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CHAPTER 137: THE COMMENT SECTION'S REVENGE
Author: Joe
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The descent into the Void wasn't a fall; it was a sensory assault. We weren't dropping through air, but through layers of vitriol and discarded drafts. The darkness around us wasn't empty—it was crowded with floating, jagged shards of text.

"Cassian, look out! The grammar's sharp!" Elena screamed, pulling me to the left as a massive, glowing red 'TYPO' sliced through the space where my head had been.

"I see it!" I roared, my golden-ink hand flaring.

Behind us, the swarm of "Readers" was gaining
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  • CHAPTER 137: THE COMMENT SECTION'S REVENGE

    The descent into the Void wasn't a fall; it was a sensory assault. We weren't dropping through air, but through layers of vitriol and discarded drafts. The darkness around us wasn't empty—it was crowded with floating, jagged shards of text."Cassian, look out! The grammar's sharp!" Elena screamed, pulling me to the left as a massive, glowing red 'TYPO' sliced through the space where my head had been."I see it!" I roared, my golden-ink hand flaring.Behind us, the swarm of "Readers" was gaining. They weren't people anymore; they were avatars of pure, unadulterated entitlement, their faces replaced by glowing profile pictures."Pacing is trash! Too much talking!" a giant, armored avatar with the username PlotHoleHunter yelled, swinging a mace made of negative reviews."Face-slap the critic!" I spun in mid-air, kicking off a floating fragment of Chapter 12. I slammed my blackened fist into the avatar’s chest.CRUNCH.The armor shattered into a million low-rating stars. The avatar didn't

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  • CHAPTER 134: THE DIGITAL EXECUTION

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