All Chapters of rejected by the reincarnation system : Chapter 1
- Chapter 10
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No one cries the nameless
I died as I lived-broke, alone, and wet.Not in the fun way.The rain was relentless. The kind of rain that felt personal, like the universe had specifically scheduled athunderstorm just to remind me I was garbage. I sat hunched on a cold sidewalk, a paper coffee cup in front ofme-my proudest possession. It held exactly one coin. Probably Canadian.Some guy tossed in a button earlier. A button. Who even carries those?People passed. Some gave pity glances. One guy gave me a pamphlet for a "pyramid-shaped businessopportunity." I ate it. It tasted like disappointment and toner ink.You might be wondering: "What brought you to this point?"Me too.Let's just say life and I had a very complicated relationship. I wanted to survive; life wanted me to die inincreasingly embarrassing ways. We settled on "death by tragic backstory."Anyway, at some point, I realized something.I wasn't even sad anymore. Just... done.No teary montage. No anime flashback. Just me, standing on the edge of a b
welcom to the nether
The first thing I felt was cold.Not the kind of cold that tickles your spine or nips your fingers, but the kind that gnaws at your soul. It seepedinto my bones, into the marrow, and clung to me like a second skin. It was suffocating. Disorienting. Real.So... I didn't reincarnate. This isn't heaven. This isn't hell. This is-My eyes snapped open.Darkness. Endless, choking darkness. But it wasn't just the absence of light-it was alive. The air pulsed withmalevolence, like the world itself was breathing, whispering, watching.I sat up, slowly. My body ached. Not just physically, but spiritually, like I'd been shattered and stitched backtogether wrong.I could barely make out the ground beneath me-twisted, blackened stone slick with a crimson sheen. The sky,if you could call it that, was a swirling mass of blood-red clouds churning like a storm. No sun. No stars. Onlya faint violet glow from cracks in the ground that pulsed like a heartbeat.And then the smell hit me.Rot. Sulfur.
stray sparks in the nether
The air was thick. Not just with smoke or mist--but something worse. The kind of pressure that curled underyour skin and whispered to your bones: You shouldn't be here.Hinata trudged behind Alis, eyes darting from one jagged outcrop to the next. The Nether was... wrong. Thesky above pulsed like a dying ember, and the ground cracked and groaned with every step, like the land itselfwanted to scream."So," Alis said, her voice cutting through the silence like a blade, "what's your plan, Mr. Suicide?"Hinata frowned. "Don't call me that.""Why not? It's accurate.""You're a demon. Aren't you supposed to be evil? Not just rude."She shot him a sideways glance. "I'm a woman first, Hinata. Demon second. We come with opinions."That shut him up for a few seconds.Then: "...What is this place, really?"Alis shrugged. "A pit. A prison. A battlefield. Home. Depends who you ask." She hopped over a smolderingrock, cloak trailing behind her like shadow made silk. "You? You're a fresh soul. No c
Baptism by fire
The air was humming. Not with life--but power. Malicious, ancient, and eager to devour. It poured in likeinvisible smoke, prickling the skin, making Hinata's breath catch.Alis stood still, her curved blade drawn, eyes narrowed on the horizon. "He's close."Hinata could barely speak. "Who is he?"Alis didn't look at him. "Greed."The ground trembled as a hulking figure emerged from the shadows. The creature was grotesque--twisted goldembedded in bone, seven arms of mismatched size, and a crown of melted coins fused into its skull. Its eyesgleamed like polished treasure."Alis..." it rasped in a gothic shimmering voice. "Still running errands for the fallen gods I see?""I'm mentoring," she replied dryly. "Try not to kill my student too quickly." she said to it sarcasticallyThe demon turned its gaze to Hinata. "This worm? I smell no sin. No power. Since when did you start mentoring such small fry"Hinata gulped. "Nice to meet you?"The Demon of Greed roared, its laughter shaking
Whispers of the nether
When Hinata woke, the world was quieter.He lay inside a cave, soft torchlight flickering across jagged stone walls. His shirt was gone, his ribs wrappedin rough but expertly tied bandages. Every breath still hurt, but he was alive.Alis sat nearby, polishing her blade. "Took you long enough."Hinata groaned. "Am I dead?""Nope. Just very close. Again."He tried to sit up but winced. "What happened?""You survived. Barely. That spark in your eyes... you channeled something. Something that made a demonback off. That's not normal, Hinata."He leaned back. "Figures. Nothing about this place is normal."She glanced at him. "The Nether is... layered. There's more than just demons and monsters. There are ancientthings--cults, gods long forgotten, soul-eaters, cursed dreams made flesh. Some think this whole realm is amemory that refuses to fade."Hinata stared at the cave ceiling. "And I'm just supposed to live here?""Survive. Learn. Adapt. Or die."Comforting.That night, the whispers b
