The cave was silent, save for the soft crackle of the dying embers. Alis had fallen asleep leaning against the
wall, her sword across her lap, chest rising and falling in an oddly peaceful rhythm. It was the first moment of peace they'd had since entering the Nether. Hinata, however, couldn't sleep. His mind was spinning. Every time he closed his eyes, he saw the leering face of the goblin chieftain, the bloody remains of those demons they had fought, and the smirk of the goddess who sent him here in the first place. No reincarnation, huh? he thought bitterly. So this is just... it? A slow crawl through hell? He glanced at his hand. It was still marked-glowing faintly from that last battle. The same eerie light from earlier. That wasn't normal. He knew that much. Not for a human, not for someone like him. And yet, it had saved him. Was it the Nether mutating him? Or... A shadow stirred in the corner. He looked up, expecting to see Alis, maybe half-awake or tossing in her sleep. But no. The air thickened.From the darkness emerged a figure cloaked in tattered robes of abyssal black. A hood obscured its face, but Hinata could feel eyes-piercing, ancient-gazing into him. "You're awake," the figure said, voice a rasp that echoed like a whisper from a tomb. "Good." Hinata scrambled to his feet, summoning what little mana he had left into his palm. "Who the hell are you?" "A friend. Or an enemy, depending on your next words." The figure stepped closer, the firelight now revealing a mask etched with otherworldly runes. "You used a fragment of Soul Echo during your last battle." Hinata blinked. "Soul... Echo?" The figure tilted its head. "Interesting. You did it instinctively. That shouldn't be possible." The flames flickered unnaturally. Alis didn't stir. Hinata took a cautious step back. "You're from the Upper Realms, aren't you?" "No," the figure replied. "I was cast out of them. Like you." That froze Hinata in place. "You... were denied reincarnation too?"The figure chuckled, dry and bitter. "Worse. I was unmade. Stripped of divinity. A god in exile." The realization struck him like a lightning bolt. "You're... Val'Kyros." The Cursed Soul of the Titans' Heart. The fallen god. The one the other gods never spoke of unless in warning. Val'Kyros nodded slowly. "You've attracted my attention, Hinata. You, a hollow soul with no fate, have done what should be impossible. You've stirred the Nether's memory." Hinata hesitated. "What do you want from me?" "I want to offer you a deal," Val'Kyros said. "No riddles. No lies. Power. In exchange for... cooperation." Hinata narrowed his eyes. "What kind of power?" "The kind that lets you rewrite the laws of your existence. The kind that can make even the gods tremble." It was tempting. The firelight danced across his face as memories of a cold city street and cruel stares flooded his mind. No purpose. No home. No legacy. And now... "Why me?" he asked. "Because," Val'Kyros whispered, "you're already broken. And only broken things can be reforged."Silence. Alis stirred but did not wake. Hinata clenched his fists. "Fine. What do I have to do?" Val'Kyros extended a hand. In his palm was a dark shard-shimmering, pulsing like a heartbeat. "Accept this. A fragment of my soul. With it, you'll gain the foundation of Soul Echo: Rewrite Existence. A proto version... fueled not by divine essence, but hate." Hate. He had plenty of that. Hinata reached out and touched the shard. Pain. Blinding, searing agony ripped through his chest. He collapsed to the ground, vision swimming with ancient visions. Titans screaming. A city burning. Gods turning away in disgust. A name whispered a thousand times, cursed into eternity: Val'Kyros. And then it was over. Hinata gasped for air, eyes wide.The figure was gone. Only the fire remained-and a glowing brand now etched over his heart, shaped like a broken circle. Alis sat up, sword in hand. "You okay?" she asked groggily. "You're sweating like crazy." Hinata looked at her, then down at his chest. "Yeah," he lied. "Just a nightmare."Latest Chapter
echoes before the fall
The night settled over the Nether like a thick, trembling breath, as if even the realm itself sensed whatwas coming. Hinata walked ahead, his footsteps slow, heavy, yet stubbornly steady. Alis followedsilently. She didn’t try to stop him—not because she didn’t want to, but because she understood. Shefinally understood what he carried inside him.Hinata had always been the one who smiled first, even when everything else was broken. He crackedjokes during battles, tripped over his own sword, and called himself “the discount hero nobody ordered.”But beneath all that? There was a weight. A silent, dragging gravity he had never let anyone see.Tonight, he didn’t hide it.“Alis,” he said softly, not turning back. “Do you ever… feel like the world gave you power just to seehow fast it could take everything from you?”Alis swallowed. “Every day.”Hinata chuckled, but it was a sad, cracked sound. “Guess we’re both disasters.”The path opened into the obsidian clearing—the place where the
The thing that stares back
