The first thing I felt was cold.
Not the kind of cold that tickles your spine or nips your fingers, but the kind that gnaws at your soul. It seeped into my bones, into the marrow, and clung to me like a second skin. It was suffocating. Disorienting. Real. So... I didn't reincarnate. This isn't heaven. This isn't hell. This is- My eyes snapped open. Darkness. Endless, choking darkness. But it wasn't just the absence of light-it was alive. The air pulsed with malevolence, like the world itself was breathing, whispering, watching. I sat up, slowly. My body ached. Not just physically, but spiritually, like I'd been shattered and stitched back together wrong. I could barely make out the ground beneath me-twisted, blackened stone slick with a crimson sheen. The sky, if you could call it that, was a swirling mass of blood-red clouds churning like a storm. No sun. No stars. Only a faint violet glow from cracks in the ground that pulsed like a heartbeat. And then the smell hit me. Rot. Sulfur. Blood.So this is the Nether... I stood, wobbling like a drunk toddler, trying to make sense of where the elf-goddess had dumped me. My stomach churned-not from fear (okay, maybe a little)-but from the overwhelming stench of death. The air was heavy with despair, and for a moment, I swore I heard... laughter. Faint. Distant. Mocking. "Great," I muttered, voice dry and raspy. "First I get denied reincarnation. Then I get groped by gravity. Now I'm in Hell's unfinished basement." Somewhere in the distance, something screeched. It wasn't human. I froze. Okay. Don't panic. Don't run. Running attracts monsters. I've seen anime. Running is code for "Eat me, please." I took a slow breath, eyes scanning the desolate, nightmare landscape. Twisted trees with no leaves. Jagged rocks like skeletal fingers clawing at the sky. Pools of what I hoped was water, bubbling unnaturally. I needed shelter. A weapon. Food, maybe? No, scratch that. My stomach had officially shut down in protest. But most of all-I needed answers. "Alright, Hinata," I muttered, slapping my cheeks. "You've died. Been denied an afterlife. Kicked into a monster pit by an angry elf chick. You can either curl up and cry... or do what you always do." I paused. "What do I always do?" Before I could dwell on my existential crisis, something rustled behind me. I turned-and saw it. A creature crawled into view, low to the ground, bones exposed through tattered flesh. Its mouth was a jagged grin stretched ear to ear, and eyes glowed faintly yellow like dying embers. It twitched. Sniffed. Snarled. Oh. Right. Running it is. I bolted. The terrain was uneven, sharp rocks tearing at my bare feet. I didn't care. The creature shrieked behind me, clawed limbs skittering like a centipede on steroids. "I take it back!" I shouted to no one. "Running is bad! Very bad!" I darted behind a pillar of stone, heart pounding, lungs burning. The creature screeched again, louder this time.Closer. And then- BANG. A flash of red light exploded across the landscape. The creature wailed-a horrible, earsplitting sound-as its body erupted into flames. It writhed for a second, then collapsed into ash. I blinked. What... just happened? A figure emerged from the smoke, heels clacking against stone like a metronome of doom. She stepped into view-tall, slender, and annoyingly confident. A long crimson coat billowed behind her, and her eyes-sharp, golden, with slit pupils-locked onto mine. Her silver hair glowed faintly in the dark. She looked like a warrior who'd walked straight out of a fantasy poster... or an underworld fashion magazine. "Tch," she muttered, sliding a smoking pistol into a holster at her thigh. "You scream louder than the demon."I blinked again. "You... saved me?" She smirked. "Debatable. I just don't like wasting bullets." "You're an angel," I breathed. "Wrong," she said flatly. "Try again." "Demon?" "Strike two." "Uh... bounty hunter from Hell?" She paused, then shrugged. "Close enough." I slowly stood, brushing soot from my pants-what was left of them, anyway. "Name's Hinata," I offered. "I didn't ask." "Right. Of course you didn't."She sighed, pinching the bridge of her nose. "Listen, newbie. This is the Nether. You're obviously fresh meat. And around here, fresh meat gets eaten. Fast." "I noticed." She looked me over, then tossed me a rusty dagger from her belt. "Try not to stab yourself with it. And try harder not to die." I caught it clumsily. "Thanks... uh, what's your name?" She gave me a long, unimpressed look. "Alis," she said. "Try not to forget it. I hate repeating myself." She turned, coat swirling as she walked. I hesitated. Then followed. Not because I trusted her. But because I was still alive.And in the Nether, that had to count for something.Latest Chapter
echoes before the fall
The night settled over the Nether like a thick, trembling breath, as if even the realm itself sensed whatwas coming. Hinata walked ahead, his footsteps slow, heavy, yet stubbornly steady. Alis followedsilently. She didn’t try to stop him—not because she didn’t want to, but because she understood. Shefinally understood what he carried inside him.Hinata had always been the one who smiled first, even when everything else was broken. He crackedjokes during battles, tripped over his own sword, and called himself “the discount hero nobody ordered.”But beneath all that? There was a weight. A silent, dragging gravity he had never let anyone see.Tonight, he didn’t hide it.“Alis,” he said softly, not turning back. “Do you ever… feel like the world gave you power just to seehow fast it could take everything from you?”Alis swallowed. “Every day.”Hinata chuckled, but it was a sad, cracked sound. “Guess we’re both disasters.”The path opened into the obsidian clearing—the place where the
