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 CHAPTER 9 – THE ONES WHO CORRECT MISTAKES
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The holding chamber was small. No windows, just one door and a single lamp on the wall.

Ivarn sat on a stone bench, his hands chained. The chains glowed faintly, enchanted probably. He'd tried pulling at them once. They'd only gotten tighter.

The door opened. Registrar Voll stepped inside, followed by two guards.

"Stand up," Voll said.

Ivarn stood.

"You're going to answer some questions. Honestly. Quickly. Understood?"

"Understood."

Voll nodded toward the guards. They pushed Ivarn back onto the bench and took their places on either side of him.

"Where are you from?" Voll asked.

"Earth."

Voll's expression didn't move. "I've never heard of Earth."

"It's another world. Far away."

"Another world." Voll's voice was flat. "You expect me to believe that?"

"It's the truth, though I know how it sounds."

Voll studied him for a long moment. "Do you have any connection to forbidden magic?"

"No."

"Any connection to ancient beings?"

"No."

"Any connection to the Outer Silence?"

Ivarn hesitated. "I don't even know what that is."

Voll's eyes narrowed. "The Outer Silence is a place beyond the boundaries of creation. A place where discarded realities and forgotten things end up. If you have any connection to it…"

"I don't. I'd never heard of it until just now."

Voll didn't look convinced. He turned to one of the guards. "Bring the record."

The guard left. Voll turned back to Ivarn.

"A discrepancy in the Mortality Ledger isn't something we can ignore. The authorities have to determine whether you're an illusion, an artificial being, or an existence that somehow escaped its recorded ending."

"I'm just a man," Ivarn said. "I was brought to this world. I don't know how or why."

"Your explanation doesn't change the record."

The guard came back with a thin black book. Voll opened it and ran his finger down the page.

"Your name appears in the Ledger. Status: deceased. Date of death: 847 years before your birth." He looked up. "How do you explain that?"

"I can't."

"Can't, or won't?"

"Can't. I don't understand it myself."

Voll closed the book. "The celestial authority will want to question you personally. They have more advanced methods for finding the truth."

Ivarn's stomach dropped. "What does that mean?"

"It means you'll be transferred to their custody."

"When?"

"Soon."

The door opened again. A messenger slipped inside and whispered something to Voll.

Voll nodded, then turned back to Ivarn. "The celestial authority has issued an order. You're to be transferred to a celestial investigation unit immediately."

The officials in the room seemed to relax. One of the guards let out a slow breath.

Ivarn didn't.

"What's a celestial investigation unit?" he asked.

Voll didn't answer. He just gestured to the guards. "Take him to the transfer point. The enforcers will meet you there."

The guards grabbed Ivarn's arms and hauled him to his feet.

"Wait," Ivarn said. "What happens at the transfer point?"

Voll looked at him, his expression impossible to read.

"Pray you never find out."

The guards dragged him down the corridor.

Ivarn didn't pray. He didn't know who he'd even be praying to.

He just hoped he'd survive long enough to understand what was happening to him.

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