All Chapters of 1-STAR TRASH: Bad Review System: Chapter 1
- Chapter 9
9 chapters
1. Score 12, Deadline 7 Days.
Red light. It pulsed in Dane’s face like a warning. Like a countdown to execution.[ADORATION: 12/100] [WARNING: DELETION IN 7 DAYS 04:12:33]“Nice,” he muttered. The word tasted like ash. Two by two meters. That was his universe. Block D, Sector 9. Paint peeled off the walls in dirty flakes. The AC had been a corpse for three months. Hot air stuck to his skin, thick and stale. The only light came from the floating stream screen, hanging in the air like a ghost. It showed him back to himself. Hollow eyes. Black bags under them. A smirk carved crooked on his lips. The smirk he wore when he was about to break.Viewer count: 8.Three bots. Five people who clicked by accident. Perfect audience for a dead man.Seven days. That’s all I have. Seven days before they wipe me.“Good evening, losers,” Dane said to the camera. His voice scraped. Seventy-two hours without sleep did that. “Tonight I’m gonna tell you why you should hate me.”The chat exploded. @StarQueen5: die already Dane @
2. Hate Hunter
Night air. Neo-Jakarta. It smelled like wet metal and burnt synth-oil. Dane crashed into a pile of discarded crates in Alley D, Block 9. His knees nearly shattered. Above him, sirens screamed. Red light from Reputation Police drones swept across peeling walls like a blood tide.[BAD REVIEW SYSTEM] Level: 10. Hate EXP: 1,513 / 2,000 --> Level 11. Skill: Insult Wave level 2, Sarcastic Retort level 1.He ran.Holes in his shoes slapped dirty water. Behind him, hologram boots pounded concrete. “TARGET MOVING TO ALLEY 9! BLOCK ALL EXITS!”No plan. No money. No safe place. Only one thing: people who hated him.“Good,” Dane whispered, taking a sharp turn into a narrow gap. “Hate me harder.”[+2 EXP: Drone Detected Target] [+3 EXP: Officer Shouted Your Name]A small green panel flickered in the corner of his vision. New strength flooded his calves. His ragged breath smoothed out. Insane. Six days ago he’d shake climbing 200 meters. Now he was sprinting under targeting lasers and gett
3. First Viral, First Casuality
Sirens still screamed behind Dane as he plunged into Sector 9 night market. Neon red-yellow-blue light reflected off pools of cooking oil. Smell of grilled fish, sweat, and synth exhaust made his nose burn. Good. More people. More hate. [BAD REVIEW SYSTEM] [Level: 12. Hate EXP: 1,753 / 3,000 --> Level 13. Skill: Insult Wave Lv2, Sarcastic Retort level 1] Active Mission: Survive 24 Hours Without Blocking Anyone. “Hey! That’s him!” shouted a meatball vendor. His phone came out instantly. “Dane Mercer! The 1-Star!” In 10 seconds, 20 phones aimed at Dane. Streams. Recordings. Curses. “Criminal!” “Traitor!” “1 star!” [+5 EXP] [+5 EXP] [+10 EXP] [Total EXP: 1,773 / 3,000] Dane ran and laughed. His ribs still hurt from Kade’s hit, but Bad Review System had already closed 60% of the wound. He jumped onto a siomai cart, kicked a tent, then darted into a narrow alley behind the public toilet. Behind him, Kade kept chasing. His leather jacket was torn, hologram cuffs flas
4. Threat Level Red
White spotlights slammed into Dane’s face. Rust smell from the underground station mixed with ozone from Reputation Police plasma weapons. Ahead, Liora stood calm. Score 4.9 on her chest glowed like a tiny star.“Hands up, Dane Mercer,” she said. Voice flat. No emotion. “You’ve violated 12 codes. Reputation Terrorism. Mass Incitement. Institution Score Reduction. You can’t run anymore.”Behind Liora, ten officers raised weapons. Red lasers aimed at Dane’s chest.[BAD REVIEW SYSTEM][Level: 14. Hate EXP: 2,536 / 4,000 --> Level 15. Shield: Mass Hate Conversion Active – 12%]Dane didn’t raise his hands. He smiled instead.“You know what, Liora?” he said. “I’ve been waiting for this moment.”He opened his arms wide.“Hate me. Now.”[+5 EXP][+5 EXP] [+10 EXP] Three officers behind Liora cursed instantly. “Die!” “1-Star!” “Traitor!”The red shield around Dane thickened. Lasers deflected, bounced off walls, sparked fire.Liora frowned. “You think that’ll hold me?”She raised her hand. H
5. Reputation Prison
