Dawn came too soon.
And by "too soon," I mean my body still felt like someone used it as target practice for a brick-throwing competition. Every muscle screamed in protest as I pulled myself out of bed. My ribs ached, my shoulders burned, and I swear my legs had a personal vendetta against gravity. But hey , pain means you're alive, right? Father was already in the courtyard, moving through his forms with that same ruthless precision. The morning mist coiled around him like he was part of it grace wrapped in danger. "Begin," he said when he saw me. No greeting, no pity. Just that single word. I took my stance, even though my knees shook a little. The first strike came fast. I barely dodged. The second hit landed clean across my shoulder, and stars burst in my vision. This training hurts like hell, I thought grimly. I was never beaten on Earth even when I was broke… but this? This is a different level of torture . My old gym teacher would cry if he saw this. Father didn't slow down, and neither did I. Each movement he made carved new bruises into my body, but something in me refused to fall this time. Three hours. That's how long it went on. Three hours of strikes, counters, and the kind of silence that turns into thunder in your skull. At the end, Father paused. His eyes narrowed slightly not out of anger, but… surprise. "You're trying to mimic my stance," he said quietly, almost amused. "And you're not half bad at it." I didn't answer. Just reset my feet, copying the pivot of his heel, the slight tilt of his elbow. My breathing was a mess, but I kept my poker face. Words were a waste of air right now. He smirked faintly and gestured again. "Then show me, Lucien Valencrest. Show me if you can be me and not a pathetic worm. I moved. He moved faster. And even though every bone in my body begged to stop, I kept mirroring him each parry, each shift of weight. Somewhere between agony and instinct, my mind lit up. Patterns. Angles. Openings. It was like my brain started predicting the next motion before it even happened. I was getting the hang if it and it was exhilarating. ... After we finally stopped, I lay against the courtyard wall, chest heaving. For a moment, the world tilted. Then I heard noises outside like sparring I instantly knew it was my siblings. I had never seen them spar before. So, naturally, I dragged myself there like a moth chasing a bonfire. Aria and Darius valecrest. I haven't known them for long but one thing I can say is they are powerful extremely powerful. Aria with her silver hair blown by the wind and her emerald eyes shining dangerously and Darius with his black hair falling down and his emerald eyes looking a little carefree. I think I inherited my mother's looks her eyes and hair , then Darius took my father's hair and my mum's eyes . Then Aria just decided to have silver I guess. I wonder what happened to our mother guess I'll find out later. Aria and Darius stood in the center of the arena. Both moved with that same dark aura that ran in our bloodline the Veilborne Shade our aura of darkness. Their shadows stretched unnaturally, sharp and alive. I leaned against a pillar, squinting. "Time Genius," I muttered under my breath. The world slowed. Lines of motion mapped themselves before my eyes each strike dissected, each counter split apart like data on a screen. Aria's footwork precise. She favored the Vyre Sweep, an ancient technique once used by the Dusk Legion of Caleron I think I read it somewhere I can't remember. Her darkness aura coiled low, meant to disorient, not destroy. Darius, on the other hand, used brute rhythm. His every swing followed the Gravemind Pattern , a style designed to suppress the opponent's reaction time. Old. Efficient. Brutal. Then I caught it—the faint twitch before Aria's dodge, the breath before Darius's thrust. Tiny cues. Weak points. So that's how they move, I thought, the corners of my lips twitching upward. Beautiful. Predictable. Dangerous. I was halfway through decoding their last exchange when my head throbbed. Hard. Like a metal spike driving through my skull. The lines of motion blurred, the slow world snapped back to speed, and I couldn't think straight. [ WARNING: Mental stress detected ] [ Brain compression slowed : host cannot comprehend more at the moment] "Damn it… too much input…" The words barely left my mouth before the pain spiked. My brain was on fire, and I stumbled forward, clutching my temple. I let out a grunt as I feel on my knees. "Lucien?" Aria's voice sounded distant. Darius dropped his stance immediately. "Hey....he's....!!!!! The last thing I saw was their shadows breaking formation, running toward me before the world folded into darkness.Latest Chapter
Hope doesn’t move mountains
I'm mad.No mad doesn't even begin to cover it. I had dragged Noah and ran back to our base in the exam . Luckily the others were there visibly shaken except Yelena. Surprising.My hands won't stop shaking, and I don't know if it's anger or the leftover vibration from the explosion. My pulse is hammering in my ears like a war drum, and every time I blink, I see her face again.Her eyes wide.Her mouth open, begging for air.Why am I so fucking angry?She wasn't even my real mother . My real mother is dead I know. I haven't even been in this world up to a month. So why do I care about a woman I never met. It doesn't make any sense.She wasn't supposed to die like that. No one is.Rhazar didn't just kill her he enjoyed it. Every second. Every scream. Like it was an orchestra and her pain was the music.My chest feels tight. Too tight. I want to break something. Punch a wall. Punch him. Punch myself for even feeling this shit.Because emotions are useless. They don't stop monsters. They
