CHAPTER EIGHT
Fall of a Primordial They returned to the village soaked, muddy, and still arguing about things that neither of them would remember by morning. " I'm telling you, you aimed for that puddle on purpose," Venit said, her voice carrying that particular edge of someone who had been accused of something and was determined to deflect by any means necessary. "I aimed for the bank." Muri replied for what felt like the tenth time, water still dripping from his dreadlocks in a steady, pathetic rhythm. "The puddle was an unfortunate coincidence." "Nothing you do is a coincidence. You are a menace wrapped in a blind man's body, and I have proof now." "You have no proof." "I have witnesses. The trees saw everything." ‘ Is she taking Witness accounts from trees now?!?! ’ "The trees aren't talking." "They don't need to. I know what I saw." "And what exactly did you see?" "A blind man, flailing, yelling ,falling, splashing, and then lying in the water like a stranded fish." "I was recovering." He defended "You were utterly defeated…by a fish!!" Muri stopped walking, turned to face her, and pointed a wet finger in her general direction. "Let me remind you, oh mighty sky daughter, that I fell because I was trying to catch a fish that was too heavy for my line. A fish that you did not catch, because you were too busy standing on the bank and laughing." "That was a very good laugh, though." She shrugs with her lips threatening to curve upwards. "It was a very loud laugh." He frowns. "Thank you." "That wasn't a compliment." "Everything is a compliment if you have enough confidence." He shook his head, water droplets flying from his dreadlocks. "You are impossible." "I am inevitable." They emerged from the tree line into the village clearing, and the evening air hit them with the smell of cooking fires and the low murmur of families settling in for the night. Muri's feet found the familiar path toward the central fire pit, but before they could take three steps, his mother's voice cut through the air like a blade. "You're back. And you're both soaked." Muri sighed. "Hello to you too, Mother." "Your son fell into a stream," Venit said immediately, with the kind of satisfaction that usually accompanied winning a bet or delivering bad news to someone you did not like. "Your guest used sorcery to electrify me," Muri countered, holding up his hand as if to show evidence. "I still have static in my bones." Sena's silence was heavy with judgment. She was standing near the fire pit, a large pot of water already heating, her hands on her hips in that universal posture of maternal authority. "I don't want to know the details," she said slowly with sigh. "But I'm going to assume you both deserved whatever happened. Bring the catch to the fire pit. You're helping with dinner." Muri groaned. "Mother, I'm tired. I'm wet. I've been electrocuted." "You'll survive. I raised you to be useful." Venit's eyes lit up with amusement. "I like your mother." "Don't encourage her." "I am a guest," Venit said, turning to Sena with an air of dignified protest. "Surely a visitor to your clan deserves rest, not labor—" Sena didn't even blink. "You're an extra pair of hands. Help or go hungry." Venit opened her mouth, closed it, and then muttered something under her breath that sounded suspiciously like a curse in a language that predated human speech. Muri recognized the tone if not the words, and he couldn't help the wide grin that spread across his face. "Welcome to the clan," he said. "Everyone works." "I am beginning to regret choosing this particular village to crash into." "The jungle is still there. You're welcome to leave." "I didn't say I was leaving. I said I was regretting. There's a difference." "Keep telling yourself that." The fire pit was a circle of stones near the center of the village, where the evening meal was prepared when the whole clan ate together. Sena had already laid out a spread of roots, herbs, and cooking pots. A large flat stone sat near the fire, heated by the flames, perfect for roasting fish and vegetables. "Clean the fish," Sena said, handing Muri a knife. The blade was worn and familiar, its weight settling into his palm like an old friend. "Venit, start peeling the roots. There's a pile by the water trough." Venit looked at the pile of knobby, dirt-caked roots with an expression of profound disdain. "These are... dirty." "They're roots. They grow in dirt. That's what they do." "I am not built for manual labor." "Then it's a good time to learn." Muri took the knife and settled onto a log near the water trough, his feet finding the familiar hollows in the ground that years of practice had worn into the earth. He worked quickly, his hands moving with the practiced precision of someone who had done this a thousand times. The scales came off in clean strips, catching the fading light like tiny mirrors. The guts followed in one smooth motion, and he set them aside in a bowl for broth. Within minutes, the first fish was filleted, the bones separated, the meat ready for seasoning. Venit watched from across the fire, a half-peeled root frozen in her hands. Her eyes tracked his movements with a mixture of curiosity and