blood and dirt. Around him, outer disciples laughed. Some watched from the training yard. None moved to help.Zhao Kun crouched beside him. The inner-sect genius was seventeen, handsome, and cruel in the way only the talented could afford to be."You broke my cousin's arm last month," Zhao Kun said. "Did you think I'd forget?"Cris spat blood. "He tried to steal my ration.""Your ration." Zhao Kun laughed. "A cripple with a shattered spiritual root doesn't deserve rations. You deserve a grave."He grabbed Cris by the collar and dragged him toward the cliff's edge. Beyond it, the Beast Pit yawned—a dark scar in the mountain where the sect dumped its failures. Disciples who entered rarely came out.Cris struggled. His meridians were useless. Three years ago, they had shattered during a sect assessment. No elder could explain why. No healer could fix
Crawling Out
Cris climbed.The pit walls were jagged, slick with moss and old blood. His fingers found cracks. His toes found ledges. The ring pulsed on his hand, feeding him strength with every movement.Halfway up, his grip slipped.He fell three feet before catching a root. His shoulder wrenched. He hung there, breathing hard, legs dangling over the darkness below. Something howled at the bottom of the pit. Something else answered.Cris pulled himself up.He reached the top as the sun set behind the mountain. The training yard was empty. Disciples had gone to dinner. No one guarded the pit. No one expected anyone to climb out.He crawled onto flat ground and lay there, staring at the sky. His body was a map of pain. Bruises covered his ribs. His left arm hung wrong. But he was alive.The system spoke."Status."A faint image appeared in his mind. Not words on a screen. More like knowledge, pressed directly into his thoughts.Name: CrisRealm: NoneMeridians: 1% repairedDevour Cooldown: ReadyT
The Cripple and the Elder
Elder Han grabbed Sun's wrist before the punch landed."That's enough," the old man said.Sun froze. Elder Han was thin, gray-haired, and walked with a limp. But his eyes were sharp. He was one of the few elders who still patrolled the outer sect. The rest had given up years ago."Elder Han," Sun said, forcing a smile. "We were just—""Leaving." Elder Han pointed at the door. "All of you."Sun hesitated. His eyes flicked to Cris. "Zhao Kun won't like this.""Zhao Kun can complain to me personally. Now go."The disciples filed out. Sun shot Cris a look that promised trouble later. Cris didn't react.When the door closed, Elder Han turned to Cris. The old man studied him for a long moment. His gaze lingered on the ring."You climbed out of the Beast Pit," he said. Not a question."I did.""No one climbs out of the Beast Pit."Cris said nothing.Elder Han pulled up a stool and sat. His limp was worse than usual. Old war wound, rumor said. From a battle no one remembered."Three years ago
Broken Genius
Zhao Kun arrived at dawn with twelve disciples.Cris stood in the training yard, waiting. He had not slept. His meridians hummed with faint energy. The ring was warm on his finger.Zhao Kun stopped ten paces away. He looked Cris up and down, then laughed."You look worse than before. The pit didn't kill you, but it broke your face."The disciples laughed. Cris didn't."I heard you threatened Wei," Zhao Kun said. "Broke his arm. Told him I was next.""You heard right."Zhao Kun's smile faded. "You're either brave or stupid.""Both."The disciples spread out, forming a circle. This was how outer sect disputes were settled. No elders. No rules. Just fists and cultivation.Zhao Kun cracked his knuckles. Qi Gathering Fifth Layer. Three years of training. Talented. Respected. Everything Cris was not."I'm going to break every bone in your body," Zhao Kun said. "Then I'm going to throw you back in that pit. This time, I'll make sure you stay dead."Cris raised his hands. "Talk less. Hit more
The Elder's Mark
Zhao Lei returned from his mission at noon.He found his brother in the infirmary. Zhao Kun lay on a cot, eyes open, staring at nothing. His meridians were ash. His cultivation was gone. He would never cultivate again.Zhao Lei stood over him for a long time. He didn't speak. He didn't weep. He simply turned and walked out.He found Cris in the outer sect training yard."Your name," Zhao Lei said.Cris stopped. The training yard went silent. Disciples scattered. Zhao Lei was Foundation Establishment. Seventh Layer. His presence pressed down on the air like a physical weight."Cris.""You broke my brother.""He broke me first."Zhao Lei nodded slowly. "I don't care."He drew his sword. A silver blade, spirit-forged. Qi coiled around it like smoke."Kneel," he said. "I'll make it quick."Cris didn't kneel. He looked at the sword, then at Zhao Lei's face. The man was calm. Not angry. That was worse. Angry men made mistakes. Calm men didn't."You cannot win," the system said. "Run."Cris
Blood and Herbs
