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Breathing in the Dark
Author: Joey Macallan
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We ran.

I don't remember deciding to run, just the sudden certainty that standing still in that corridor was the last mistake either of us would get to make. Marcus's hand stayed locked on my shoulder the entire way, guiding as much as being guided, both of us stumbling blind until my palm hit the cold metal of the elevator doors and I found the call button by feel alone. Behind us, low and steady, something kept pace, never closing the distance, never falling back either, a sound like a chest twice the size of any human chest pulling air through a throat that had never once needed to sound gentle before.

The car arrived lit and ordinary, twelve floors of normal, familiar fluorescent light waiting behind the doors like nothing at all had happened one level up. We threw ourselves inside. I hit the button for the lobby three times before the doors finally agreed to close, and the whole ride down neither of us said a word, both of us watching the gap between the doors like something might force its way through before the metal sealed all the way shut.

Neither of us spoke a single word until we hit ground floor.

"That was breathing," Marcus said, staring at the numbers ticking down like he still didn't trust them. "I heard it. You heard it too, don't tell me you didn't."

"I heard it too. Every second of it."

"What is that thing? What did it mean about Vale?"

I didn't have an answer that wouldn't sound insane out loud, so I didn't try one. The doors opened on the lobby and neither of us moved right away, both of us checking the gap one more time before stepping out, as if the dark from thirteen floors up might have found a way to follow us down in the wiring. It hadn't. Or if it had, it was patient enough not to show itself yet.

"I need you to level with me," Marcus said, once we'd caught our breath. "This isn't a maintenance problem. This isn't a gas leak the city can send an inspector to fix. Are we talking about something actually supernatural right now, because I need to hear you say it before I go back up there with you again."

"I think so. Yeah."

"Okay." He nodded slowly, like agreeing to it out loud made it something he could carry instead of something that was carrying him. "Okay. Then we do this smart. No more going in blind."

"Agreed."

"I mean it, Nate. Next time we go up there, we go up there with something better than a flashlight and a radio."

"What did you have in mind?"

"I don't know yet. Salt. Rope. A priest, maybe, if Atlanta's got one who takes this kind of call. Anything's better than what we walked in there with tonight."

We found Preston Vale in the lobby still fielding questions from two Atlanta PD officers, his composure fraying at the edges in a way I'd never seen from him before, not once in six years of partnership. He saw my face and something in his expression flinched.

"You went back up there," he said quietly, once the officers stepped away.

"It told me you didn't frame me on your own," I said. "It told me it's been running your entire career. Is that true?"

Vale's jaw worked. For a long moment I thought he'd deny it the way he denied everything, smooth and practiced, but instead he just looked tired in a way that finally matched the fear underneath his eyes.

"I never asked it for anything," he said. "It offered. Right after the licensing board announced their investigation into you, before I even had time to feel guilty about it, I got a call from a number I didn't recognize telling me the outcome I wanted was already decided. I told myself it was a coincidence for months, Nathaniel. I told myself a lot of things."

"You let me lose everything so you could keep a client happy."

"I let it happen because I was terrified of what would happen to me if I said no." He rubbed his eyes, and for a second he looked less like the man on the magazine covers and more like someone who hadn't slept in eighteen months. "You think I don't regret it? You think I sleep well in that penthouse, knowing what's under the floor?"

"You've had eighteen months to make it right and you spent them hiring contractors who quit the second they saw the truth. That's not regret. That's cowardice dressed up as regret."

"Regret doesn't get my brother back."

"No," Vale said quietly. "It doesn't. But I'll do whatever you need me to do. I mean that, Nathaniel. Whatever you need."

"You could start by telling the police the truth about that missing tenant."

"And tell them what, exactly? That my building is haunted? They'd have me committed before they'd open a case."

"Better than letting more people vanish while you protect your name."

Vale didn't answer that. He just looked past me, toward the elevators, like he half expected the doors to open on their own again.

I didn't have room left in me to feel sympathy for him, not with Eli still missing and Marcus still shaking beside me and a voice in my skull that had just confessed to ruining my life on purpose. I turned to leave.

My phone rang.

Eli's contact photo again, the same Falcons game selfie, and this time when I answered, the voice on the other end sounded exactly like him, tired and a little annoyed, nothing rehearsed or wrong about it.

"Where have you been calling me from all night," he said. "I've got, like, nine missed calls. You good?"

"Eli. Where are you right now."

"Home. Where else would I be at four in the morning? I worked a double at the cafe, I crashed the second I got in." A pause, confusion creeping into his voice. "Nate, why do you sound like that. What's going on?"

I stood in the middle of the Meridian's lobby holding a phone with my brother's very real, very confused voice coming out of it, and for the first time all night I had absolutely no idea which version of the truth I was supposed to believe.

"Stay exactly where you are," I said. "Don't open your door for anyone. Not even for me."

"Nate, you're scaring me."

"Good," I said. "Stay scared. It's the only thing keeping you safe."

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