All Chapters of HEAVEN'S FORSAKEN SON: Chapter 1
- Chapter 10
13 chapters
Ashes of a Birthright
The yard of the Darkveil Clan brimmed with noise.The spring wind gently blew against the lantern. That day was supposed to be a day of celebration because three sons had been born that morning. Each of them carried the bloodline of the Darkveil name.The clan gathered with eager faces with their eyes bright with expectation.On a raised dais, elders cradled two swaddled infants. A soft glow of qi shimmered faintly around their tiny bodies and the mark of spiritual roots had already stirred within them.“Look at them,” someone whispered. “Blessed from birth. They will bring pride to our clan.”Cheers erupted from the people present. Mothers smiled and fathers straightened their backs in pride. These children, blessed by the heavens, were already destined for cultivation.But then, a heavy silence fell. A third infant was carried forward. He was small, quiet, his skin was pale and his cries were very weak. There was no glow of qi surrounding him. This was Arin Darkveil.The clan physi
The last protector
The nights in the Darkveil Clan were always too quiet.For Arin, silence meant safety. There were no laughter, no murmurs among the people that he was cursed and no boys waiting to shove him in the dirt.But the silence was never empty. Because his mother was always there with him. Selene Darkveil was not the strongest cultivator, nor the most powerful. Her roots were modest and her cultivation only at the mid stages of Spirit Foundation. Yet to Arin, she was a fortress no wall could compare to.When others turned their backs, she turned toward him. When others mocked, she smiled at him.He remembered nights when she sat beside his bed, holding his hand until sleep took him.“Close your eyes, Arin,” she whispered. “Dream of a place where no one calls you cursed. Dream of the path you will one day walk.”And he did.When other children trained with swords, Selene gave him sticks and taught him how to hold them and how to balance his feet. Not because he could fight, but because she wa
Awakening Ceremony
The yard of the Darkveil Clan glowed with lantern light.The Awakening Ceremony came only once every decade. It was the day the clan’s youths revealed their fates, tested their roots, and secured their place in the hierarchy of the clan.Bright banners snapped in the wind. Elders with sharp eyes stood in a half-circle with expectations. The stone altar in the center vibrated faintly with ancient qi. The stone was ready to measure meridians.All the children lined up in ceremonial attire. They looked nervous, eager and trembling with dreams of glory.Arin Darkveil stood among them. His small fists clenched inside his sleeves.His hands were pale, cold and trembling. He rubbed his thumb over a hidden scrap of cloth stitched with a broken-spoke symbol which was his mother’s last gift.The cloth gave him strength. But not enough to silence the murmurs around him.“There’s the cripple.”“Why let him take the test?”“He’ll shame us all over again.”Arin kept his head bowed. His ears burned
Ding! The System
The first punch drove the air from Arin’s lungs. His body slammed into the training yard’s dirt and ribs screamed in pain. Dust rose around him in a choking cloud, but the laughter of the other clan youths still cut through. It was sharp and cruel.“Trash.”“Can’t even take one hit.”“Why does the clan keep feeding him?”Kael stood above him. His fists burn faintly with ember light. His smirk curved cruelly.“You embarrassed me today,” Kael said. “So I’ll carve that shame into your bones.”His boot crashed into Arin’s side. Pain ripped through him. Arin coughed blood, the copper taste flooding his mouth.The world blurred at the edges. His body screamed to surrender. To curl up and stay down. or better still, just vanish.But his heart… his heart refused.‘No. Not like this. Not on the ground.’Kael dragged him up by his collar and drove a fist into his stomach.Something cracked. Arin gasped, bile and blood spilled from his lips.Another blow snapped across his face. His vision went
Small victories
The yard was silent when dawn came across the Darkveil compound.Children still slept in their quarters. Elders had not yet begun their morning routines.Only Arin moved.His body ached from the beating. His ribs were still tender, bruises painted his skin in ugly red stains. As the first light broke, the familiar cold chime echoed inside his skull.“Ding! Daily Quests Generated.First: Perform 200 basic strikes. Reward: +0.5 Strength. Penalty: –1 year lifespan.Two: Practice meridian breathing for 30 minutes. Reward: +1 Qi Sensitivity. Penalty: –1 year lifespan.Three: Survive one confrontation. Reward: Minor Stamina Recovery. Penalty: –2 years lifespan.”Arin’s eyes widened at the last line. ‘I must survive one confrontation?’It didn’t say win. It didn’t say defeat. Only survive.The system wasn’t merciful. But it wasn’t entirely cruel either.Still… if he ignored them, he said would lose years of his life. And he had only seventeen.He began his practice in the corner of the cla
