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My Great Fortune System
My Great Fortune System
Author: Pen Ninja
Granted the System
Author: Pen Ninja
last update2025-12-01 03:02:40

Gray's hands trembled as he stared at the crumpled envelope Mr. White had shoved into his chest. The heavy rain soaked through his shirt and mixed with the sweat from hours of hauling boxes in the warehouse. His muscles screamed with exhaustion, but the pain in his body was nothing compared to the hollow ache spreading through his chest.

"Take your final pay and get out. You're done."

The words kept ringing in Gray's mind as he watched his manager turn away, clipboard tucked under one arm. Mr. White didn't even look back. Why would he? Gray was just another worker, another face in the crowd of people struggling to survive.

Gray opened the envelope with shaking fingers. A few thin bills stared back at him, and his stomach dropped. This wasn't enough for rent. It definitely wasn't enough for food. His little sister's face flashed in his mind, the way her eyes lit up when he came home each night no matter how late he was. She always pretended she wasn't hungry so he could eat more.

How was he going to face her now?

Gray's legs gave out and he collapsed on the cold concrete floor of the loading dock. Water pooled around him and soaked through his worn pants, but he didn't seem to care anymore. He just sat there, letting the rain wash over him while the world moved on without noticing.

Twenty years old and this was what his life had become. Three jobs lost in a single month. No savings to fall back on. No skills anyone wanted to pay for. His parents were gone in an accident that had left him and his sister alone. Now it was just the two of them against a world that didn't care if they starved on the streets.

Gray had tried everything he could think of. He'd washed dishes until his hands bled from the scalding water and harsh chemicals. He'd scrubbed toilets in fancy office buildings while executives in expensive suits stepped over him like he was part of the furniture. He'd carried boxes heavy enough to make his back feel like it would snap in half, all for wages that barely kept a roof over their heads and rice in their bowls.

And now even that was gone.

He pushed himself up from the ground and started walking. His feet moved without direction, carrying him through streets he barely recognized through the heavy downpour. People rushed past with umbrellas held high, cars splashed through puddles and sent water his way on the sidewalk. No one looked at him, not even a glance. They never did.

Gray wasn't sure how long he'd been walking when he found himself standing at the edge of a bridge. The water below rushed dark and violent from the storm. He stepped closer to the railing and wrapped his hands around the wet metal. The cold bit into his palms.

His sister was probably home right now, sitting by the window and waiting for him. She always waited there, watching for him to come up the stairs to their tiny apartment. What would she think when he didn't come home tonight? Would she understand that he'd failed her, that he was too weak and useless to keep fighting this losing battle?

The thought of her face made his chest tighten until he could barely breathe. She was only ten years old, still young enough to believe things would get better. She deserved so much more than a brother who couldn't even hold down a job carrying boxes in a warehouse.

Gray tightened his grip on the rail, the metal feeling cool and slick under his hands. His shoes kept slipping, but he held on. One more step and it would all be over. No more hunger biting at his stomach. No more working to death. No more seeing the worry in his sister's eyes when he came home with empty hands and broken promises.

Just as he lifted his foot to climb higher, a sound cut through the rain, sharp and clear.

“Ding.”

Gray froze with one foot on the railing and one foot still on solid ground. His heart hammered against his ribs so hard it hurt. What the hell was that?

A voice filled his mind, calm and emotionless, as clear as if someone was standing right next to him.

“[Welcome to the Great Fortune System.]”

Gray's whole body went stiff. His hands clenched the railing so hard his knuckles turned white. Was he losing his mind? Had the exhaustion and stress finally broken something in his brain? Maybe he was already dead and this was some kind of hallucination before the end.

“[You have been chosen. All your desires, power, and success can be obtained through wealth. Will you accept?]”

This couldn't be real. Things like this didn't happen to people like him. The world had spent twenty years making that very clear. People like Gray didn't get chosen for anything except more suffering and more failure.

But what did he have to lose at this point? He was already standing on the edge of a bridge in the pouring rain, seconds away from throwing himself into the water below. If this was his mind breaking down, then what difference would it make to say yes to a voice in his head?

[Accept, and you will rise from nothing.]

Gray closed his eyes. His sister's smile burned behind his eyelids, bright and trusting and full of hope.

"I accept," he whispered into the storm.

The words left his mouth and something changed in the air around him. The rain still fell but it felt different against his skin somehow. A warmth spread through his chest and pushed back the cold emptiness that had been consuming him from the inside out.

[Great Fortune System has been activated.]

[Initializing user profile...]

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