The thing that stares back
The Nether was quiet. Too quiet. Not the normal “something’s stalking you” quiet—thekind where even fear holds its breath.Alis was asleep by the dying fire, blade resting across her lap. I couldn’t. Sleep, that is.Every time I closed my eyes, the Laws hummed in the back of my skull—lines of glowingscript threading through the dark like veins of living light.I stared at my palm. The marks from before were pulsing faintly, rearranging themselves.Words, sentences… rules.I didn’t read them so much as feel them. Like the universe whispering its cheat codes.“If it bleeds, it can be rewritten,” a voice murmured in my head. It sounded suspiciously likemine.I raised my hand toward a rock nearby. One single glowing line floated above it—[Law:Gravity]“Okay, maybe just a little test,” I whispered.I tapped it.The rock screamed. Not metaphorically—it screamed like a living thing being peeled out ofreality. Then it floated upward, twisting mid-air, melting into ash and light.I stumbl
Divine court Aka heavens DMV
I dreamed again.Not of monsters. Not of fire. Paperwork.Endless glowing scrolls stacked to the sky. Angels in suits flying around likecaffeine-addicted pigeons, stamping documents with holy approval seals. Every time ascroll got approved, it disintegrated into sparkly dust.One angel sighed so hard it created a tiny hurricane.“Welcome to the Divine Court,” said a voice behind me. “Please take a number.”I turned—and yeah. There was a line. A literal line of souls stretching miles long. Some ofthem had been waiting for centuries.“This is... heaven’s DMV,” I muttered. “Figures.”I looked down and realized I was holding a clipboard.Case #8421 — Denied Reincarnation: Self-Termination Clause 3B.My own name was stamped on it in big glowing letters. “Wow. Even in death I’mpaperwork.”Before I could complain, the whole place started to glitch—like someone hitCTRL+ALT+DELETE on reality.The angels melted into patterns of glass and light, forming a tall woman made entirely ofreflect
The fire that remembers
The morning after Memory spoke his name, something in Hinata snapped. Not like glass. Like a blade finally drawn out of its tusted sheath. --- He sat alone beneath a jagged outcropping, staring into the distant horizon where the Nether broke off into obsidian rivers and soulstorms. The brand on his chest burned hotter and hotter each hour, pulsing with the knowledge of his name. Hinata. Not chosen. Not erased.Remembered. Alis approached cautiously, her boots crunching bone-dust beneath her leaving behind a trial of matching footprints behind her with each step. "You're quiet," she said. "Not anymore," he replied. She raised an eyebrow. "That so?" He turned to her. His eyes were no longer desperate. They were calm.Too calm.They had the kind of intensity you would only expect from an overpowered aura farming nonchalant mainc haracter of an overated anime "I don't want to run anymore." He said to her in a deep voice maintaining his nonchalant deminer Alis sat beside him, uns
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They walked in silence.Not because there was nothing to say-but because every word now felt like it echoed beyond them.Hinata had rewritten a being that was supposed to be unrewritable.And the Nether had noticed.---"How are you feeling?" Alis asked eventually, her tone less teasing, more wary."Like I committed a cosmic war crime in my pajamas," Hinata muttered.She cracked a dry smile. "You're adapting.""To what? Being a threat to reality?""No. To being seen."---They camped in the ruins of an upside-down castle-floors above, ceilings below. Nothing madesense in this part of the Nether. Gravity was more of a suggestion.Alis lit a blue flame with her fingers and leaned against a broken throne.Hinata sat nearby, rubbing his hand. The mark there was glowing faintly again, but differently.Pulsing like a question.Why haven't you asked me what it means?" he asked.She didn't look up. "Because if you're not ready to tell me, it's not my business."Hinata nodded, appreciating the
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The Nether was changing.Not in the obvious ways-there were still screams in the distance, and the ground still pulsed like adying organ-but something beneath the surface was shifting.And it was following Hinata.---They moved quickly through the Hollow Spine, Alis cutting a path through the ruins with the casualgrace of someone who'd stopped fearing monsters a long time ago. Hinata kept pace, his body sore,his soul burning with the echo of last night's fracture."Where are we going now?" he asked, wiping sweat from his brow."Somewhere less haunted," Alis replied. "Somewhere we can think.""Thinking is dangerous here.""Then it's a perfect match for you."---They found shelter in the husk of a crumbled palace-its walls blackened by time, its towers bentinward like teeth. Inside, fractured mirrors lined the halls. None of them reflected properly. Hinatasaw versions of himself in each: younger, older, missing an eye, missing hope."Why is everything here allergic to chill?" he
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