Chapter 017: Appraise
Author: Ash Rise
last update2026-10-16 16:54:48

He touched the word review.

[Observe evolves to Appraise. Reveals true attitude, hidden skills, and weaknesses of living targets.]

[Cost: one sense. The system selects.]

Behind him Rhea shouted something he didn't hear. Steel flashed. A Stalker's claw sparked off her blade, and she staggered back a step and planted her feet again. Five of them were spread across the courtyard in a slow half circle. They weren't rushing. That was the worst part. They moved like animals who had all night.

"Ethan." Tomas's voice was thin and close, a hand on his arm. "Don't."

"I know."

"You don't know what it will take."

"I know it'll take something." Ethan looked at the five black shapes, at the iron gate that wouldn't open, at the wall that couldn't be climbed. "I'd rather lose it than lose both of you."

He pressed his thumb to the word.

[Accept.]

Heat poured into him like boiling water through a funnel. His eyes watered. His teeth ached. He tasted copper, thick and sudden, filling his mouth, from the place he'd bitten his lip two days ago in the Drains. Then the copper thinned.

Then it was gone.

He swallowed. Nothing. He licked his teeth. Nothing. No sweat, no smoke, no blood, no ash from the fire in the boatyard. The inside of his mouth was a blank room.

[Cost deducted: Taste.]

Taste. It could have been his eyes. It could have been his hands. He found, strangely, that the only thing he could think about was the recipe book in his bag. Page after page of his mother's cramped handwriting. Pinch of salt. Wait until it smells right. He had never learned to cook from it. He'd only liked to read the words.

The window flickered. Then the world opened.

It wasn't light, exactly. It was information, laid over everything like a second skin. A thin gold outline traced each Stalker, and beside each, a block of text.

[Rift Stalker 117-B. Level 14. True attitude: Starving. In pain. Obedient. Collar integrity: 88%.]

[Rift Stalker 117-D. Level 13. True attitude: Starving. Fearful. Obedient. Collar integrity: 91%.]

[Rift Stalker 117-E. Level 12. True attitude: Starving. In pain. Collar integrity: 11%.]

He glanced sideways, and the window caught Rhea and Tomas too.

[Rhea Kessel. Level 28. True attitude: Furious. Frightened for you. Hidden skill: Iron Guard (Uncommon). Halves damage from the front while she holds her stance.]

[Tomas Wren. Level 6. True attitude: Terrified. Proud.]

Proud. Something caught in his chest. He pushed it down.

He stared at the last Stalker. Eleven percent. The creature was on the left edge of the half circle, slightly apart from the others. Its collar, a grey band half sunk into its throat, had a thin black crack running through the metal.

"Rhea." His voice cracked. "Third from the left. The one with the scar on its shoulder. Can you hit its throat?"

"Why?"

"The collar's broken. Almost."

She didn't ask again. She feinted right at the nearest Stalker, ducked its swing, and rolled, and the third creature turned to follow. Ethan pulled the hook-knife from his belt, steadied his wrist the way Anselm had taught him that morning, and threw.

It wasn't a good throw. The blade turned over once too many and hit sideways. But it hit the grey band at exactly the spot where the crack ran, and the metal gave with a sound like a dry twig.

The Stalker shrieked.

It reared back on four legs, clawing at its throat, and the collar fell off in two halves and rang on the stones. The creature went quiet. Its chest mouth closed. For one second it stood perfectly still, swaying, like something that had just woken from a very long dream.

Then it turned its head toward the creature beside it and made a sound Ethan had never heard before, a long, furious wail.

It threw itself at its own pack.

The courtyard exploded. Black limbs, white teeth, a shriek that rattled the windows. The freed Stalker slammed into 117-D and tore at it with both pairs of arms. Another turned to defend. A third leapt, and the whole mass rolled across the stones in a tangle.

"Gate!" Rhea yelled.

The freed Stalker hit it first.

It wasn't aiming. It was only trying to get away from the others, and its shoulder drove into the old bars like a battering ram. The hinges screamed. The iron buckled and flew inward in a spray of rust, and a gap three feet wide opened between the posts.

"Go!" Rhea grabbed Tomas by the collar and shoved him toward it. "Ethan, go, now!"

They ran.

The alley beyond the gate was dark and steep, a stair of broken brick sloping down toward the old drains. Ethan's legs shook. His heart was a drum. Behind them the Stalkers were screaming, and one of the screams had stopped abruptly, and he didn't want to think about that.

"Where?" Tomas gasped.

"Down!" The only direction that didn't have a wall.

He tried to swallow as he ran, out of habit, and found nothing there to swallow. His spit tasted of no one. It wasn't pain. It was an absence, like walking into a room and finding a chair gone. He felt it more with every step, a small, clean hole where something used to be, and it frightened him more than the Stalkers did.

He kept running anyway.

At the bottom of the stair, a rusted iron grate hung open over a drain mouth wider than a door. Beyond it, a tunnel. Water dripped. A breeze came out of it that smelled like old coins and wet stone.

The sluice. He'd seen it on Tomas's map. A flood channel built under the chapel, older than the ward, wide enough for a cart.

"In," Ethan said.

"Is it safe?" Tomas asked.

"No."

Rhea stopped at the grate and looked back up the stair. Her chest heaved. A thin line of blood ran down her forearm where a claw had caught her. "It's a dead end if they follow us," she said. "One way in, one way out."

"They won't all follow. Not for a minute. Not while the freed one is killing them."

"And after the minute?"

He didn't have an answer. "Then we make the minute count."

They went in anyway.

The air changed the instant they crossed the threshold. It grew cold and heavy. The sounds of the street dropped away, and the only noise left was the slow drip of water and the three of them breathing. The tunnel ran straight for thirty meters, then widened into a round chamber where several channels met, and from the roof, a single beam of grey dusk fell through a hole in the old stone.

Someone stood in the beam.

Ethan stopped.

The figure was tall and still, in a charcoal coat without a speck of dust on it, one gloved hand resting loosely on the hilt of a plain sword. The face was pale. The eyes were pale grey and very slow.

Ethan's new sight flared.

[Lucan Voss. Human. Level 41. Warden-Inspector. True attitude: Patient. Amused. Hidden skill: Voice of the Key (Rare). Commands any collared creature within hearing by speaking its bound word. Weakness: Throat. Voice fails if speech is disrupted.]

Voss tilted his head.

"Ethan Vale," he said pleasantly. "I've been looking forward to this."

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