The Nether was quiet. Too quiet. Not the normal “something’s stalking you” quiet—thekind where even fear holds its breath.Alis was asleep by the dying fire, blade resting across her lap. I couldn’t. Sleep, that is.Every time I closed my eyes, the Laws hummed in the back of my skull—lines of glowingscript threading through the dark like veins of living light.I stared at my palm. The marks from before were pulsing faintly, rearranging themselves.Words, sentences… rules.I didn’t read them so much as feel them. Like the universe whispering its cheat codes.“If it bleeds, it can be rewritten,” a voice murmured in my head. It sounded suspiciously likemine.I raised my hand toward a rock nearby. One single glowing line floated above it—[Law:Gravity]“Okay, maybe just a little test,” I whispered.I tapped it.The rock screamed. Not metaphorically—it screamed like a living thing being peeled out ofreality. Then it floated upward, twisting mid-air, melting into ash and light.I stumbl
Divine court Aka heavens DMV
I dreamed again.Not of monsters. Not of fire. Paperwork.Endless glowing scrolls stacked to the sky. Angels in suits flying around likecaffeine-addicted pigeons, stamping documents with holy approval seals. Every time ascroll got approved, it disintegrated into sparkly dust.One angel sighed so hard it created a tiny hurricane.“Welcome to the Divine Court,” said a voice behind me. “Please take a number.”I turned—and yeah. There was a line. A literal line of souls stretching miles long. Some ofthem had been waiting for centuries.“This is... heaven’s DMV,” I muttered. “Figures.”I looked down and realized I was holding a clipboard.Case #8421 — Denied Reincarnation: Self-Termination Clause 3B.My own name was stamped on it in big glowing letters. “Wow. Even in death I’mpaperwork.”Before I could complain, the whole place started to glitch—like someone hitCTRL+ALT+DELETE on reality.The angels melted into patterns of glass and light, forming a tall woman made entirely ofreflect
The fire that remembers
The morning after Memory spoke his name, something in Hinata snapped. Not like glass. Like a blade finally drawn out of its tusted sheath. --- He sat alone beneath a jagged outcropping, staring into the distant horizon where the Nether broke off into obsidian rivers and soulstorms. The brand on his chest burned hotter and hotter each hour, pulsing with the knowledge of his name. Hinata. Not chosen. Not erased.Remembered. Alis approached cautiously, her boots crunching bone-dust beneath her leaving behind a trial of matching footprints behind her with each step. "You're quiet," she said. "Not anymore," he replied. She raised an eyebrow. "That so?" He turned to her. His eyes were no longer desperate. They were calm.Too calm.They had the kind of intensity you would only expect from an overpowered aura farming nonchalant mainc haracter of an overated anime "I don't want to run anymore." He said to her in a deep voice maintaining his nonchalant deminer Alis sat beside him, uns
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They walked in silence.Not because there was nothing to say-but because every word now felt like it echoed beyond them.Hinata had rewritten a being that was supposed to be unrewritable.And the Nether had noticed.---"How are you feeling?" Alis asked eventually, her tone less teasing, more wary."Like I committed a cosmic war crime in my pajamas," Hinata muttered.She cracked a dry smile. "You're adapting.""To what? Being a threat to reality?""No. To being seen."---They camped in the ruins of an upside-down castle-floors above, ceilings below. Nothing madesense in this part of the Nether. Gravity was more of a suggestion.Alis lit a blue flame with her fingers and leaned against a broken throne.Hinata sat nearby, rubbing his hand. The mark there was glowing faintly again, but differently.Pulsing like a question.Why haven't you asked me what it means?" he asked.She didn't look up. "Because if you're not ready to tell me, it's not my business."Hinata nodded, appreciating the
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The Nether was changing.Not in the obvious ways-there were still screams in the distance, and the ground still pulsed like adying organ-but something beneath the surface was shifting.And it was following Hinata.---They moved quickly through the Hollow Spine, Alis cutting a path through the ruins with the casualgrace of someone who'd stopped fearing monsters a long time ago. Hinata kept pace, his body sore,his soul burning with the echo of last night's fracture."Where are we going now?" he asked, wiping sweat from his brow."Somewhere less haunted," Alis replied. "Somewhere we can think.""Thinking is dangerous here.""Then it's a perfect match for you."---They found shelter in the husk of a crumbled palace-its walls blackened by time, its towers bentinward like teeth. Inside, fractured mirrors lined the halls. None of them reflected properly. Hinatasaw versions of himself in each: younger, older, missing an eye, missing hope."Why is everything here allergic to chill?" he
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