disbelief. "How are you doing that?" "Doing what?" "Filleting a fish. Without looking. Without hesitating." Muri held up the knife, letting the firelight catch the blade. " First of all I can't look Venit, besides I have hands. I have a fish. The fish has bones. My hands know where the bones are. It's not complicated." "That's—" She seemed torn between annoyance and genuine admiration, her voice wavering. "That's actually impressive." "Don't sound so surprised. I have talents beyond walking into trees." "That was one time." "It was yesterday. And you've mentioned it at least seven times since." "Because it's funny." "It's exhausting." Venit shook her head, turning back to her root. She peeled it with clumsy, uneven strokes, leaving half the skin on and gouging out chunks of the flesh. Muri could hear the uneven rhythm of her knife and suppress a smile. He turned back to the second fish, and this time, he made a show of it. He let his hands move with extra flourish, the blade flashing in the firelight, the scales flying in satisfying arcs. He was showing off, and he knew it, but he couldn't help himself. "I could teach you, you know," he said, his voice casual. "If you're interested in learning a skill that doesn't involve lightning." "I am a primordial being. I do not need to learn how to gut fish." "Every being needs to gut fish at some point. It's a life skill." "I have never needed to gutted a fish in my existence." "Then you've never truly lived." She threw a root peel at him. It missed, but he heard it land somewhere to his left. "Rude," he said. "Accurate." He was feeling proud of himself now—too proud. He flipped the third fish over with a dramatic twist of his wrist, the blade arcing through the air in what he imagined was an impressive flourish. But his confidence outpaced his precision. The blade caught the edge of his index finger. Not deep. Not enough to draw more than a pinprick of blood. But enough to make him freeze, his hand hovering mid-motion. Venit's eyes went wide, and then she burst out laughing. "You almost—you almost cut your own hand off!" "I did not." "Your finger was this close to joining the fish guts!" "It was a minor miscalculation." "You were showing off!" "I was demonstrating!" She was doubled over now, the root rolling off her lap and into the dirt. "Oh, this is beautiful. The mighty hunter, the master fisherman, almost loses a finger to his own ego." Muri set the knife down with exaggerated care, his jaw tight. "I hope you find this as funny when I refuse to share my fish." "I'll just take yours. You won't have hands left to eat with." He glared in her direction, but the corner of his mouth was twitching. He couldn't help it. The situation was ridiculous, and he knew it. Venit was still laughing, wiping tears from her eyes. "You should have seen your face." "I can't see anything. That's the point." "I know, but the expression—" Sena, who had been watching the entire exchange with the expression of someone who had seen too much in her lifetime, simply handed Venit a bowl of herbs. "Crush these. And try not to electrocute my son again." Venit took the bowl, still grinning. "No promises."Latest Chapter
Chapter 17 [The Hunt 4]
CHAPTER SEVENTEENThe Hunt 4The darkness swallowed them whole.Muri walked with his sling in his hand, his pouch of obsidian stones tied securely at his waist, the five diamonds nestled in a separate pouch close to his heart. Every sense was stretched to its limit—the drip of water somewhere in the depths, the distant scuttle of something small and quick, the cold air that grew heavier with each step.And beneath it all, the breathing.Deep. Steady. Waiting."The Aji knows we're coming," Venit whispered beside him. Her voice was low, tight. "It's not sleeping anymore. It's watching. It's been watching since we left.""Good." Muri said, though his throat was dry. "This means it would be more fun."Muri did not know but this point he had on a wide terrifying smile.‘ One way or the other, one body is dying today.’They reached the edge of the chamber. The drop loomed before them, the space vast and echoing. The scent of dried blood still hung in the air from their last visit. The A
Chapter 16 [The Hunt 3]
CHAPTER SIXTEENThe Hunt 3Muri's heart pounded in his chest like a trapped bird.He stood at the edge of the cliff, the cold draft rising from the depths below, carrying with it the scent of something ancient and powerful. The breathing echoed up from the darkness—deep, rhythmic, the sound of a predator sleeping without fear."Aji," he whispered, the word tasting like ash in his mouth. "You want me to hunt an Aji.""I want you to try and hunt one" Venit corrected, her voice light but edged with steel. "Hunting implies success. I'm asking you to attempt something worthy of a legend." She shrugs"Venit, listen to me." He turned toward her, his hands trembling slightly. "I've heard the stories since I was a child. An Aji is not a deer or a complex grass feeder. It's not a shadow-stalker, it's not even a pack of shadow-stalkers. An Aji is a mini force of nature. The elders say that when an Aji moves through the jungle, the trees fall silent, birds stop singing, insects stop chirping.
