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Surprised attack
Zilizz's eyes widened in shock as the realization entered him - he was going to be crushed . The boulder continues its advance, and soon its connected with the serpent. And with a loud cry, the serpent was blown away . It's continued skidding away, but after some time it stopped. It then looked at vortex with blood shot eyes. It wanted to teach him a lesson It wanted to punish him It wanted to injure him badly .It wanted to kill him Vortex smirk as he felt the killing intent that was emanating out of the serpent.Meanwhile at the rear of the battle field, the soldiers were staring at vortex in awe.Slowly, they started respecting him, themselves. "Wait! He suddenly turned into a high dragon? Geese". A dragon kin asked in amazement. "What? That's clearly impossible, he is the weakest ruler, and we even have to protect him from harm. But look, he is emanating a godly power". "What just happened?". "Is that really our Lord?". "Was he hiding his true strength ever since
The battle part 3
The battle part 3 At first she hesitated , but after thinking about it for some while, she decided to calm down and watch how the battle would end. Finally, the serpent's tail connected with the ground, and a loud THUD was heard. Dirts and debris scattered around as the serpent stared at the dragon kins. "Hahaha! Weakling, I first thought that he was strong". The serpent boasted. "Now I know that the great dragon kins which everyone thought were strong are all weaklings." It then scanned it surrounding, slowly a smirk appeared on his face. "Time for you all to meet the fate as that of your ruler". The soldiers began to shiver, but not because of cold, but because of fear.They saw how skillful vortex was, but died like a pet in the hands of a serpent. Yet they don't know that soon they would be praising the one who they thought was dead. {2 minutes late} Vortex watched the tail in a calm expression, he was thinking of doing a trick which would surprise the serpent. Soon, th
The battle part 2
Vortex, catching sight of the danger that was about to happen , decided to interfere, instead of watching.He pressed his palms on the ground and then was now ready to help his soldier . "As long as mother nature exists, here my call.Answer my wish,And give me thy powerProtect those whom and mine alliesAnd protect those who are helpless to fight ."I call upon you. Rock wall". At first his body began to glow yellow, and then, just as he commanded, the ground shook under them, and then a tall rocky wall jotted out of the ground and protected the soldiers. Just then, the serpent's tail , as it descended in a burst of speed connected with the rocky wall.THUD The impact echoed and the earth shook , sending shockwaves around the surrounding , but yet, the rocky wall stood high and proud like a mountain. The soldiers closed their eyes tight, while others screamed loudly , but they quickly realised that they were safe. The tail's strike, though powerful was prevented by the rocky
The battle part 1
The battle part 1 The dragon captain turned her gaze back to Vortex , a part that w to badly fight with him, but she was commanded not to do so. Sooner or later, the battle will begin. And it'll be epic .******* As vortex got closer to the giant serpent. The soldiers watched in anticipation. They were all eager to see how the battle would end. Normally, they all knew that the mythical creature would be victorious, but they all decided to trust in their king a little. Suddenly, the familiar system's screen materialized. {New skill found} {Skill: Appraisal} {Appraisal: With the help of this skill, the user would be able to check the information of any object, people or even monsters} {Cost of skill: Five Draconic points} {Do you wish to purchase this skill?} {Yes/No} 'yes' Vortex chose yes , and suddenly, another set of information came in. {Skill bought} {Congratulations! You have now acquired the ' Appraisal skill '. } Vortex stared at the information with satis
The battle would be epic
_______________________ Hidden ability skills: Earth ability - Earth spike: This is a skill which instantly turns the surroundings around two to twenty meters long into spikes. These spikes are deadly and can deal two hundred damage if seen face to face with, or if the person directly comes into contact with it. - Rumble: If the user stomps his foot on the ground, the surroundings would shake, sending shockwaves or even burying the person alive. This is a deadly skill which can bring total destruction to the surroundings.- Earth wall: The user would swiftly stomp his palms on the ground instantly creating a rocky wall which can momentarily protect the user from physical or magical attack. Note that if the magical or physical attack is stronger than the wall. It'll be destroyed . - Earth manipulation: The user would be able to manipulate the earth- soil. When it is manipulated, multiple things can be done which would benefit the user and greatly injure the opponent. Note , not all
Hidden Ability
Not the anger because they are fighting, but because he couldn't protect those who are protecting him. They didn't care if they died or not His gaze then landed on the young beautiful knight, which was beside him . She has long red hair , her eyes were the same color as her hair, her body was so curved that it will drive any man crazy, she has black horns which could slightly be seen, with a tail which waggles here and there. "Hey young lady". Vortex called out. The knight in golden armor turned and bowed her hair in respect. "Yes my leige! What do you wish for me?". She asked. Vortex remained silent for some seconds before he spoke up. He then pointed to a badge which is on her armor. "Your badge is different from the others, why so?". The young woman stared at vortex for a while, her expression was blank, as if she was looking at a ghost. "My lord, it seems that you have forgotten ". She said. "I'm the knight captain of the kingdom, and under your direction, I'll
Undying resolve
Zillow the last but not the least was known as the mighty red dragon god, that was because he defeated all the dragon god except a particular dragon, who has immense power.Vortex thought ' Hmm! Strange question. So what'll my answer be'. After thinking for half a minute, vortex then turned to Zillow with a grin on his face."To prevent another war from happening between the dragon race". He answered. Zillow was quiet for a while, he didn't expect such answers ."Hmm! I see. So is that all?". Zillow asked. "No. My lord. I also want to be able to help the dragon race and join the separated factions. Those are my reasons ". The war which vortex was talking about is the war which happened a thousand years ago. The enemy was quiet strong, and even Zillow's followers then died, since then, there have been peace for quite some while , but lately, there have been kind of signs of wars, though, Zillow have been quiet, but within he knew that the war would suffer more casualties than las
Seeking divine strength part 3
The dragon's voice brought fear upon him, he slowly lowered his head and then began."Oh mighty one, I'm here by here to ask for thy help, the dragon kin are dying in the arms of a dangerous monster, and I beg you to intervain". Vortex paused, awaiting for Zillow response."My help? Hahaha". Zillow laughed like a maniac as he gaze at vortex. Vortex sighed innerly, he knew that making a deal with Zillow was hard."I'm really serious, if I were joking, I wouldn't have asked for a dragon god as you". Vortex said, his voice firm.Vortex's words momentarily made Zillow - the dragon god face to turn serious. His gaze landed on vortex who looked at him with an unseen confident. 'This boy is something else '. Zillow thought. 'Unlike anyone I've came across since the a thousand year ago '. Zillow thought, since his last follower died against the dark dragon follower, Zillow have decided to never grant anyone his power, especially a weak and nobody who doesn't know his place."And you thi
Seeking divine strength part 2
'Proceed'. With that a painful sting was sent throughout vortex's body. He suddenly fell to the ground, Mrs keddo and the knight suddenly rush to his side. "My lord. What's the problem". They both asked feeling concerned."Urgggggg". He screamedHis head started spinning and then everything Black out .______________The next seconds, edon found himself in an empty void .At first, his eyes were closed, he couldn't feel any sound, all he felt was that he was floating.' what's happening, am I dead '. He thought before he slowly opened his eyes. All he saw was an empty void, his followers, his armies, the monster, were all gone. Before he could think any further, the system's notification appeared.________________________New Mission: Gain recognition Mission Details: You've asked power from the most powerful dragon god across the universe. To gain power from the mighty red dragon god, you must prove to him that you are willing to gain his power.Mission Reward:- +500 Dracon
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