Training day
Hinatas hand still throbbed with the mark ValKyros had burned into it. Faintly glowing lines traileddown from his palm like a tattoo done by an eldritch graffiti artist. He stared at it, flexing his fingersas if expecting sparks or lasers or... something.Instead, it just pulsed. Slowly. Like a heartbeat that didnt quite belong to him.Alis tossed him a hunk of dried meat. "Eat. Were training today."He sniffed it. "This isn't gonna like make me start spitting up foam from my mouth , is it?""Its food ,I think... Well Mostly. Would you stop complaining about everything for once."Hinata bit down. Chewed. Instantly regretted it. "This tastes like evil.""Everything here tastes like evil idiot. Get used to it or maybe don't and starve to death .I haven't had human flesh in eons" she gave a remark with a twisted look in her eyeThey moved to a clearing near the caveif you could call a patch of cracked obsidian ground andscreaming tree-roots a "clearing."Alis stood across from hi
Teeth lies and soul marks
Hinata limped beside Alis through a narrow canyon of jagged black stone, the mark on his hand stillflickering with dull blue light. The Nethers heat was subdued here, replaced by a chill that clung tothe bones. Shadows pooled unnaturally, and the air tasted metallic."Where are we going?" he asked, still sore from the previous day's "training."Alis didnt look back. "A place that wont kill you immediately. Just eventually.""Thats... reassuring.""You want a bed and breakfast, go die in a nicer world."He sighed. "Y'know, I used to dream about getting isekaid. Magic powers. Sword fights. Cutecompanions."Alis raised an eyebrow. "Careful. You just described a dating sim, not the Nether.""Right. My bad."They arrived at what looked like the skeleton of a cathedraltowering arches of bone and obsidian, acracked stained-glass window depicting a war between gods, demons, and something worse."This is a soulforge," Alis said. "Old magic. Ancient. Dangerous. But... useful."Hinata eyed it
The devils deal
The cave was silent, save for the soft crackle of the dying embers. Alis had fallen asleep leaning against thewall, her sword across her lap, chest rising and falling in an oddly peaceful rhythm. It was the first moment ofpeace they'd had since entering the Nether.Hinata, however, couldn't sleep.His mind was spinning. Every time he closed his eyes, he saw the leering face of the goblin chieftain, thebloody remains of those demons they had fought, and the smirk of the goddess who sent him here in the firstplace. No reincarnation, huh? he thought bitterly. So this is just... it? A slow crawl through hell?He glanced at his hand.It was still marked-glowing faintly from that last battle. The same eerie light from earlier. That wasn't normal.He knew that much. Not for a human, not for someone like him. And yet, it had saved him.Was it the Nether mutating him? Or...A shadow stirred in the corner.He looked up, expecting to see Alis, maybe half-awake or tossing in her sleep. But no
Shadows between us
The morning in the Nether wasn't morning at all.A gray sky bled through the cracks of the cavern like a wound that never healed, casting a cold, unnaturalglow over the stone. The fire had died, and the embers were nothing but memory. Alis stood by the caveentrance, sword in hand, her silhouette half lost in the mist.Hinata sat in silence, his shirt clutched in his fist as he stared at the brand carved into his chest. The brokencircle glowed faintly, pulsing with something deeper than mana. Something wrong.?Nightmares again?? Alis asked without turning around.?Yeah,? Hinata lied again. It was becoming easier.She turned this time, brow furrowed. ?You were sweating. Mumbling, too. Like you were in pain.??I said I?m fine.?He didn?t mean to snap, but the words came out sharp. Alis narrowed her eyes, then strode over.?You sure?? she asked. ?Because ever since that last fight, you've been... different.?Hinata pulled his shirt over his head and stood. ?What?s that supposed to mean
divine accord
Hinata dreamed again.But this wasn't like before. No whispers. No Nether rot or flickering hellfire. This was light.Blinding, sacred, clinical light.He floated, bodiless, suspended in a sky that had no stars, only endless whiteness, like the canvasof creation itself had been left unfinished.Below him was a hall without walls, but endless pillars of ivory and flame held up a ceiling of purewill. Thrones--massive and carved from concepts no human could pronounce--floated in a perfectring. Time ticked here, not by clocks, but by the breath of gods.And they were arguing.A voice like molten gold boomed, "The Accord must remain. It is not punishment. It is protection."Another voice, colder, crystalline, female, responded, "You fear what broken souls become. But fearis not law."Hinata hovered unseen, a flicker caught in the tapestry of their debate.The gods didn't look like gods. Some were formless light, some were beasts, some were childrenmade of stars and shadow. And at the c