The moment Kael pulled the Voidbreaker from Lord Captain Varyn’s body, the tunnel seemed to take a breath.
Then everything went to hell.
One of the surviving sorcerers, dying and desperate, slammed his staff against the ground in a final act of spite. Green magic flared wildly, cracking the already weakened stone above them. A deep groan rolled through the eastern tunnels, followed by the horrifying sound of rock shifting and breaking.
“Collapse!” Mira shouted.
She shoved two prisoners out of the way just as the ceiling gave in. Massive chunks of stone rained down. Kael dove forward, grabbing Rat by the collar and pulling the boy to safety. Screams echoed as dust and debris swallowed the tunnel.
When the worst of it settled, half the eastern passages were gone—sealed under tons of rock and rubble. The air was thick with dust, making it hard to breathe or see. Kael staggered to his feet, coughing.
“Mira!”
She was on her knees a few paces away, one hand pressed to her face. Blood poured between her fingers. When she lowered her hand, Kael’s stomach twisted. A jagged piece of stone had caught her across the left side of her face. Her eye was gone—destroyed in the collapse.
“I’m fine,” she growled through gritted teeth, though her voice shook with pain. “Just… help the others.”
Kael tore a strip from a dead soldier’s cloak and helped bind her wound as best he could. The bleeding slowed, but the damage was done. Mira’s face would never be the same. She pushed him away after a moment, stubborn as ever.
“Don’t baby me, King. We’ve got dead and wounded. Focus on them.”
The victory over Varyn suddenly tasted like ash.
They spent the next several hours digging out survivors and recovering bodies. Old Garren wasn’t the only one they lost. Eight more prisoners had died in the fighting and collapse combined. The eastern tunnels—once a vital defensive point—were now a tomb. It would take weeks to clear or bypass the rubble, if they even could.
Kael worked alongside everyone else, moving stone until his hands bled. The physical labor kept his mind from spinning too far into guilt. Mira directed the efforts with one good eye, her voice hoarse but steady. Rat ran water and bandages where they were needed most.
By the time they finally stopped to rest, exhaustion lay heavy on all of them.
In the central gallery, Kael stood before the survivors. The mood was darker than after any previous fight. They had killed an important imperial commander, but the cost felt too high.
“We struck a real blow today,” Kael said, voice carrying through the chamber. “Varyn is dead. My uncle will feel that loss. But we paid for it. Mira. The eastern tunnels. Our brothers and sisters who didn’t make it out. Remember them. Use that pain. The Empire wants us broken. We show them we’re not.”
Mira stood at his side, a bloody bandage covering half her face. She said nothing, but her remaining eye burned with quiet fury.
Later, when most had settled into uneasy sleep, Kael sat with her on a ledge overlooking the lower chasms. Rat had finally collapsed nearby, too tired to stay awake any longer.
“How bad is it?” Kael asked quietly.
Mira touched the bandage carefully. “Hurts like the Pit itself. I’ll live. I’ve lost worse than an eye in my time.” She gave a bitter laugh. “At least now I match the rest of you monsters.”
Kael didn’t smile. “This is my fault. I pushed us to fight them head-on.”
“No,” Mira said sharply. “This is the Empire’s fault. And your uncle’s. Don’t take their guilt. We knew the price when we started following you.”
They sat in silence for a while. The Pit felt heavier tonight. The collapse had changed the airflow, creating strange new drafts that carried distant sounds—moans from the rubble, the drip of water, and something deeper. Something ancient.
Kael’s mind kept returning to the chained man far below. The prisoner’s words felt more relevant now than ever.
*Power always demands payment.*
He wondered if the man had somehow known this would happen. If every king who went down there ended up paying in blood and stone.
“You’re thinking about going back down,” Mira said, reading him too easily.
“Soon,” Kael admitted. “There are answers there. About me. About what the Empire really fears. I can feel it pulling.”
Mira turned her one good eye on him. “Just make sure you come back. We can’t afford to lose you too. Not after today.”
Kael nodded, but the pull was getting stronger. The Voidbreaker hadn’t stopped humming since the fight. It wanted him to return to the sealed chamber. It wanted him to listen.
The next day brought more grim work. They reinforced the remaining tunnels as best they could. Training continued, harder and more desperate now. The prisoners moved with a new purpose—anger and grief fueling them. Killing Varyn had shown them they could hurt the Empire. Losing Mira’s eye and half the eastern tunnels had shown them the price.
Rat approached Kael during a break, carrying a small, scavenged dagger.
“King… Do you think the man below could have stopped the collapse? If you’d brought him up or something?”
Kael shook his head. “I don’t know what he is yet. But I’m starting to think he’s part of all this. The Pit. My blood. The reason they threw me down here in the first place.”
That evening, as torchlight flickered low, Kael stood alone near the crack that led to the lower level. The stone around the opening seemed to breathe. He rested his hand on the Voidbreaker’s hilt and closed his eyes.
The whispers came again. Stronger.
*Blood calls to blood…*
*Come back…*
*Power demands payment…*
He opened his eyes and looked toward the rubble of the eastern tunnels. The cost was already mounting. If he wanted real answers—if he wanted to protect the people who had chosen to follow him—he knew what he had to do.
Mira watched him from a distance, her bandaged face unreadable.
Kael turned away from the crack for now.
But the decision had already been made.
The King of Hell would descend again.
And this time, he wouldn’t leave until he understood exactly what kind of monster the Pit had been keeping in chains.
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he is really a king let him get out of the pit