Chapter 15 [ The Hunt ]
CHAPTER FIFTEENThe Hunt They walked deeper into the jungle than Muri had ever gone.The familiar paths, the trees he knew by touch, the streams he had crossed a hundred times—all of them fell behind as they pushed forward into unknown territory. The canopy grew thicker, blocking out the sun until only scattered shafts of light pierced the green gloom. The air grew damp, heavy with the smell of wet earth and rotting leaves.And, as expected, they argued."You're walking too fast again," Venit said from behind him. Her voice was sharp, carrying that particular edge of someone who had decided to be annoyed before the day even began."I'm walking at the same pace I always walk." He retorts "Your pace is aggressive.""My pace is purposeful.""Your purpose is to make me trip over hidden roots.""My purpose is to find food before we starve. If you trip, that's between you and the roots.""I don't trip. I stumble with style and grace of the heavens .""There's no style in falling." He mutt
Chapter 14 [Rite Hunting 2]
CHAPTER FOURTEENRite Hunting 2Kaelen was tall—taller than Muri by a head—with broad shoulders and thick arms that spoke of years of hunting and fighting. He carried himself with the kind of confidence that came from never being challenged, from always being the strongest in the room. He was the pride of the clan, the leader of the young warriors, the son who had fulfilled every expectation their father had ever had.He had never had time for Muri, never really cared about the weakling of their bloodline. Not when they were children, when Muri stumbled through the village with his hands out, learning to navigate a world that didn't care if he could see. Not when Muri failed his rite the first time, or the second, or the third. Not now.Muri stood slowly, his jaw tight, his hands curling into fists at his sides. "Kaelen.""I heard you passed the rite." His brother's voice was flat, unimpressed, carrying the weight of someone who was delivering news, not congratulations. "The elders co
Chapter 13 [ Rite Hunting]
CHAPTER THIRTEEN Rite HuntingThey made it back to Sena's hut just as the sky was fading from orange to deep purple. The evening air was cooling, carrying the scent of cooking fires and the distant murmur of the village settling in for the night. Crickets had begun their evening chorus, and somewhere a child laughed before being shushed by an adult.Muri ducked through the doorway first, dropping the heavy satchel of meat near the hearth with a grunt of relief. His muscles ached. His shoulders burned from carrying the load through the last mile of jungle. His dreadlocks were tangled with leaves and twigs, and he could feel the grit of dried sweat caked on his skin.Behind him, Venit stepped inside, and the moment the hide fell back into place, Sena's voice cut through the dim interior like a knife."Well…" She beganMuri winced. He knew that tone. It was the tone that meant his mother had already formed an opinion and was about to express it with surgical precision. "Mother—""Don't
Chapter 12[Rumours]
CHAPTER TWELVERumoursThey ran.Fast.The jungle blurred around them—a chaos of green and brown and shadow, of leaves that slapped against their skin and roots that reached up to trip them. But Muri did not see any of it. He felt it. He knew it.Every root was a memory. Every branch was a warning. Every dip in the earth was a map he had memorized through years of survival, years of moving through this jungle with nothing but his ears and his hands and his instincts.His feet found purchase where there seemed to be none. He ducked under a low-hanging branch, his body twisting at the last possible moment, the rough bark brushing against his back. He vaulted over a rotting log, his hands pushing off the damp wood, his legs tucking beneath him. He wove through a thicket of thorn bushes without slowing, his body finding gaps that barely existed.Behind him, Venit struggled to keep up.She was fast—goddess-fast, faster than any mortal should have been—but she was not accustomed to runn
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