Chapter 7 : Skeptics and Mockers
Author: Clare Felix
last update2025-09-15 21:14:02

The well was more than a source of water; it was a center of gravity. Life in Riverside Village began to revolve around the glittering pump. The old well-worn path to the well grew weeds in a week's time. The hours that had been lost in waiting and dragging were now invested in mending nets, tending gardens, or—to Reuben's immense pleasure—children attending school with cleaner faces and better-fed stomachs.

The initial wonder had subsided into a deep, wordless gratitude. Reuben was no longer just "the professor" or "the man who sees sickness." Now he was "the one who brought the sweet water." Parents nodded to him with a new respect. Children would run up and touch his hand and then skip off laughing, as if he were a charm.

But the clear and pure water from the well could not wash away the cynicism of the outside world.

The news, of course, got out. It seeped out of Riverside through market traders and visiting relatives, a story so outlandish it couldn't help but be exaggerated. By the time it reached the air-conditioned offices of Harbor City, it was a myth: a mad professor in the bush had called a well out of the earth using stolen government funds and black magic.

The first official response was by letter. It was on thin, cheap paper, and the Harbor City Regional Water Board stamp was smudged on it. It was addressed to "The Unofficial Occupant, Riverside Health Institute."

Reuben read it at his desk, the fan stirring the humid air around the words that sucked the air out of the room.

"…illegal construction and potential tampering with municipal water tables… lack of proper permitting and environmental impact reports… highly recommend shutting down all unauthorized operations pending a formal investigation…"

It was a masterpiece of bureaucratic stonewalling. The tone was passive-aggressive, dry, and threatening. It had no comment whatsoever on the clean water now flowing, just the procedural fault. There was no signature, merely a typed name: For the Director, Regional Water Board.

Reuben felt a burning flash of anger. They hadn't come to see the well. They hadn't asked about the health outcomes. They cared only that he had not asked their permission to save lives.

He crumpled the letter and threw it in the wastebasket. It was an annoyance, nothing more. They were too underfunded and lazy to send a real investigator all the way out to Riverside.

He was wrong. Three days later, a dusty white SUV with government number plates rattled into the village, throwing up a red dust cloud. It pulled up in the shade of the community hall, right next to the new well. Two men got out. The driver was young, appeared bored, and just leaned on the car, flipping through his phone. The other was a middle-aged man with a short-sleeved button-down shirt that strained over his belly. He was holding a worn leather satchel that looked like it had just come out of its packaging and was entirely useless.

This was Mr. Abiodun, a mid-level bureaucrat with the Ministry of Public Health.

He did not look at the well. He did not look at the women drawing water, laughing and chatting. He looked at his clipboard.

I am looking for a… Reuben Stone," he announced to no one in particular, his voice a nasal whine.

Reuben, who had been watching from his office window, stepped out to meet him. "I am Professor Stone."

Mr. Abiodun looked him up and down, taking in his frayed trousers and unadorned shirt. His face clearly indicated that Reuben was not his idea of a "Professor.".

I am here on complaints of public works without a license and the practice of medicine without a license, " Abiodun read from his clipboard. "Also, complaints of… 'frightening the population with spurious claims of disease.'"

"What complaints?" Reuben asked calmly. "Who made them?

"That is confidential ministry business," Abiodun sniffed. "Now, this structure." He finally bent down to examine the borehole. "Where are the permits? The environmental impact statements? The approval from the Regional Water Board?"

"There was no time for permits," Reuben said levelly. "The village was drinking from a contaminated source. Children were dying. I facilitated a solution."

Facilitated?" Abiodun echoed, writing down the word as if it were a confession. "With what funds? Your institute's grants are for teaching, not for… for digging holes." He uttered the last words with profound contempt.

"The funding was private. A foreign NGO," Reuben reused his lie, the story now feeling flimsy under the man's officious gaze.

"Ah, yes. The mysterious NGO. Do you have their contact information? Their registration papers with the Ministry of the Interior? The papers for the importation of this equipment?" Abiodun's smile was tight and triumphant. He had him. In a world drowning in paperwork, the man who acted was always guilty.

A small crowd had gathered, and their festive atmosphere curdled into worry. Mister Adeyemi stepped forward.

"Sir," replied the elder, his voice courteous but firm. "This well is from God. The water is clean. Our children are no longer sick. What is the problem?"

Abiodun looked at the old man as if he were some fairly interesting insect. "The 'problem,' old man, is procedure. The rule of law. If everybody just dug holes wherever they pleased, we'd have chaos. The government plans. Five-year plans. This…" He waved his hand disdainfully at the pump. "…this is not in the plan."

Reuben understood then. It was not well. It was controlled. The well was a success that they had not controlled, claimed credit for, or could profit from. It was an independent variable in their carefully constructed equation of graft and neglect.

The government's plan has kept this village from having clean water for thirty years," Reuben said, his calm beginning to crack. "My 'procedure' was done in three days.".

Abiodun's face tightened. "Your arrogance is noted, Professor. You think a single borehole will eradicate poverty? That you can just come in here with your… your well… and solve issues that the ministry has been struggling diligently on for decades? You are an attention seeker. A dilettante."

