Morning at Vancouver General Hospital felt like a broken simulation. Axel woke with nausea churning his stomach. He tried to sit up, but his joints felt stiff, as if the hinges of his bones had rusted solid. He glanced at the mirror on the wall. His white hair looked even more real under the cold neon lights, emphasizing the lines of aging now permanently etched into his face.
He reached for his phone on the bedside table. The GPS coordinates to an old downtown parking structure were still blinking. The message felt like a knife pressed against his throat.
“Axel? Where are you going?”
Arlo’s voice broke the silence. His friend entered carrying coffee, his eyes red from lack of sleep. Arlo froze when he saw Axel forcibly pulling the IV line from his arm.
“I have to go, Arlo. Something urgent came up.” Axel said shortly. His voice was heavy, far deeper than it used to be.
“Urgent? Look at yourself! You just cheated death!” Arlo slammed the shopping bag onto the table. “Elara refuses to talk to you, your mother just fell asleep after crying all night, and you want to run off? Have you lost your mind?”
Axel put on his jacket with stiff, mechanical movements. “This is about everyone’s safety. Just trust me this once.”
“Safety?” Arlo laughed bitterly, stepping in front of the door. “What kind of future turns you into a grandfather overnight? Tell me, Xel. What cult did you join?”
Axel looked at Arlo sharply, a cold gaze he had never possessed before. “Stop overthinking it, Arlo.”
Without waiting for a reply, Axel shoved past him and stepped out. His head spun violently. As he passed an ATM in the lobby, he felt a surge of his system’s presence vibrating wildly, as if the machine were a magnet pulling at the last scraps of his vitality. He wiped a thin nosebleed with the back of his hand and kept walking.
The downtown parking structure looked like the remains of a forgotten civilization. Cracked concrete, damp moss, and the stench of stale gasoline assaulted his senses, which had grown unnaturally sharp. Axel climbed the stairs to the fourth floor. His footsteps echoed hollowly, feeding his rising paranoia.
On a central concrete pillar, he saw a roughly carved symbol, a broken circle with intersecting lines at its center. Beneath it was a darkened stain of old blood.
“You’re ten minutes late,” a voice emerged from the darkness behind the pillar.
Axel spun around. “Who are you? Show yourself!”
A man stepped forward. His appearance was unsettling. He wore an expensive suit that hung loosely on his gaunt frame. His face was smooth, his skin taut like a man in his late twenties, but his eyes told the truth. They were dull, clouded, and filled with suffering, the eyes of someone who had lived nearly a century.
“You can smell it, can’t you?” the man said with a thin smile that never reached his eyes. “The stench of realizing that a full bank account cannot buy a single clean breath.”
Axel fought the wave of dizziness. “You sent that message. You have … this system too?”
The man let out a dry chuckle. “My name is Goran. And I’m not here to be your friendly conversationalist.”
Goran circled Axel like a predator assessing prey. “Your system … that series … it should have died two years ago with its previous host. I was surprised to see it active again, and on a harbor loser like you.”
“The previous host?” Axel’s heart pounded. “You mean someone else had the system?”
“Yes, including me.” Goran stopped inches from Axel’s face and inhaled deeply. “So fresh. Your lifespan still smells ‘sweet’ because you’ve only just started using it. Unlike mine.”
Goran pulled back his sleeve. Beneath the expensive suit, the skin of his arm was blistered and gray, as if his flesh were rotting while his face remained young.
“My system is broken. It glitched. It keeps taking my lifespan but no longer gives me money. I’m trapped in a body that refuses to die, but also refuses to heal,” Goran hissed, his face twisting with hatred.
“You’re carrying the latest series, Axel. I can feel it from here. Your system has a ‘Balance’ protocol. Mine? Mine is just a black hole that finally clogged because I forgot what it feels like to be human. I still want to live. There’s something I haven’t finished. The only way to fix my system is to consume the core of one that’s still active.”
Axel stepped back, fully alert now. “You want to take it from me?”
“Simple enough.” Goran produced a small knife made of black stone, similar to the sacred stone Axel had once touched. The blade radiated lethal certainty, impossible to evade. “A system can transfer if its host surrenders. Or if the host is forcibly destroyed.”
At once, Axel’s system panel, silent until now, flared into a pulsing blood red.
[WARNING: EXTERNAL THREAT DETECTED]
[PREDATORY SYSTEM IN CLOSE PROXIMITY]
“Don’t be afraid, Axel.” Goran advanced with deadly steps. “I’ll tell your mother you died a hero. That’s better than letting her watch you turn into a wrinkled monster like me.”
Axel wanted to run, but his feet felt fused to the concrete. Goran was not just a physical threat, he was a vision of Axel’s future if he kept letting guilt dictate his system transactions.
Suddenly, Axel’s vision washed white. A new system command surfaced at the edge of his consciousness.
[ACTIVATE DEFENSE MODE: THREAT ANALYSIS COMPLETE]
[COST: 5 YEARS OF REMAINING LIFESPAN]
[DO YOU ACCEPT?]
Ten years. If Axel pressed that button, he might instantly become a man in his seventies. But if he refused, Goran’s black knife would end his contract permanently.
“Choose no, Axel!” Goran shouted, lunging forward. “Die now and it’ll only hurt briefly before you’re forgotten. You’re tired of living, aren’t you? End it now!”
Axel stared at Goran’s deranged face, then remembered his mother’s face and Elara’s tears. Rage and the instinct to survive crushed his fear. He would not die in this filthy parking structure.
His trembling finger touched the virtual “YES” button just as the tip of Goran’s knife grazed his neck.
An overwhelming cold slammed into Axel’s heart, followed by the sound of bones cracking and echoing through the parking structure. Axel screamed, not from the blade, but from the sensation of his youth being violently torn from his pores in a matter of seconds.
