The shackles cut deep, each jolt of the chain sparking fire in Kael’s wrists as the guards dragged him up the temple steps. The stones beneath his feet had been worn smooth by centuries of pilgrims— people who had come here seeking blessing, forgiveness, or the spectacle of punishment.
The Temple Square yawned open before him, a hollow carved into the bones of the mountain. And it was full— so full Kael couldn’t make sense of it at first. Thousands of faces, pressed tight against one another, filling tiers carved from rock, spilling into balconies and rooftops. They leaned against iron rails meant to keep them off the sacred floor. He had never seen so many eyes, and every single one of them seemed to want him dead. High above the crowd, the stone gods stared without blinking. The Radiant Father with his hand forever raised in blessing. The Merciful Mother with arms spread wide. The Stern Judge, sword and scales frozen mid-balance. They had been carved long before Kael’s curse, before the Eclipse Mark ever scarred flesh. Yet somehow, their blank stone gazes felt sharpened just for him. “Move,” one of the guards snarled, shoving him forward. The chains rattled, loud as bells in the sudden hush. At the center waited the altar— a block of white marble stained by centuries of sacrifice. Beyond it rose the Sanctum of Luminar itself. Its spires climbed so high, Kael thought the sky must ache from the weight. Sunlight caught the glass windows, breaking them into rainbows that scattered across the square as if the gods themselves had come to watch. The doors of the Sanctum opened. High Hierophant Malrick appeared, white robes trailing like snow. His staff, tipped with a crystal swollen with light, seemed almost alive— pulsing, humming, making the air itself quiver. The crowd stilled as one. Not even a cough broke the silence. “People of Eryndor.” Malrick’s voice boomed, carried by stone and design until it seemed the mountain itself spoke. “Bear witness to the will of the divine. Behold how the heavens test those who dare to draw breath in cursed flesh.” His gaze slid across the square and found Kael. The boy felt pinned to the stone, the burn beneath his collar sharpening into pain. The Eclipse Mark throbbed, eager, as if it recognized its enemy. “Look,” Malrick thundered, staff pointing straight at him, “and see ruin given form. Marked at birth with shadow’s sigil, tainted with corruption, bound to hunger that would devour all light.” The words rolled out heavy, carried across every tier. Murmurs rippled through the crowd, a field bending under sudden wind. “The very day he drew his first breath,” Malrick declared, “the Veil itself trembled. Crops failed. Infants were still in their mothers’ wombs. The sacred bloodline of Draven was fouled.” Kael’s lips moved before he could stop them. “That’s not true.” The words barely made a sound, swallowed by the roil of voices. A woman in the front row spat at his feet. “Cursed spawn!” “Drive him out!” a man bellowed from the upper seats. “Let the Blightlands claim their own!” Malrick lifted his staff, and the noise cut off as if a blade had sliced it. “Peace. The divine wisdom surpasses mortal fear. If shadow clings to this child, then by sacred trial shall it be tested. Light itself will judge whether he stands or falls.” He descended the temple steps with the deliberate grace of a hawk circling prey. With each step, the crystal burned brighter until Kael had to squint against it. “Trial by combat,” the High Priest pronounced. “Beast against beast. Corruption against corruption. Let the righteous see the verdict of heaven.” From the noble tier, laughter spilled down. Not cruel, not even harsh… just bright, careless laughter, the kind reserved for games. Aelric Draven lounged on an ivory chair, hair catching the sunlight like a crown he hadn’t yet earned. Nobles crowded around him, silks and velvet glowing, gems glittering at every hand. “My lords,” Aelric called, his voice carrying with the ease of someone who had never been ignored, “shall we wager? I’ll place fifty crowns that he doesn’t survive the first charge.” Laughter. Rings flashing as Lord Garrett leaned forward. “Too generous, Your Grace. Twenty breaths, no more.” “Ten,” sang Lady Morwyn, her laugh like chimes. “Look at him shake already.” “Five,” Lord Thorne tossed in, his boyish voice still cracking. “Five breaths, then silence.” “Three,” Aelric said, his grin sharp as