The words were designed to wound, and they did. They reduced a lifetime of effort in public health, a miraculous intervention, to a vanity project.

We'll be looking into the funding status of your institute," Abiodun stated, closing his clipboard with a sharp snap. "And I would strongly suggest you cease any further 'facilitation.' The full force of the Ministry will descend on unauthorized activity. Am I understood?

He did not wait for a reply. He turned, got back into the SUV, and left in another cloud of dust, leaving behind a town saddened and confused.

The mocking did not stop there. It was only the beginning.

A trader from Harbor City came to the village with a newspaper a week later. It was a pro-government, sleazy tabloid. The newspaper was folded to a specific page, and one column was marked in red ink. The headline read: "MIRACLE MAN OR MENACE? THE VILLAGE 'DOCTOR' PLAYING GOD WITH LIVES."

The article did not mention Reuben by name, but the reference was unmistakable. It painted a picture of a reckless foreign-educated academic bullying an innocent village with feigned threats of disease and wasting precious resources on a "glorified water pump" while "true public health initiatives" in the city remained underfunded. The source of the article was a "senior ministry official," and its tone exactly replicated Abiodun's dismissive terminology.

Yet the last paragraph sent a chill down Reuben's spine.

"While the self-styled 'Oracle of Riverside' basks in the admiration of the credulous, serious health analysts question the wisdom in the long term of his cowboy tactics. 'Sustainable development requires structure, not stunts,' says Edward Collins, a veteran civic leader and consultant to the Ministry of Health. 'This kind of uncontrolled intervention creates dependency and undermines official channels. It's a feel-good story with the potential to end in catastrophe.'" 

Edward Collins. The name struck home like a punch. This wasn't bureaucracy gone wild anymore. This was personal. Collins was a small-time, corrupt politician Reuben had fought briefly several years ago over a stolen research grant. He was a vulture, a man in a suit who had made himself rich by serving as a "consultant"—a fixer who guided government contracts into the hands of corporations that kicked back a percentage to him. Reuben's success threatened his business model.

Why would anyone bribe Collins for a sluggish, second-rate water project when some professor could magic one out of the ground overnight?

Collins was connecting the dots. He was using his government contacts and media pals to build a narrative: Reuben Stone was no hero; he was a rogue, a dangerous one at that.

The villagers, perfumed by the shift in the wind, grew wary. Some of the earlier whispers of "witchcraft" returned, now blended with fear of governmental reprisal. A few of the families, not wishing to be associated with an enemy of the powerful, quietly restarted boiling water from the old well, just in case.

Reuben felt the walls closing in around him. The well was a physical testament to his power, but it also made him feel exposed. He had fought microbes and ignorance, but this was a different kind of enemy—one that fought with paper, lies, and authority.

He rested against the pump one night, watching the sky catch fire from the sunset. The usual cluster of women was smaller, the voices more subdued.

Anna moved alongside him. "The ministry man's words carried to them," she whispered, following his line of sight. "They're afraid. Collins' name signifies something. Something of the wrong kind."

"I know," Reuben replied, his voice heavy.

"What are you going to do?

He thought about the [KNOWLEDGE] tab. He thought about the CUSTOMIZED PUBLIC HEALTH COMMUNICATION STRATEGY. It was 100 DP. He was 35. He was poorer than he'd been since the beginning.

He had put his points into a physical, material good, and it had served him well in the village but poorly in the world. Collins and his companions operated in that world, a world of papers and agreements and disinformation.

"I must fight them on their own ground," Reuben said, to himself as much as to Anna. "But I need the right equipment."

As though on cue, his head was filled with the gentle, insistent tinkle of a new alert, separate from the outbreak warnings.

POLITICAL/ADMINISTRATIVE THREAT DETECTED. SOURCE: Edward Collins (Local Antagonist). THREAT LEVEL: MODERATE (ESCALATING). NATURE: DISINFORMATION CAMPAIGN, BUREAUCRATIC OBSTRUCTION. OBJECTIVE: NEUTRALIZE NARRATIVE THREAT. RECOMMENDED ACTION: GENERATE VERIFIABLE DATA, CULTIVATE ALLIES, COUNTER DISINFORMATION.. NOTE: POLITICAL RESILIENCE IS A PREREQUISITE FOR LARGE-SCALE DEVELOPMENT. THIS THREAT MUST BE RESOLVED BEFORE MAJOR PROJECTS CAN PROCEED.

The System understood. It was not just a medical tool; it was a strategic one. The battle was not just in the clinics and fields. It was in the ministry halls and newspapers. And it was challenging him to a new objective.

He had no points to buy the communications strategy. He would have to do this the hard way. He would have to generate the "verifiable data" himself.

He turned to Anna, a new flame kindling in his eyes. "Get me the clinic records for last year. And the school attendance records. I want every case of diarrhea, every fever, every school absence. I want to make them look at the cost of their 'procedure' and the value of my 'stunt.'

The skeptics and mockers thought they were fighting a country doctor. They did not realize they were poking a data-driven Oracle who had a new mission. The well had yielded water. Now the hour had arrived to open the floodgates of truth. 

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