I swear I could hear my bones begging for mercy.
Every step echoed through the Valencrest halls like a reminder that I still had bones left to break. This training hurts like hell. Back on Earth, I'd been poor, not suicidal. The worst I'd gotten was a slap from life ,not a right hook laced with aura. Now, every breath felt like someone had replaced my ribs with glass shards. I was holding the wall for support as I made my way to my room....god this hurt like hell. No one met my eyes as I passed maids, guards, even the old steward by the stairs. Of course they didn't. Around here, pity was just another form of insult. And I didn't need more of those tonight. The rule of House Valencrest was simple: If you can walk, you can train. And healing potions? Those were for victors, not disappointments. I pushed open my door and blinked. There they were — my loving siblings. Darius, lounging on my bed like it was his personal throne, tossing a dagger in lazy arcs. And Aria, sitting by the window, moonlight tangled in her silver hair, arms crossed, eyes full of unspoken annoyance. Great. An audience for my dramatic collapse. Darius grinned when he saw me. "Well, look who survived. I almost bet five silvers you wouldn't.The fact you are still standing and you could walk, I'm impressed normally you'd just lie there ." "Should've gone all in," I said, dragging my feet inside. "You'd have lost big." I didn't even make it to the chair before my knees gave out. Aria was at my side instantly, catching my arm. Her touch was gentle too gentle for a Valencrest. "He went too far this time," she muttered, voice low. "Your training wasn't supposed to start until dawn." Her brows knitted, but she said nothing. Darius tossed a cloth at her, and the two of them started cleaning me up , cold water, no potions, because, of course, rules. They didn't talk much. Neither did I. The silence said enough. When Darius finally stepped back, he exhaled. "Lucien… just keep your head low this week, alright? He's pushing harder than usual." "I wish , unfortunately I have to do this for the rest of the week with no health potions because I'm weak." Aria shot Darius a glare " Little brother I know it's tough just know you always have us." "I know," I muttered, eyes half-shut. " They really love their brother , I can see genuine concern. They exchanged a look — concern and frustration all wrapped in that Valencrest pride that wouldn't let them show too much. When they finally left, Aria glanced back once. Just once. Her expression softened then hardened again as she closed the door. And then it was just me. And pain. I slid down until I was lying flat on the floor. It was cold, hard, and for some reason, better than the bed. "This body's built like wet paper," I groaned. "One hit and everything's screaming." Still… that training session—if you could call it that—did show me something. My father's movements weren't just fast. They were patterned. Precise. Almost measurable. That's data. That's progress. I stared at the ceiling, half-laughing through a grimace. I wondered how strong this family really is and then I realized I don't even know how this world ranks like those webnovels. "Architect," I whispered, "show me this world's ranking system." The familiar flicker hit my mind. [Information Request Detected: "Ranking System"] [Cost: 20 Points] [Confirm?] "You have got to be kidding me !!! You just want to rob me blind . Fine just take it ." My head throbbed as data poured in—cold, clinical, exact. --- [WORLD CLASSIFICATION SYSTEM] TRAITS — the core of growth, this can be changed depending on how strong the individual grows . F (Gray): Barely awakened. E (Blue): Beginner cultivator. D (Green): Standard human potential. C (Yellow): Capable of reaching Master rank. B (Red): Noble-tier — powerful bloodlines. A (Purple): Heroic-tier prodigies. S (Gold): Legendary-tier bloodlines. SS: Divine-tier — anomalies. (User bloodline confirmed.) TALENTS — growth potential, same rank scale. SKILLS — Common → Rare → Epic → Legendary → Mythic. RANKS (Cultivation Stages) 1. Initiate 2. Adept 3. Expert 4. Master 5. Ascendant 6. Transcendent Aurean Valecrest :trait rank S Cultivation rank : Ascendant Darius valecrest: trait rank : A Cultivation rank: Master Aria valecrest: trait rank : A Cultivation rank: Master ... I stared blankly for a few seconds, trying to process through the fog of pain. My father — Aureon Valencrest — was an Ascendant, trait rank S My siblings — Aria and Darius — were Masters, both rank A. And me? A glorified punching bag with a D-rank body. I exhaled slowly. "Fantastic. I'm surrounded by walking cheat codes." The Architect faded out, its hum lingering in my skull like a heartbeat. This world worshipped strength. Measured it. Ranked it. Fine. Then I'd learn the system better than anyone else. Break it down. Rebuild myself from the bones up. But right now… I shifted, pain ripping through my chest. "Yeah, maybe after a small nap." I crashed face-first into the pillow, muscles twitching in protest. My last thought before sleep hit was simple: "If pain builds character, I'm about to become a legend." And with that, darkness took over.Latest Chapter
Hope doesn’t move mountains