a blade. “Three breaths and the curse ends. Who matches me?” Gold purses opened. Servants scribbled bets. Divine justice was reduced to numbers and laughter. “Four!” someone shouted. “Two and a half!” “Do screams count as breaths?” Their laughter fell like arrows. In the common tiers, the talk was different. A merchant’s wife clutched her shawl. “What if it spreads? What if watching damns us?” “The priests know their work,” her husband answered, though the words carried more hope than faith. “My grandmother said cursed blood draws demons,” a young mother whispered, clutching her infant tight. “What if they come here?” “Hush,” scolded an elder. “The High Priest speaks for the Light.” But doubt had already sunk its teeth in. A sound pierced it all. A whimper. Fang. The pup had wriggled past guards, pressing against the iron barrier, claws scraping uselessly for purchase. His eyes locked on Kael, desperate, loyal. Guards lunged, but Fang darted between boots, stubborn as only the starving could be. “No,” Kael whispered, chains biting as he strained forward. “Go home. Please.” The pup whined again, trembling, unwilling to leave. “I’m sorry,” Kael breathed, his words meant for Fang alone, for the loyalty that should never have been wasted on him. “I’m sorry for everything.” At the altar, Malrick planted his staff. The crystal flared, searing white. He began to chant in the tongue older than kingdoms, words that made the stone underfoot hum. Umbras revelat, shadows unveiled… Lumine judicium, by light be judged… Sanguis maledictus, cursed blood… Morte aut vita, death or life… Each syllable threaded into Kael’s bones, vibrating in marrow and blood. The Eclipse Mark flared back, burning, whispering in a voice like grinding stone. Promises curled at the edges of thought… power, vengeance, freedom. All he had to do was reach. The chant ended. Malrick’s eyes fixed on him, pale and cold, but there was something else beneath the calm surface… something hungry. Plans within plans. “Let the trial begin,” the High Priest declared. He lifted his staff. The crystal blazed like a caged star. Beneath the temple, iron groaned. Ancient gears shrieked as doors unlocked. The sound of chains rattled from the dark below, thick as tree trunks. Claws scraped stone, deliberate, patient. The crowd held its breath. From the depths came a snarl that belonged to nightmares. The beast was coming. Kael’s chest tightened, but he didn’t move, didn’t speak. In the space between one heartbeat and the next, he understood what had always been true: his death had been chosen long before this square, long before his first scream as an infant. This wasn’t judgment. It was an execution dressed in light.
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The Beast Unleashed
“Fang,” Kael whispered, his voice drowned by the restless murmur rolling through the crowd. He knelt beside the pup’s broken body, black fire flickering around his trembling hands as they brushed matted fur.A faint sound answered him—a whimper, so fragile it might have been imagined. One amber eye cracked open, dull with pain yet fixed on Kael with stubborn will.Relief cut through Kael like cool water on fevered skin. “Alive,” he breathed. “Stay with me. Please.”Fang’s tail shifted once before stilling again. Barely breathing, but breathing.In the corner of Kael’s sight, symbols flickered—shards of meaning forming words etched into the air:[PAIN ENDURED → STRENGTH +1]Simple, yet undeniable. Somewhere deep inside, Kael understood… every lash, every bruise, every year lived beneath contempt had not broken him. They had tempered him for this moment.The beast roared.It lunged with raw violence, abandoning caution. Eight feet of corruption and muscle hurled forward, jaws gaping wid
The Golden Brother
The laughter crashed over Kael like a storm tide, thousands of voices breaking against him in cruel unison. What poured from the stands was no longer human mirth, but something monstrous… an echoing chorus that fed on pain and called it joy.“Did you see it fly?” wheezed an old merchant, bent double, tears streaming down his lined face. “Like a sack of grain tossed by a storm!”“The mutt thought it could matter!” shouted a woman from the upper tiers. “Look at it now!”Kael crawled across the stones, every inch marked with blood and dust. The faint shimmer of black fire licked at his wounds as he pulled himself closer to Fang’s still form. Broken ribs flared with every breath, yet he pressed forward.“Fang,” he whispered, fingers trembling as they stretched toward the hound’s motionless flank. “Stay with me… please.”From above came the voice that stilled the crowd in an instant—sharp, proud, merciless.“Pathetic.”Aelric Draven rose from the ivory throne, his golden hair a crown in th