The attack came at midnight.Cris was meditating in his dormitory when the door exploded inward. Three figures in black rushed him. No words. No warnings. Just blades.He rolled off his cot. A sword split the wood where his head had been. He grabbed the attacker's wrist and twisted. Bone snapped. The man screamed."Devour."Cris pressed his palm to the attacker's chest. Qi flooded into him—weak, but useful. Qi Gathering Third Layer. The man collapsed, lifeless.The other two hesitated.Cris didn't.He grabbed a fallen sword and lunged. The second attacker blocked. The third tried to flank him. Cris spun, kicked, and drove his elbow into the third man's throat. The attacker gagged. Cris finished him with the sword.The last one ran.Cris let him go. He needed answers, not corpses. But the man was fast. Gone before Cris reached the door.He stood in the ruins of his dormitory, breathing hard. Three bodies. One escaped. The ring pulsed on his finger, warm with fresh power."Assassins," t
The Chosen Ones
The tournament grounds were packed by dawn.Every outer sect disciple had gathered. Hundreds of gray robes. Thousands of whispered bets. The annual Outer Sect Tournament was the only chance for trash to become something. Win, and you entered the Inner Sect. Lose, and you stayed forgotten.Cris stood at the edge of the crowd. The jade token hung from his neck. Elder Shen's mark. Disciples avoided his gaze. They had heard what happened to Zhao Kun. They had heard about the assassins.No one wanted to fight him."First match," an elder announced. "Cris of the Outer Sect versus Fen of the Outer Sect."Fen stepped forward. He was large. Qi Gathering Fourth Layer. His arms were thick with muscle and scar tissue. He had won this tournament two years ago. Lost in the finals last year."You're the cripple everyone's talking about," Fen said. "You don't look like much."Cris said nothing.Fen cracked his knuckles. "I'm going to break you in half."The elder raised his hand. "Begin."Fen charged
Into the Beast Forest
The portal tore open at sunrise.A rift in the air. Purple light. The smell of old blood and ancient trees. Disciples from a dozen sects gathered at the edge, waiting. Azure Peak. Crimson Blade. White Lotus. All of them hungry.Cris stood alone. The jade token hung from his neck. The pendant was cold against his chest.Elder Shen approached. His smile was kind. His eyes were not."Remember," the elder said. "Devour everything. Leave nothing for the others.""And Zhao Lei?""He enters with the Azure Peak team. He will hunt you." Elder Shen leaned closer. "Kill him if you can. He's more useful to me dead."Cris said nothing.The portal flared. Disciples surged forward. Cris stepped through.---The forest was wrong.Trees stretched into the sky, black bark, silver leaves. The air was thick with qi. Every breath felt like drinking power. Somewhere in the distance, something roared.Cris landed in a clearing. Around him, other disciples scattered. Some ran immediately, chasing treasures.
The Alchemist's Debt
Master Qin was dying.Cris found him pinned beneath a fallen tree, blood seeping through his robes. The old alchemist's breathing was shallow. His qi flickered like a dying candle."Help," Qin rasped. "Please."Joe grabbed Cris's arm. "Leave him. He's from the Verdant Pill Sect. They're neutral. Not our problem."Cris pulled free. "He's an alchemist.""So?""So alchemists make pills. Pills make cultivators stronger."He knelt beside Qin and lifted the tree. The old man screamed as his ribs shifted. Cris didn't stop. He dragged Qin free and laid him flat."He's badly wounded," the system said. "Internal bleeding. Multiple fractures.""Can I devour the wounds?""No. Devouring only takes. It cannot heal."Cris reached into his robe. Esther's healing pills. He had three. He used one.Qin's breathing steadied. His qi stabilized. He looked up at Cris with watery eyes."You saved me.""I need something in return."Qin laughed weakly. "Of course. Nothing is free.""I need pills. Cultivation p
The Prison in the Mountain
The black mountain was not a mountain.It was a tomb. A massive structure of obsidian and bone, half-buried in the earth. Symbols covered its surface—the same symbols as the ring. The same symbols as the pendant.Cris stood at the entrance. Joe beside him. Master Qin had stayed behind, too weak to continue."You feel that?" Joe asked.Cris felt it. A pulse. Deep in the earth. Slow. Steady. Like a heartbeat."The Devourer," the system whispered. "It knows we're here."The entrance was sealed. A massive stone door. No handles. No hinges. Just symbols.Cris held up the pendant. It flared. The symbols on the door flared in answer.The door slid open.Darkness beyond. Cold air. The smell of ancient things.Joe drew his sword. "After you."They entered.---The tunnel descended for what felt like hours. The walls were carved with images. Cultivators bowing. Cultivators screaming. A figure in black robes, standing above them all. Red eyes."The Devourer," Cris said."Your ring," Joe said. "I