All Chapters of My Great Fortune System : Chapter 11
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The Call
[Congratulations!][Quest Completed.][$10,000 has been added to your wealth.][5% rebate for all purchases has been activated.]"A five percent rebate?" Gray leaned back on the park bench, staring at the floating screen. "That's actually pretty good."He was sitting alone in a public park while Lily played nearby. The weather was perfect. Probably one of the first times in years that he and Lily had gone out just to relax and enjoy the fresh air.In the past, Gray never had time for days like this. He was always working, always rushing from one job to the next, always exhausted. And despite all that effort, they'd stayed dirt poor anyway.But now? Now he was jobless and somehow had more money than he'd ever seen in his life. He was sitting on a bench doing absolutely nothing, and ten thousand dollars just appeared in his account.Life was strange sometimes."So how does the rebate work exactly, System?"[Ding!][The Rebate feature allows the Host to earn back 5% of all money spent. T
Step One Done
"Damn." Gray stared at his phone like it had just betrayed him."Really? Right when I was about to do something important?" He looked at the screen as if it had personally insulted him.He checked again, hoping he'd somehow read it wrong.Remaining balance: 0Gray stood there under the tree for a moment. Then he dragged his hand down his face and let out a long, hard sigh."I was nervous for nothing!" His voice came out almost offended. "I hyped myself up. Gave myself a whole pep talk. Built up all this courage. And I can't even make the damn call?"He looked up at the sky dramatically, arms spread slightly."Really? I have a fancy black card and thousands of dollars in my account, but I can't afford a single phone call?"[Ding!][Host, would you like to load your phone using System funds?]"Yes, please." Gray shook his head at his own stupidity. "Put ten bucks in there and let me talk to a human being."[Top-up complete.][$10 has been deducted from your balance.][Remaining balance:
Accepting the Offer
Gray arrived at the restaurant at exactly noon. The place Emma had texted him about wasn't fancy, just casual and cozy. Though knowing Emma's background, he was pretty sure the food wouldn't be cheap."Do I look okay?" Gray frowned at his reflection in the glass panels near the entrance.He adjusted his collar for the third time. Simple white polo shirt tucked into well-fitted jeans matched with a pair of shoes that didn't have any scuffs. His hair was actually styled this time instead of just left messy, just to look a bit more presentable.Gray took one more deep breath, then pushed the door open and stepped inside.The warm scent of fresh bread and grilled dishes hit him immediately. The place wasn't too crowded, and soft music played from overhead speakers, keeping the atmosphere light and comfortable.Gray scanned the tables, looking for a familiar face. It didn't take long to spot her.Emma was already seated at alone at a table on the far side of the restaurant.Gray paused for
Elixir of Refinement
[Congratulations!][Quest Completed.][You have been rewarded +1 Influence.][You have been rewarded the Elixir of Refinement (One-Time Use). You can use it whenever you want, Host.]Multiple notifications rang in Gray's head as soon as he walked through the door of their apartment. He was alone. Lily had left for school an hour earlier.Gray slumped onto the couch and exhaled loudly, letting his body go loose for the first time all day. It still felt weird having this much free time after spending years working himself to the bone at three different jobs.He leaned his head back and stared at the water-stained ceiling."So I'm tutoring Chloe Davenport now, huh?" he muttered to himself.Gray replayed the entire lunch meeting in his head. Emma's warm smile. The way she'd talked about her sister. The job offer that had come so naturally. More than anything, Gray understood this wasn't just a job. It was an opportunity. A single step toward something much bigger.Gray sighed quietly and
No One
Gray walked down the sidewalk as the late afternoon sun painted the city in shades of orange and gold. Long shadows stretched across the pavement beside him.It was already four in the afternoon.He barely had time to get ready earlier. But as he walked, minding his own business, he couldn't help but notice the attention he was getting. Girls turned their heads as he passed. Some whispered to their friends. A few even smiled at him.It was strange.In the past, people used to look at him with pity. Or worse, disgust. But now the stares were different. Curious. Interested. Some held admiration. A few looked amused, like they were pleasantly surprised by what they saw.It felt unfamiliar. But Gray couldn't lie to himself.He kind of liked it.After a few minutes of walking, Gray arrived at his destination. Lily's school.He stood on the street just outside the gates, leaning casually against a tree with one hand in his pocket. Classes were about to end in just a few minutes.Instead of
