They waited for dark.
Pier Six stood at the far end of the docks where the cranes gave out, a long tin warehouse with its windows painted black. Enzo had walked past it every morning for five years on his way to the ships, and he had never once seen its loading door open. Tonight it stood ajar by the width of a hand, and through the gap came a faint blue glow, like moonlight on water.
Ottoline crouched beside him behind a stack of pallets with her hood pulled up. "That's it?"
"That's it."
They crept to the door. Inside, the warehouse was a maze of steel shelves running back into the dark, and on every shelf, cheap phones sat charging in rows by the hundred. Their screens lit and dimmed in slow waves, thousands of small blue faces waking and sleeping. Each one was a citizen who didn't exist, and each one had a vote.
At the far end, behind the window of a plywood office, a boy sat hunched over a laptop. He couldn't have been more than twenty, thin and unwashed, swallowed by a hooded jacket two sizes too big. Every few seconds his phone buzzed, he read it and he typed. Then a ripple of light ran down the shelves as a few hundred phones woke at once to vote for or against whoever the message had named.
"One boy," Ottoline whispered. "One boy and a room full of phones."
Headlights swung across the pier. Enzo pulled her back behind the pallets as a van rolled up and stopped. Four men climbed out, and each of them carried a red petrol can.
They didn't speak. One walked straight into the office, took the boy's phone and laptop, shoved him back into his chair and came out again, sliding a heavy bolt across the door behind him. The boy began hammering on the glass. The other three moved between the shelves, emptying their cans over the rows of phones, and the sharp smell of petrol rolled out through the loading door.
Enzo understood. The Lodestar's audits had burned the farm's accounts, all forty thousand struck and useless. A farm with no accounts was nothing now but evidence, so the Critic was burning the evidence, and the boy along with it.
The last man struck a match. The fire ran up the shelves in seconds, leaping from row to row while the phone screens burst into crackling sparks. The men were back in the van before the first window blew.
"Enzo," Ottoline said, catching his arm. "No."
There was a rain barrel beside the loading door. He tore off his driver's jacket and pushed it into her hands, collar and all. Then he pulled his jumper over his head, plunged it into the barrel and tied it across his mouth and nose.
He went in through the smoke the way he had once gone down into the hold for Gus's boy, low and fast, with one arm over his eyes. The heat pressed against him like a hand. Phones popped and hissed on either side. He found the office by the sound of fists on glass, threw his shoulder at the door once, twice, and felt the bolt tear out of the plywood. The boy was curled under the desk, choking. Enzo hauled him over his shoulder and ran back through a tunnel of fire toward the grey square of the loading door.
He came out onto the pier and dropped to his knees on the wet planks, and the boy rolled off his shoulder, coughing as if he would never stop.
Ottoline was beside them at once, the jacket pressed against her chest. Behind them, the warehouse roared. Part of the roof sagged and fell in, and a column of sparks rose into the night.
The boy lay on his back and watched it burn. His face was black with soot and his eyes were streaming. Nobody needed to tell him what had nearly happened. The Critic had meant to let him burn with it, and he knew it.
"Ozzie," he said at last, when he could speak. "Ozzie Tolliver." He looked up at Enzo. "You came in for me."
"Yes."
Ozzie stared at him a moment longer. Then he reached down, pulled off his left shoe and peeled a small flat drive from inside the sole.
"I kept copies," he said hoarsely. "Every order he ever sent the farm. Names, dates, what they paid. I figured one day I'd need something he couldn't take off me."
Ottoline plugged it into her phone. The screen filled with a list that kept scrolling, thousands of entries long. Enzo recognised names from the news, men who sat on the Bureau's own council, paying to lift themselves up and sink their rivals. And there, regular as a salary, month after month, was the Abernethy family account.
Ottoline stopped scrolling. She didn't say a word. She only looked at her family's name on the screen for a long time.
"Go to the bottom," Ozzie said. "The oldest one's from before my time. It was already in the records when they gave me the job."
She scrolled down. The first order on the drive was ten years old.
Graziella Moretti. Below one by dawn.
Enzo read it twice. He was back at the Bureau counter under the humming lights, with Lucia shivering in his coat. For ten years he had wondered who had done it to his mother. Now it was one line of text, with a date and a f*e beside it.
"There's something else." Ozzie pushed himself up on one elbow. "Tonight's order. The one I was meant to start at nine, before they came." He swallowed. "He's got a second farm across the river, bigger than this one. If I didn't run it, they'll be running it over there. Right now."
"Whose name?" Ottoline asked.
Ozzie didn't answer. He was looking at Enzo.
Enzo's phone lit up in his pocket. Years ago, he had set an alert on his mother's rating, and he had never once heard it sound. He took the phone out. Graziella's number was falling. Two point six. Two point one. One point eight. And the old phone that could stop it was sitting in Teo's garage on the other side of the city.
"Same name," Ozzie said quietly. "Same words. Below one by dawn."
