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Chapter 67: The Backlash
Author: Milky-Ink
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The golden blast knocked the world out of order. A roar of resonance tore through the chamber, throwing Rina back, slamming Caleb and Viktor into the rubble, sending Maya sprawling with a cry.

The cavern floor rippled like a stone dropped into water, metal bending and groaning. But Rina didn’t feel the impact.

Her arms locked around Malik’s body, refusing to let him go even as the shockwave rattled her bones. His back arched against her, a strangled gasp ripping out of him as the filament spark fused against his chest. “Malik, Malik, breathe, just breathe!”

A violent convulsion snapped through him. Then, His pulse steadied. Not normal. Not safe. But steadier. Alive. Relief crashed into her so hard she almost sobbed. Then a cold realization followed, The entity screamed.

The fractured silhouette at the far end of the chamber erupted with golden fury, shards of light shooting outward like razors. Its rebuilding had been interrupted, violently.

It staggered, shape glitching, collapsing i
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