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Chapter 9: City of Sparks
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The first sign came at 3:17 a.m. The city of Valis went dark. No warning. No sirens. Just a silent blink then everything powered down. Skyscrapers. Hospitals. Transport rails. The entire eastern sector collapsed into shadow. Only the emergency frequencies remained.

CRITICAL GLOBAL ALERT: Power Grid Alpha-1 COMPROMISED

Suspected Origin: Tier-0 Core Interference

Response Protocol: OPERATION DAWNFALL – Activate Watch Units

Aiden and Rhea watched it happen from the train yard, standing atop a rusted cargo container. “She did this,” Rhea said. “Vex wants you out in the open.” Aiden nodded grimly. “And I’m going to give her what she wants.” He flexed his hands.

[Chrono Recall – Active Window: 4.7 seconds

Real-time loop established. Mid-combat evasion and counter available. It felt strangelike time was rubber in his grip. He could feel the edge of moments now. Feel outcomes before they unfolded.

“I need a field to test this,” he muttered. “You’ll get one,” Rhea said, pointing to the horizon.
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