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CHAPTER FIVE: The First Real Move
Author: Miller Ariel
last update2026-04-18 00:13:16

Ethan walked through the busy downtown streets, the warm morning sun hitting his face but doing little to calm the fire burning steadily in his chest. The Wealth Sense pulled at him like an invisible hand, stronger and more insistent now after the small victory in the café. He had just invested $80,000, received a $10,000 bonus from the system, and felt a new level waiting just around the corner. For the first time in years, he wasn’t just surviving — he was moving forward with purpose.

He stopped in front of a sleek glass building that towered above the street — the headquarters of Horizon Group. This was the same company whose representatives he had helped only minutes ago. His phone buzzed with a notification. The contract had already been emailed to him. Simple. Fast. Clean. Exactly the kind of efficiency he needed right now.

But as he stood there on the sidewalk, another notification popped up in his vision, glowing brighter than before.

[Wealth Sense has detected a high-value target nearby.]

[Opportunity: Public confrontation with a Reed family associate.]

[Reward: 500 EXP + Random Skill Fragment]

Ethan’s lips curved into a cold, dangerous smile. The system was already learning exactly what kind of man he was becoming.

He pushed through the revolving doors and entered the building’s ground-floor lounge area. It was a luxurious space with soft leather seats, polished marble floors, and the rich aroma of expensive espresso. Well-dressed professionals sat in small groups, talking business in low voices. Ethan’s eyes scanned the room carefully, and then he saw him.

Daniel Reed — Sophia’s older cousin. The same arrogant man who had shoved him hard at the birthday party and called him a parasite in front of everyone. Daniel was sitting at a corner table with two other businessmen, laughing loudly while sipping his coffee, acting like he owned the entire city.

The Wealth Sense flared hot in Ethan’s chest, almost burning. This was the target.

Without hesitation, Ethan walked straight toward their table. Daniel looked up first, and his expression shifted rapidly — from casual amusement to shock, then to pure contempt.

“You?” Daniel sneered, his voice loud enough that several nearby tables turned to look. “The useless live-in trash? What the hell are you doing in a place like this? This is a private business meeting. Get lost before I call security and have you thrown out like the dog you are.”

The two businessmen with him chuckled, looking Ethan up and down with clear disdain, as if he were something filthy that had wandered in from the street.

Ethan stopped right in front of the table, his posture straight and confident. His voice came out calm but carried clearly across the lounge. “Daniel Reed. Still throwing your weight around like you own the world, huh?”

Daniel laughed mockingly, leaning back in his chair. “Own the world? Compared to a worthless parasite like you, yes. You’re the same broke loser who got slapped around by Marcus last night. Sophia told me everything. You really thought you could lay a hand on her? Pathetic. You were never good enough for her, and you never will be.”

One of the businessmen smirked. “Is this the famous ‘son-in-law’ we’ve heard stories about? The one who lived like a servant in the Reed villa? How embarrassing.”

Ethan felt the old familiar rage rise in his chest, but this time it was different — controlled, sharp, and backed by real power. He leaned forward slightly, his eyes locked on Daniel.

“You know, Daniel, four years ago I sacrificed everything for your family. I dropped out of university without hesitation. I took every dirty, low-paying job I could find. I borrowed money I could barely repay. I lived like a servant in your villa while you and your relatives called me a parasite and a freeloader every single day. I endured all of it because I loved Sophia. And what did I get in return?”

He paused, letting the words hang in the air as more people in the lounge started paying attention.

“Humiliation. Betrayal. A public stomp on my hand like I was nothing but dirt under Marcus Sterling’s shoe.”

Daniel’s face twisted with anger. “And you deserved every bit of it. Now get out of here before I—”

Before he could finish the sentence, Ethan raised his hand and delivered a clean, powerful SLAP! across Daniel’s face.

The sound cracked sharply through the entire lounge like a whip. Daniel’s head snapped violently to the side, his expensive coffee cup flying out of his hand and spilling across the table. A bright red handprint immediately bloomed on his cheek.

Gasps erupted from nearby tables. Several people pulled out their phones to record.

[Face-slap completed against Reed family member! +450 EXP (x3 Revenge Multiplier)]

[Level Up! You are now Level 7.]

[You have received 5 Free Attribute Points.]

Daniel clutched his reddened cheek, eyes wide with shock and fury. “You… you dare hit me?! In public?! I’ll ruin you! My family will destroy everything you have left! You’re finished in this city!”

Ethan looked down at him with cold, steady eyes. “You already tried to ruin me once. Now it’s my turn to return the favor.”

He turned his gaze to the two stunned businessmen sitting at the table. “Gentlemen, if you’re currently doing any business with the Reed family, I suggest you reconsider. Their time sitting at the top is coming to an end faster than you think.”

One of the men actually looked nervous. The other stayed silent, but his phone was clearly recording the entire scene.

Ethan allocated his new attribute points quickly — three into Intelligence and two into Charm. He could already feel the subtle shift in how people around him were looking at him. The weak, broken loser from yesterday was disappearing fast.

As he turned to walk out of the lounge, the system gave him another satisfying notification.

[Side Mission Progress: Public Face-Slap against Reed family — 1/3 completed.]

[Bonus Reward: +$15,000 added to your balance for successful public confrontation.]

Ethan checked his phone as he stepped back onto the sidewalk. Another $15,000 had appeared in his account. His total balance was climbing faster than he had expected.

But as he started walking again, his phone rang once more. This time it was an unknown number. He answered it.

A deep, authoritative, and coldly familiar voice came through the line. “Ethan Kane. This is Richard Reed, Sophia’s father. You have caused more than enough trouble for one night. Come to the Reed family villa tonight at 8 PM sharp. We need to have a serious conversation about your recent… unacceptable behavior.”

Ethan’s grip tightened on the phone. Richard Reed — the man who had looked down on him for four years, treating him like a worthless servant in his own home.

A dangerous smile slowly spread across Ethan’s face.

“I’ll be there,” he replied quietly. “But this time, the conversation will be on my terms.”

He hung up the call.

Almost immediately, the system responded with a new notification.

[New Main Mission Updated: Confront the Reed Family]

Task: Attend the family meeting tonight and deliver at least two public face-slaps or major humiliations.

Reward: Major EXP boost + New God-tier Skill + $50,000 cash reward.

Ethan looked up at the tall glass buildings surrounding him, the city stretching out in every direction like a giant chessboard waiting for his next move.

The old Ethan — the weak, betrayed loser who let everyone step on him — was gone forever.

The new Ethan was rising.

And the Reed family had no idea what kind of storm was coming for them tonight.

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