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Chapter Ten: The Seamstress
Enzo ran the whole way from the station, and he was still too late.He turned into his mother's street just as Thrale's car pulled away from the shop. The door stood open, and light spilled across the pavement. Inside, Lucia was on the stairs, shouting at officers who were already gone, her voice breaking on every word. Ottoline was running down the middle of the road after the car in her stockinged feet, her coat flying open, as if she could catch it by refusing to stop. She ran until it turned the corner and its tail lights vanished. Then she stood alone under the streetlamp with her hands at her sides.When Enzo reached her, she turned, and for once the most trusted face in the city had nothing ready to say."She went without a fuss," Ottoline said at last. "She put her coat on and told them to mind the step."By morning, Benedict stood on the Bureau steps beneath the Starboard with every camera in Asterholm pointed at him."The Lodestar has been found," he said, and let the words
Chapter Nine: The Thumbprint
By noon, Thrale had come for Enzo too.He found him on the pier, standing in front of what was left of the warehouse. The fire had burned itself out before dawn, leaving a black skeleton of girders and a smell of melted plastic that hung over the whole dock. Enzo had come back to see if anything had survived. Nothing had.Thrale walked up the planks with two officers behind him and a sheet of paper in his hand. "The lease on this building," he said, holding it up. "Signed and paid for in the name of E. Moretti."Enzo looked at the signature. It was nothing like his own."And a witness," Thrale went on. "Rafferty Abernethy tells us he saw the Fairness husband carrying petrol onto this pier last night." He nodded to his officers. "Turn around."Enzo turned. The cuffs closed around his wrists, and as the officers walked him back down the planks, he understood what the lease meant. Someone had built this frame days ago, before the fire, before Ozzie, perhaps before the Star Report. The Cr
Chapter Eight: Let Me Fall
By the small hours, Graziella Moretti was below one, and her name was on the morning's Dimming list.Enzo had watched the number cross the line at a quarter past two. Within a minute, the Bureau's notice arrived on her phone. Inspector Thrale's officers would come for her at first light.She sat at her own kitchen table, sewing, as if this were any other night. A child's coat lay across her knees with a button half attached. Lucia had cried herself to sleep upstairs. Ottoline sat by the stove with her phone in her lap, watching the number, and Ozzie Tolliver lay asleep on the sofa in the front room in his scorched jacket, because there had been nowhere else to take him.Graziella bit off her thread and looked at her son."Whatever you're thinking, don't," she said. "Let me fall."He didn't answer. He was reading Ozzie's drive on Ottoline's phone, and had been since they got home, scrolling past council members and judges' sons, looking for anything that would show him how the Critic t
Chapter Seven: Pier Six
They waited for dark.Pier Six stood at the far end of the docks where the cranes gave out, a long tin warehouse with its windows painted black. Enzo had walked past it every morning for five years on his way to the ships, and he had never once seen its loading door open. Tonight it stood ajar by the width of a hand, and through the gap came a faint blue glow, like moonlight on water.Ottoline crouched beside him behind a stack of pallets with her hood pulled up. "That's it?""That's it."They crept to the door. Inside, the warehouse was a maze of steel shelves running back into the dark, and on every shelf, cheap phones sat charging in rows by the hundred. Their screens lit and dimmed in slow waves, thousands of small blue faces waking and sleeping. Each one was a citizen who didn't exist, and each one had a vote.At the far end, behind the window of a plywood office, a boy sat hunched over a laptop. He couldn't have been more than twenty, thin and unwashed, swallowed by a hooded jac
Chapter Six: Two Is The Line
By breakfast, Ottoline's number had started falling again.Enzo watched it over her shoulder at the cutting table. One point three. One point two. By the time Lucia left for school, it was one point one, and the shop was filled with the soft, steady sound of Graziella's machine, as if nothing in the world were wrong.He knew exactly what this was. The Critic had dragged the Commissioner's daughter from five stars to one in a single night, and now it was finishing the job slowly, in daylight, where the whole city could watch. It wanted her Dimmed from a one-star shop in the Underbank. It wanted to see who would catch her.At noon, the news showed Benedict on the Bureau steps. A reporter shouted a question about his daughter's rating. The Commissioner paused with one hand on the car door, the door Enzo had held for four years, and said only, "She made her choice." Then he got in and someone else drove him away.Ottoline didn't watch. She hemmed the same cuff three times, unpicking it an
Chapter Five: The Star Report
The script was already on the prompter when Ottoline sat down at the anchor desk, waiting above the lens in neat glowing lines.Her father had sent one of his own aides to stand at the back of the gallery and watch. Under the desk, resting on her knee, was Raff's recorder, with a cable running from it to the port where guests plugged in their laptops. Nobody had asked what it was. Nobody ever questioned the most trusted face in the city.The floor manager counted her in with his fingers. Three, two, one."Good evening," Ottoline said. "Tonight, the Star Report can reveal that the video at the centre of the Kemble case was forged by the Moretti family."The second line rolled up the prompter. She looked at it for a moment. It said her husband had deceived the Chief Justice. It said his family should be investigated, his mother too, and the sister who had stood in the witness box in a crooked blazer. Behind the gallery glass, her father's aide folded his arms. Then she reached under the
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