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Chapter 4: An Old Soldier's Salute
Author: zehnyx
last update2026-07-08 18:14:11

Ethan left the alley without looking back. The streets were alive with the usual evening bustle. Food vendors shouted to passing customers, buses crawled through traffic, and office workers hurried toward the subway before the next wave of rain arrived. To everyone around him, it was just another ordinary day. To Ethan, the war had quietly resumed.

His phone vibrated once. Not the encrypted military handset—his personal phone. The screen displayed a single message from an unknown number.

Dockyard 17. Warehouse C. Come alone.

The message disappeared the instant he finished reading it. No sender. No trace.

Ethan slipped the phone back into his pocket. Nathan. It had to be. Only someone familiar with Nightfall's communication protocols would use a self-erasing message.

He hailed a taxi. "East Harbor."

The driver nodded and merged into traffic. As the city lights streaked past the window, Ethan rested his head against the glass. Five years of pretending to be ordinary. He hadn't realized how exhausting it had been until today.

The driver glanced at him through the rearview mirror. "Long day?"

"You could say that."

"Work?"

Ethan smiled faintly. "Something like that."

The driver chuckled. "I've been driving this city for thirty years. You know what I've learned?"

Ethan looked up. "People only wear expressions like yours for two reasons."

"And what's that?"

"They've either lost everything..." The driver paused before completing his thought. "...or they're about to take it back."

Ethan said nothing.

The old driver laughed awkwardly. "Sorry. Guess I've watched too many action movies."

For the first time that day, a genuine smile appeared on Ethan's face. "It's alright."

Twenty minutes later, the taxi stopped near the abandoned harbor. Most of the warehouses had been empty for years. Rust covered the shipping containers. Broken cranes stood motionless against the darkening sky. Only the crashing waves disturbed the silence.

Ethan paid the driver and stepped out. The cold sea breeze carried the smell of salt and oil. He walked toward Warehouse C. The massive steel doors stood slightly open. Inside, darkness.

He didn't enter immediately. Instead he examined the surroundings. No fresh tire marks. No hidden cameras. No visible snipers. Too quiet—which meant someone had gone to great lengths to make it that way.

Ethan stepped inside. The warehouse was enormous. Rows of abandoned cargo containers stretched into the shadows. Moonlight filtered through broken skylights high above. The air smelled of dust and rust. His footsteps echoed softly across the concrete floor.

Then a metallic click. Ethan stopped instantly. The unmistakable sound of a rifle safety being disengaged. Not one—several. Within seconds, red laser dots appeared across his chest. One. Three. Five. Eight. At least eight shooters, hidden on the upper catwalks. Perfect overlapping fields of fire. Professionals.

Ethan remained completely still.

A deep voice echoed from the darkness. "Identify yourself."

Ethan didn't answer immediately. Instead his eyes swept calmly across the catwalks. The shooters had excellent positions, disciplined trigger control, military posture. Not Cerberus. Something felt different.

The voice came again. "Loud and clear. Identify yourself."

Ethan slowly raised both hands. His calm voice carried effortlessly through the warehouse. "Commander Ethan Hayes."

Silence. One heartbeat. Then another. No one moved. The laser sights remained fixed on him.

A third voice, older this time, spoke from above. "State your unit."

Ethan's eyes lifted toward the shadows. His answer came without hesitation. "Nightfall."

The warehouse fell completely silent. One by one, the red laser sights disappeared

For several long seconds, nothing happened. The warehouse was so quiet that Ethan could hear the distant waves crashing against the harbor outside. Somewhere overhead, water dripped steadily through a crack in the roof, striking the concrete floor with slow, rhythmic taps.

Then came the sound of footsteps. Heavy. Measured. Descending the steel staircase from the catwalk above.

A tall man emerged from the shadows, dressed in plain black clothing instead of a military uniform. His hair had turned almost completely gray, and a jagged scar ran from his left temple to his jaw. He stopped ten feet away from Ethan, his sharp eyes searching Ethan's face as though trying to separate memory from reality.

"...Commander?"

Ethan recognized him instantly. "Sergeant Major William Cross."

The older man's breathing caught. Only a handful of people had ever called him by that rank—everyone else simply knew him as William. His eyes reddened. "You remember."

Ethan gave a faint nod. "You taught every new recruit how to survive their first week in Nightfall."

William let out a shaky laugh. "I used to tell them surviving the training was harder than surviving a war."

"It usually was."

For the first time in years, both men smiled. The tension inside the warehouse eased.

One by one, armed figures emerged from behind the containers and descended from the catwalks. There were eight of them, all carrying military-grade rifles. Some walked with limps. One wore a prosthetic arm. Another had burn scars stretching across the side of his neck. Time had left its mark on every one of them. Yet Ethan recognized each face—not commanders, but support personnel. The mechanics who repaired Nightfall's equipment. The communications specialists who kept them connected behind enemy lines. The medics who waited through sleepless nights praying the team would return alive. People history had forgotten.

The moment the last man reached the warehouse floor, William suddenly stood perfectly straight. His boots clicked together. Without saying a word, he raised his right hand in a flawless military salute. The others followed.

Eight veterans. Eight forgotten soldiers. Eight unwavering salutes.

No one spoke. Tears welled in the eyes of more than one man. Five years they had believed their commander was dead.

Ethan slowly returned the salute, his movements precise, instinctive, filled with the respect they deserved. Only after every hand lowered did William finally find his voice.

"We searched for you." His words were rough with emotion. "We searched that mountain for thirty-seven days. They told us there was nothing left to find. They declared everyone dead." His jaw tightened. "We refused to believe them."

Another veteran stepped forward. "We were ordered to burn every Nightfall file. I couldn't do it. I hid what I could."

A third man reached into his jacket and carefully removed a worn black ring. It bore the silver phoenix rising through an eclipse. "I kept this. It was supposed to be destroyed." He placed it carefully into Ethan's palm. "It belongs to its commander."

Ethan stared silently at the ring. It had once symbolized everything Nightfall stood for. Honor. Duty. Brotherhood. He closed his fingers around it. "Thank you." The simple words carried more weight than any speech.

William motioned toward a steel table in the center of the warehouse. "We have something you need to see."

Ethan followed him. Spread across the table were maps, photographs, newspaper clippings, military reports, and dozens of handwritten notes connected by colored strings. Five years of investigation. Five years of refusing to let the truth disappear.

William picked up a faded photograph. It showed the smoking ruins of a mountain range. Operation Nightfall. "Everything the public knows," he said quietly, "is a lie."

He placed another photograph beside it. Unlike the first, this one had never appeared in any newspaper. It showed military helicopters landing hours after the battle had supposedly ended. Not rescue helicopters. Cargo helicopters.

"They weren't looking for survivors," William continued. "They were searching for something."

Ethan's eyes narrowed. "What did they take?"

William slowly shook his head. "We don't know. But whatever it was..." He looked directly into Ethan's eyes. "...people have been killing to keep it secret ever since."

Before Ethan could respond, one of the veterans rushed across the warehouse, his face pale. "Sergeant Major!"

William immediately turned. "What happened?"

The man held up a tablet connected to a portable surveillance drone outside the harbor. Several black SUVs had just entered the abandoned dockyard. More followed behind them. Then another.

William's expression hardened. "They found us."

Ethan looked at the screen. The lead vehicle stopped less than a hundred meters from the warehouse. Its doors opened. Men in black tactical gear stepped out with disciplined precision. Each wore the same insignia on the shoulder. A three-headed black hound.

William's face drained of color. "Cerberus..."

The warehouse fell silent. Everyone understood what that meant. After five years, the hunters had finally arrived.

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