Reputation Prison Sector 1 had no iron bars. No need.Dane sat on a hologram chair in the middle of a white room. Golden cuffs on his wrists. Ahead, a transparent screen displayed his face from 12 camera angles. In the corner, Adoration score: 3/100. “Welcome to the end of your record, Dane Mercer,” an AI voice said from the speaker. “Your score is 3. You will be deleted in 48 hours.”Dane didn’t answer. He was busy opening the Bad Review System panel.[BAD REVIEW SYSTEM]Level: 11 Hate EXP: 2,641 / 4,000 --> Level 15. Skill Locked: Mass Hate Conversion. Status: Shield Down, Liora’s “Genuine Love” effect still active. Damn. Liora’s effect was still draining 70% of his power. He was weak. Weaker than when he first got the system.The room door opened. Two officers pushed Dane’s chair out. Destination: Block Z. Block for 1-Star inmates waiting for deletion.Elevator dropped 20 floors. Smell of disinfectant, sweat, and despair.Block Z door opened.First sound Dane heard: laughter.“
6. The Price of an Army
Two days after escaping Reputation Prison, 429 people were still crammed in Sector 9’s underground station. Smell of sweat, smell of sewage, smell of hope that hadn’t been breathed in a long time.Dane sat on a pile of burlap sacks. Below him, 429 faces stared up. Some full of fire. Some confused. Some… regretful.“I’m not a leader,” Dane said. “I’m just 1-Star trash with a weird system.”Jax grinned in front. “Yeah, but trash that can break 5-Star cuffs.”Rina chimed in. “And trash that saved us from deletion.”Dane stayed silent. He didn’t like being called a hero. Because heroes needed to be loved. And if they loved him, he’d die.On the second night, the problem appeared.Rina brought a bowl of mushroom soup. “Eat, Dane. You haven’t slept in two days.”Dane looked at the bowl. Rina’s hands trembled. Not from fear. From worry.[WARNING: GENUINE ADORATION DETECTED] [SOURCE: Rina Kadeva][EFFECT: -5% POWER]Dane pushed the bowl away. “I’m not hungry.”Rina froze. “But ...”“I said
7. The Price of A Hug
Dane woke up in darkness.Smell of mold. Smell of dried blood. Smell of his own body that hadn’t showered in three days.His head was heavy. Chest empty. Like something had sucked all strength from his bones.[BAD REVIEW SYSTEM]Level: 5. Hate EXP: 1,204 / 1,500 --> Level 6. Active Skill: Wave of Insults level 1. Locked Skills: Sarcastic Retort, Mass Hate Conversion. Five.He dropped from Level 15 to Level 5 because of one hug.“Damn,” he muttered. Voice hoarse.“Still alive, idiot?”Voice came from the corner. Rara.She sat leaning against the wall, eyes swollen, hand holding a knife. On the floor beside her, dried bloodstain.“How long was I out?” Dane asked.“Three days,” Rara answered. “I kicked Mira out. She cried outside for two days, only left this morning.”Dane closed his eyes. “She’s okay?”“Hospital came to pick her up earlier. Said surgery was delayed because of riots. But her Adoration score went up to 28. So they accepted her.”Dane felt relief. But relief was instant
8. Operation Queen
Dane didn’t sleep for 36 hours.In front of him, Liora’s chip hologram spun: data on 127 5-Star names. Photos, addresses, schedules, weaknesses. And at the very top, golden letters:QueenAdoraAdoration Score: 5.00 – PERFECT! Address: Adora Tower, Floor 99, Sector 1. Weakness: ?Three question marks. Even Liora didn’t know QueenAdora’s weakness.“Perfect 5.00,” Dane muttered. “Means she’s never made a mistake. Never made anyone hate her.”“Or she’s just too good at hiding it,” Rara said from behind. She carried two bowls of synthetic soup. Smelled like wet cardboard.Dane didn’t eat. “If she’s perfect, then we make her imperfect.”Jax entered, carrying a strategy board. On the board was a blueprint of Adora Tower. 99 floors. Guards on every floor. Patrol drones every 3 minutes. Lasers at the entrance.“Damn,” Kimo said. “392 of us want to raid the strongest 5-Star base in Neo-Jakarta? We’ll all die.”“Yes,” Dane answered flatly. “That’s why we’re not raiding.”Everyone turned to him.
9. SHADOW FROM THE CORE
The alarm screamed. Red lights flashed without stopping. The stench of ozone and burnt metal filled the underground station. The black creature stood at the threshold of the door. Liquid, but it had a shape. Two meters tall. It had no face. Only a dark hole where its voice came from. “Target: Dane Mercer. Execute.” Three hundred ninety-two people stepped back. It wasn’t because they were cowards. It was because instinct told them: run from this thing, or die. Dane stepped forward. Level 15. His new skill, Mass Slander level 1, had just unlocked. His hands were trembling, but it wasn’t from fear. It was from EXP. “So this is The Core?” he said. “You’re sending a liquid golem to catch me?” The creature tilted its head. A hundred voices piled on top of each other: “Anomaly must be erased.” It moved. Fast. It had no legs, but it glided forward like smoke. Dane activated Enhanced Strength level 1. His fist shot out. _Thud._ His fist passed right through it. There were no bon