The Dragon Vein fist
The torches burned bright in the night wind.Hunters stood tall in their beast-leather armor, scarred and confident. Their weapons gleamed beneath the moon. Clan youths of which Kael was among them grinned, puffed their chests, and spoke of glory as if it were already theirs.“Tonight, we must return with blood on our blades,” Kael declared with fire sparking faintly at his fingertips. “Let the beast learn who the Darkveil are.”The crowd cheered.Arin, however, lingered at the edge of the gathering.He wasn’t called. He wasn’t invited. No one expected the cripple to step forward. But when the volunteers marched into the forest, Arin slipped behind them. He was as silent as night. The scrap of his mother’s cloth tied around his wrist.His heart pounded. The system had chimed before he left.“Ding! Special Quest Generated.Objective: Witness a Spirit Beast Hunt. Optional: Land a killing strike.Reward: Reputation +10, Meridian Repair FragmentPenalty: –3 years lifespan.”Arin couldn’t
Exposure and Exile
The yard of the Darkveil clan glowed with solemnity. It was the inspection day.The elders stood tall upon the raised platform. Their robes were lined with silver and crimson. Their eyes are sharp as blades. Before them, the clan’s youths gathered in rows with weapons in their hands. Each ready to display their progress.For Arin, it should have been another day of humiliation. He should have been invisible and mocked like before. But fate was cruel.And the system never allowed him to remain unseen.“Kael Darkveil, step forward,” called the First Elder.Kael walked to the front. His aura flared. Fire moved around him like a serpent of red flame. That made the crowd gasp. He executed a fierce strike, scorching the practice ground black.“Excellent,” the elders murmured. “Truly, the clan’s brightest star.”Kael smirked, basking in praise.“Next,” the elder barked. “Bring forth the others.”The names were called, youths performed, then applause rose and fell.And unexpectedly, “Arin Dar
Wilderness and Lyra
The wilderness was merciless.Arin stumbled through a tangle of thorn-bushes. His breath ragged and his ribs ached from another close encounter. His clothes were torn and streaked with blood. The moon hung cold above him. Silver light poured over a land teeming with beasts.Every direction was like death itself Yet, the system would not let him stop.“Ding! Survival Quest Update.Objective: Endure wilderness trial, Shelter, food, water secured within 24 hours.Time Remaining: 2 hours, 17 minutes.Penalty: –10 years lifespan.”Arin’s pulse hammered. He had secured water from a muddy stream, but food and shelter? He had seen nothing. His stomach clawed at itself in hunger.If he failed and if the timer struck zero, he would lose years of his life in an instant.He staggered onward. Growls echoed in the distance. Every rustle of leaves whispered in the darkness. “Is this how they expect me to die?” he muttered, clutching his mother’s cloth at his wrist.The night deepened, getting cold
Return & Tournament Omen
The wind howled across the barren ridge as two figures made their way along the frozen path.Arin walked with steady strides now. He was no longer the broken youth who had left his clan’s gates in humiliation. His qi flowed smoother and his meridians no longer felt like chains of fire tearing through his flesh. Instead, his body pulsed with faint power, subtle and yet undeniable.Beside him walked Lyra Frostwind. Her pale cloak fluttered like a shard. She said little, but every so often her icy gaze drifted toward him, as if measuring the changes in his stance and the growing strength in his aura.The wilderness had carved him anew.Days bled into nights. Their journey toward civilization became a crucible.At dawn, Arin drilled Dragon Vein Fist until his knuckles split. The system chimed relentlessly, issuing quests that rebuilt him.“Ding! Daily Training Quest: Perform 500 Dragon Vein Strikes.Reward: Dragon Vein Fist Proficiency +5%.Penalty: –2 years lifespan if failed.”His arms
Duel & Thrones Cracking
The tournament grounds shook with the roar of the crowd. Sunlight was bright across the martial arena. It glinted off already clean weapons and the gilded through thrones where the clan elders sat in judgment.Youth after youth clashed upon the sand. Each duel was a combat of qi and sword. Cheers rose when fire erupted and when blades hit one another.Arin stood silent at the edges, cloak drawn, watching. His turn had not yet come, but people talked about him wherever he went.“That’s him, the exile.”“He dares fight in the tournament?”“Maybe he’ll collapse before he even takes a stance.”They sneered. But their voices trembled faintly now, for some had already seen his controlled strikes in the early rounds where he dispatched opponents without wasted movement.Arin never revealed the full breadth of his strength. Yet each clash carried a weight that made the crowd gasp in shock. His fists struck like dragons hidden in mist and his footwork impossibly fluid for a boy once branded cr