I'm mad.No mad doesn't even begin to cover it. I had dragged Noah and ran back to our base in the exam . Luckily the others were there visibly shaken except Yelena. Surprising.My hands won't stop shaking, and I don't know if it's anger or the leftover vibration from the explosion. My pulse is hammering in my ears like a war drum, and every time I blink, I see her face again.Her eyes wide.Her mouth open, begging for air.Why am I so fucking angry?She wasn't even my real mother . My real mother is dead I know. I haven't even been in this world up to a month. So why do I care about a woman I never met. It doesn't make any sense.She wasn't supposed to die like that. No one is.Rhazar didn't just kill her he enjoyed it. Every second. Every scream. Like it was an orchestra and her pain was the music.My chest feels tight. Too tight. I want to break something. Punch a wall. Punch him. Punch myself for even feeling this shit.Because emotions are useless. They don't stop monsters. They
Pure rage
The crowd was roaring.A sea of nobles and civilians filled the Suncoast Grand Stadium, faces painted with colors of their favored houses, eyes locked on the shimmering panels that floated midair—each one showing the live feeds of the ongoing military exam."Group Eleven has captured their seventh crystal!" cried Ajsi, the commentator, his voice booming through the arena. "Incredible coordination! That's Valecrest efficiency for you, ladies and gentlemen!"Cheers erupted again.In the main screen, Lucien Valecrest, only eighteen, was moving like water and lightning combined sharp, deliberate, never wasting a single motion. His team moved as if they shared one mind. Where others panicked, Group Eleven adapted. Their strategies weren't flashy, but devastatingly effective. Each formation they faced fell in under a minute.He didn't see the crowd.Didn't hear the cheers.He was simply doing what he always did working.No wasted effort. No arrogance. Just relentless precision.Somewhere in
Let’s have fun
The stadium was alive.Mana screens hovered across the air, each one displaying a different battlefield view squads sprinting through mist, mana blades clashing, crystals glinting like captured stars. Cheers erupted every few seconds as names rose and fell on the shimmering leaderboard.And right there at the top, glowing in gold light, was one team that had everyone talking.Group 11 – 5 crystals acquired "Unbelievable!" the commentator's voice boomed through the speakers, brimming with excitement. "Group 11 takes another crystal that's their third raid in under ten minutes! Look at that coordination! The Valecrest prodigy really wasn't bluffing!"The camera shifted, zooming in on a forest glade bathed in early sun. Ten figures moved like clockwork silent, fluid, precise.Lucien Valecrest was at the center, cloak fluttering as he signaled his team with two short pulses of mana.A blur of motion followed.Ryn dove from a ridge, his glaive slicing through the mist as he cleared the
Before the disaster
We had thirty minutes to prepare before the assessment began.Thirty minutes to pretend ten strangers could think like one army.The tent was alive with flickering lights from the mana crystals, the holographic map hovering in the air.And at its center stood Her Royal Sunlight herself Aurora Ardenthal, princess of Suncoast."Alright," she said crisply, her voice carrying that royal precision that made everyone straighten instinctively. "We'll form a perimeter here. Ryn, Cael, Auren...frontline engagement. Serlene and Seris...defensive watch. Noah—support. Kael....long range. I'll anchor the core."She looked proud, confident, every gesture measured and graceful.And for a moment, it almost felt like she had it under control..Until Yelena spoke."Oh, how adorable," the elf princess drawled from where she leaned against a pole, her silver hair practically glowing under the light. "A little human princess pretending to be a general."Aurora's tone didn't waver. "You have a better pl
Reality check
The hall was loud.Two hundred students. Two hundred future soldiers pretending they weren't terrified. Like here was a social event or something.I sat at the back, arms crossed, eyes half-lidded pretending not to care.Aurora's voice from earlier still echoed in my head."My condolences… about your mother."Condolences.For a woman I never knew.For a past that wasn't mine.Ever since I woke up in this world, everyone looked at me with that same pitiful expression, like they knew some tragedy I didn't. I couldn't help but wonder who was she? A warrior? Someone powerful enough for people to still remember her name?Before I could think further, the sound of boots striking marble silenced the entire hall.He walked in without fanfare, but the air shifted instantly. Mana tightened. Conversation died. Even the lights dimmed a little, as if the room itself bent under his presence.Ian Stormbringer.The man who needed no crest, no title, no royal favor. A Transcendent. One of the few l
Gathering of future heroes
The waiting hall of the trials thrummed with mana.So thick, you could almost taste it in the air metallic, heavy, alive. Power gathered here like a storm behind closed doors.Hundreds of candidates stood in clusters nobles in their crested cloaks, mercenaries wrapped in rough leather, and the rare commoner trembling in borrowed robes.But Lucien Valecrest?He leaned lazily against a marble pillar, eyes half-lidded, scanning the hall with a faint smirk.So these are the so-called prodigies of the new generation... huh.His gaze moved like a blade dissecting, classifying, filing away every aura and posture.The first pair that caught his eye stood bathed in light near the front golden hair like sunlight itself, red eyes burning with confidence.The royal twins. Aurean and Aurora Ardenthal.He'd heard rumors that their family claimed descent from the Solar Thrones.Aurean laughed too loudly, swinging his arm around a nervous candidate. "Relax! We're all friends here unless you trip
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