“I haven’t claimed my happiness yet. I will not give up.”
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CHAPTER 11. PROBABILITY OF DEATH
"You think I would kneel just because you threaten my best friend’s life?” Axel muttered sharply beneath his helmet. His voice was swallowed by the roar of the motorcycle engine he was forcing past its safe limits on the empty streets of Vancouver. At the corner of his vision, the system interface flickered wildly, spewing unstable strings of code. The junk data injection he had executed at the apartment earlier had worked. The system now appeared overwhelmed, like an old computer forced to process thousands of commands at once.[SYSTEM ERROR: EMOTIONAL DATA ANOMALY][CALCULATION PROCESS DELAYED]A faint smirk curved Axel’s lips. The crushing pressure that had gripped his chest slowly began to ease. The overload had not destroyed the system, but it had bought him time. He leaned his bike at an extreme angle as he tore around the curve toward the central hospital district.“You can read statistics, but you cannot write destiny,” Axel hissed. A new warning appeared, the text unstable, a
Chapter 10. A New Threat
Morning on the outskirts of Vancouver greeted Axel with a dull ache in his joints. He woke on the thin mattress of the rented apartment without looking toward the mirror. The laptop on the table was still on, lines of code glowing from the analysis he had done the night before. Axel rose quickly and pulled on a thick jacket to conceal his frail body. He left the laptop and his phone locked inside the room. Today, he would do one thing forbidden by his new logic. He would move without a digital plan.Axel’s steps carried him to a small coffee shop on the corner of a run down street. In front of the door, a middle aged man was kneeling beside an old car that had broken down. Smoke rose from the open hood. The man wiped his oil smeared face with an expression of despair. Axel stopped right beside him without making a sound.“Need help?” Axel asked shortly.The man looked up and studied Axel’s aged face with hesitation. “The engine’s completely dead. I have to deliver this catering order
Chapter 9. The Fatigue Algorithm
The air on the fourth floor of the parking structure suddenly froze, as if time itself had been violently pulled by an invisible gravity. A transparent shockwave erupted from Axel’s body at the exact moment the tip of Goran’s black stone knife touched the skin of his neck. The gaunt man was flung backward, his body slamming into a concrete pillar hard enough to send cracks spidering across its surface. His strange knife flew free, clattering across the damp cement floor before disappearing into the darkness.Axel did not fall. He stood rigid, but inside his head, the sound of bones cracking echoed in rapid succession, like dry branches snapping one after another. His joints were forcibly hardened. He could feel the hydration beneath his skin evaporating, leaving behind wrinkled, lifeless tissue. The calcium in his bones shrank dramatically. He stared at his hands as the skin slackened, its pigment fading into a pale gray within seconds.[DEFENSE MODE ACTIVE][COST: 5 YEARS OF REMAININ
Chapter 8. Traces of the Same Man
Morning at Vancouver General Hospital felt like a broken simulation. Axel woke with nausea churning his stomach. He tried to sit up, but his joints felt stiff, as if the hinges of his bones had rusted solid. He glanced at the mirror on the wall. His white hair looked even more real under the cold neon lights, emphasizing the lines of aging now permanently etched into his face.He reached for his phone on the bedside table. The GPS coordinates to an old downtown parking structure were still blinking. The message felt like a knife pressed against his throat.“Axel? Where are you going?”Arlo’s voice broke the silence. His friend entered carrying coffee, his eyes red from lack of sleep. Arlo froze when he saw Axel forcibly pulling the IV line from his arm.“I have to go, Arlo. Something urgent came up.” Axel said shortly. His voice was heavy, far deeper than it used to be.“Urgent? Look at yourself! You just cheated death!” Arlo slammed the shopping bag onto the table. “Elara refuses to
Chapter 7. The Aging Hero
The hospital lights felt like they were burning Axel’s retinas as he slowly opened his eyes. The sharp stench of antiseptic and the soft hum of the ventilator beside his bed were the first things to greet him. His head felt heavy as lead. Every time he tried to move his fingers, an unfamiliar stiffness and joint pain struck him, pain that had no place in the body of a man in his early thirties.In the corner of the room, a small muted television displayed the local news, a bold headline stretched across the screen:“"PIER WAREHOUSE TRAGEDY: HUMAN TRAFFICKING SYNDICATE EXPOSED.”The image shifted, showing Gerry with his face mangled, and the Boss tightly handcuffed by the Vancouver police. The reporter looked animated, then the footage cut to blurry amateur video capturing the moment the hostages were freed.“Xel? You’re awake?”The voice was hoarse, cracked by tears. Axel turned his head slowly. His mother, Lena, sat beside the bed, gripping his hand tightly. Behind her stood Elara an
Chapter 6. Blood and Decisions
[Temporary Health: Active. Duration: 23:59:59.][Remaining Lifespan: Classified.]Axel no longer cared. He pushed his motorcycle through the freezing Vancouver night, heading toward the isolated outskirts of the harbor. Behind him, two black SUVs pursued at high speed, an elite escort unit he had hired at the cost of one year of his life. They were not just men in suits, they were killing machines sent by an entity that knew no mercy.The old warehouse on the northern pier loomed ahead. Axel stopped, the engine growling low before cutting out. He dismounted, his body feeling unnaturally light, an effect of the Temporary Health deceiving his nervous system.Inside the warehouse, the stench of diesel and rust greeted him. Gerry stood in the center of the room, casually flipping a folding knife with a mocking grin. In a leather chair behind him sat the Boss, the loan shark who controlled the harbor’s black routes. But Axel’s eyes locked onto only one thing, his mother, bound to a wooden
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