Let's Get Scary
By the time they got home, the sky had already darkened. Gray unlocked the apartment door and stepped inside with Lily following quietly behind him."Go wash your hands, Lily," Gray said softly, setting her backpack down near the door.Lily gave a small nod and headed to the bathroom without a word. Her steps were slower than usual. Nothing like her normally cheerful, bouncing self.Gray walked into the kitchen and poured a glass of water, patiently waiting for her. When Lily came out and sat down at the table, he placed the glass in front of her."Thank you, brother," she muttered quietly.Gray sat across from her. It was obvious Lily was still upset about what she told him earlier. Seeing her like this made his chest ache."Lily," he said gently, "can you tell me their names?"Lily's shoulders stiffened. Her gaze slowly lifted to meet his face."I just want to know who they are," he continued calmly. "I'm not going to storm into your school or do something crazy. I promise. I just
That Was Easy
Gray started making his way slowly towards the girls. The alley beside the school building was quiet. Tall trees shaded it on one side, and a concrete wall ran along the back. It was the perfect spot for kids to sneak around or hang out without being noticed by teachers.Unfortunately for May and Jenna, they were very much noticed.As Gray turned the corner, he spotted them immediately. But he didn't walk up to them right away. Instead, he leaned against the wall, arms crossed, making sure to stay out of sight. He stayed there for a moment, listening as they talked."My mom said I'm too young to get a new designer bag," May whined, her voice dripping with bratty annoyance. "She's so lame. I know I'm only eleven, but I'm practically grown up!""Mine too," Jenna replied, sounding equally put out. "They act like we're babies.""At least we're not like that Lily girl. She wears the same boring clothes every single day." May rolled her eyes, her voice full of contempt."Yeah, and her shoes
Meeting Chloe
The day had finally arrived.Gray stood outside the grand entrance of a private subdivision with his hands tucked into his pockets. He dressed more carefully than usual, making sure he looked presentable and put together.Today he would be meeting members of the Davenport family. If he was lucky, he might even get to meet the head of the family himself. Though he wasn't counting on that.Gray tilted his head upward to look at the tall iron gate in front of him.'So this is it, huh?'He got stopped at the entrance. The guards here were strict about who they let into the subdivision."Your name?" one of them asked, stepping forward with a clipboard containing the day's expected visitors."Gray Adams." Gray answered calmly and showed his ID card to verify his identity.The guard squinted at the clipboard, then gave a small nod. "Please wait here for a moment. Someone from the Davenport residence will come to escort you.""Alright." Gray nodded and was left standing alone by the gate. It
First Lesson
The truth was Chloe used to be at the top of her class. She always had a natural talent for numbers and language, growing up in a household that emphasized education from an early age. But lately, her focus on studying hadn't been the same.It started when their mother died. Her death had brought tremendous sadness to the entire family, and being the youngest, Chloe had been closest to her.Since then, her grades had dropped. Not to the point of failing, but enough to be noticeable. And for a family like the Davenports, with their reputation to protect, that was still a problem."I just really want Chloe's grades to improve," Emma's voice rang in Grey's head, her tone gentle but firm. "We'd really appreciate it if you could help with that.""It doesn't have to be perfect. Just enough to help her regain her footing." She cast a serious look at him."That being said," she continued, her voice now carrying quiet authority, "we can give you time, but we don't have the luxury of waiting to
Chapter 20: Not Bad
[Ding!]A familiar chime rang in Gray's head just as he finished speaking. A translucent screen blinked into view in front of him.[New Mission Unlocked!][Mission: Get Chloe Davenport's Grades Up.][Objective: Help Chloe achieve a 20% improvement in her overall academic performance within one month.][Reward: +2 Influence | One Fully-Furnished Apartment Unit with City View.]Gray's eyes widened slightly."An apartment?"He read the reward twice just to make sure he wasn't imagining things.A fully-furnished apartment unit. With a city view.That wasn't just a nice bonus. That was life-changing.For someone who'd spent his entire life cramped in a rundown apartment with water-stained ceilings and thin walls, this was beyond anything he could have hoped for.His mind immediately went to Lily. A bigger space where she could actually run around. A proper bedroom for each of them. A kitchen that didn't have broken cabinets. A view that didn't look out onto a dirty alley.Gray sat still fo