The Arena Trial Begins
Black fire crawled across Kael’s chest like lightning trapped in flesh, the Eclipse Mark searing brighter with every heartbeat. The air warped around him, hot and shimmering, and the shadows it cast stretched unnaturally long, writhing against the arena walls as though they wanted to climb into the stands.Pain tore through him in waves. Not just the kind claws and teeth had left, but something older, stranger… like his very nerves were being rewritten, bones melted down and hammered into new shapes. His back arched against the stone floor. His own body felt alien, reshaped from within by fire that wasn’t fire.And then, when the agony reached its peak, he pushed himself upright.Blood ran in slow streams from the gashes across his chest, soaking the dirt beneath him, but the Mark pulsed with an otherworldly rhythm, steady as a drumbeat, steady as life itself. The fire didn’t die down. It clung to him, refusing to release its hold.Gasps shuddered through the crowd. Whole rows of nob
Whispers of the Curse
The beast’s fangs hovered inches from Kael’s throat, ivory daggers catching the torchlight as if eager for his blood. The creature did not lunge… it savored, lowering its jaws with cruel patience, breath hot and fetid with the stink of graves.Pinned beneath its weight, Kael could not move. His chest barely rose. Every attempt at breath stuttered shallowly, and his limbs might as well have been carved from stone. Only his eyes worked, forced to stare upward at the slow approach of death.Is this it? The thought crawled up through the haze of panic. Is this how a dog dies? Spat on, forgotten. Ripped apart for their joy.The crowd answered him with thunder.“Kill it!”“End the blight on House Draven!”“Let the cursed blood soak the stones!”A thousand throats screaming, a thousand hands pounding. The square itself seemed to shake with it. Kael had lived nineteen years beneath those voices… mockery, jeers, eager laughter at his suffering. He knew each cadence like a cruel lullaby.Perhap
Stones and Spite
Fang’s howl cut off, leaving silence so heavy it felt carved from stone. The arena held its breath. Even the monster… fangs dripping, claw hovering above Kael’s throat… had gone still, as if that small pup’s cry had clawed open some memory in its twisted brain.But nothing in Kael’s life stayed still for long. The silence cracked, and memory came rushing in, black and bitter as floodwater.***Two weeks after he’d found Fang, Kael carried the half-healed pup through Eryndor’s market. Fang’s legs still buckled too easily, so Kael held him close, his warmth pressed against Kael’s ribs. The heartbeat there was fast, fragile, alive.“There he is—the cursed wretch!” a voice cut through the din of barter. “And he’s got that diseased mutt with him!”Kael flinched. Before he could turn, small hands grabbed his sleeves, his hair, and tugged at his clothes. A pack of children, teeth bared in cruel grins. Korrath, Torin’s younger brother, stood at their head. Twelve years old, voice breaking, ra
Fang, the Stray Pup
The corrupted beast hit the ground like a falling boulder, the shock rattling loose dust from the temple walls. Once it had been a man… bones and breath, dreams maybe… but now the flesh had been twisted into something monstrous. Eight feet of muscle knotted wrong, jaw stretched wide enough to bite through stone. Yellowed fangs jutted crooked from blackened gums, and its eyes burned red. Not mindless. Worse. It remembered.It paced the ring, slow and deliberate, the way a wolf toys with a rabbit that’s already bleeding out. Each step clicked claw against stone. Foam slid from its mouth and hissed where it spattered the sacred floor.Kael staggered back, the chains at his wrists dragging like anchors. His ribs screamed with every breath, the bruises from the morning’s beating swelling hotter than fire. The Eclipse Mark seared under his shirt, but whatever power it promised stayed sealed, locked as uselessly as his shackles.“Come on!” a man from the stands shouted. “End it already!”“D
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