Pure rage
The crowd was roaring.A sea of nobles and civilians filled the Suncoast Grand Stadium, faces painted with colors of their favored houses, eyes locked on the shimmering panels that floated midair—each one showing the live feeds of the ongoing military exam."Group Eleven has captured their seventh crystal!" cried Ajsi, the commentator, his voice booming through the arena. "Incredible coordination! That's Valecrest efficiency for you, ladies and gentlemen!"Cheers erupted again.In the main screen, Lucien Valecrest, only eighteen, was moving like water and lightning combined sharp, deliberate, never wasting a single motion. His team moved as if they shared one mind. Where others panicked, Group Eleven adapted. Their strategies weren't flashy, but devastatingly effective. Each formation they faced fell in under a minute.He didn't see the crowd.Didn't hear the cheers.He was simply doing what he always did working.No wasted effort. No arrogance. Just relentless precision.Somewhere in
Let’s have fun
The stadium was alive.Mana screens hovered across the air, each one displaying a different battlefield view squads sprinting through mist, mana blades clashing, crystals glinting like captured stars. Cheers erupted every few seconds as names rose and fell on the shimmering leaderboard.And right there at the top, glowing in gold light, was one team that had everyone talking.Group 11 – 5 crystals acquired "Unbelievable!" the commentator's voice boomed through the speakers, brimming with excitement. "Group 11 takes another crystal that's their third raid in under ten minutes! Look at that coordination! The Valecrest prodigy really wasn't bluffing!"The camera shifted, zooming in on a forest glade bathed in early sun. Ten figures moved like clockwork silent, fluid, precise.Lucien Valecrest was at the center, cloak fluttering as he signaled his team with two short pulses of mana.A blur of motion followed.Ryn dove from a ridge, his glaive slicing through the mist as he cleared the
Before the disaster
We had thirty minutes to prepare before the assessment began.Thirty minutes to pretend ten strangers could think like one army.The tent was alive with flickering lights from the mana crystals, the holographic map hovering in the air.And at its center stood Her Royal Sunlight herself Aurora Ardenthal, princess of Suncoast."Alright," she said crisply, her voice carrying that royal precision that made everyone straighten instinctively. "We'll form a perimeter here. Ryn, Cael, Auren...frontline engagement. Serlene and Seris...defensive watch. Noah—support. Kael....long range. I'll anchor the core."She looked proud, confident, every gesture measured and graceful.And for a moment, it almost felt like she had it under control..Until Yelena spoke."Oh, how adorable," the elf princess drawled from where she leaned against a pole, her silver hair practically glowing under the light. "A little human princess pretending to be a general."Aurora's tone didn't waver. "You have a better pl
Reality check
The hall was loud.Two hundred students. Two hundred future soldiers pretending they weren't terrified. Like here was a social event or something.I sat at the back, arms crossed, eyes half-lidded pretending not to care.Aurora's voice from earlier still echoed in my head."My condolences… about your mother."Condolences.For a woman I never knew.For a past that wasn't mine.Ever since I woke up in this world, everyone looked at me with that same pitiful expression, like they knew some tragedy I didn't. I couldn't help but wonder who was she? A warrior? Someone powerful enough for people to still remember her name?Before I could think further, the sound of boots striking marble silenced the entire hall.He walked in without fanfare, but the air shifted instantly. Mana tightened. Conversation died. Even the lights dimmed a little, as if the room itself bent under his presence.Ian Stormbringer.The man who needed no crest, no title, no royal favor. A Transcendent. One of the few l
Gathering of future heroes
The waiting hall of the trials thrummed with mana.So thick, you could almost taste it in the air metallic, heavy, alive. Power gathered here like a storm behind closed doors.Hundreds of candidates stood in clusters nobles in their crested cloaks, mercenaries wrapped in rough leather, and the rare commoner trembling in borrowed robes.But Lucien Valecrest?He leaned lazily against a marble pillar, eyes half-lidded, scanning the hall with a faint smirk.So these are the so-called prodigies of the new generation... huh.His gaze moved like a blade dissecting, classifying, filing away every aura and posture.The first pair that caught his eye stood bathed in light near the front golden hair like sunlight itself, red eyes burning with confidence.The royal twins. Aurean and Aurora Ardenthal.He'd heard rumors that their family claimed descent from the Solar Thrones.Aurean laughed too loudly, swinging his arm around a nervous candidate. "Relax! We're all friends here unless you trip
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