I AM Kaelor Thane: The God Of War

When She Appeared

When She Appeared

Thanes POV

Guns, missiles, grenades—they are terrifying things, enough to make even the bravest soldier crawl back into his shell. But not me. Not Thane. Ive lived with these weapons for years. Ive cleaned them, carried them, fired them, and felt the burn of their recoil in my shoulders more times than I can count. To me, theyre not monsters. Theyre toys. Cold, cruel toys that Ive learned to master.

But this mission—this horrible, cursed mission—I underestimated. And because I underestimated it, Lysander is gone.

I can still see it: his head jerking back when the bullet tore through him, his body collapsing before I could even shout his name. The snipers shot cut through the roar of the battlefield like lightning. It was the sound of failure, a sound that will haunt me until my last breath.

Hold him down! Hes bleeding out!someone shouted.

Rough hands pressed against my chest and arms. The sting of bandages. The rush of antiseptic that burned hotter than the bullets ever could. Paramedics—three of them—were crouched over me, faces tight with determination.

Let me go,I hissed through clenched teeth. I tried to push myself up, but my body betrayed me, trembling and weak. I have to get back—my men—

Dont move, Commander!one barked. Youve lost too much blood. Another step and youre finished.

Finished. The word cut deeper than any wound.

I tried again to rise, ignoring the dizziness that swept through me. I dont care if I die! Sahil Riyas is out there. If we dont stop him, more of us will fall. I wont—

A paramedic pressed a hand firmly on my shoulder, forcing me back down. His voice hardened. If you try to move, Commander, you wont just die—youll paralyze yourself. Do you want to die crawling like a worm? Is that what Lysanders sacrifice should mean?

I froze, rage and pain warring in my chest. My breathing came ragged, shallow. He was right. My body was a wreck. But still, every part of me screamed to fight.

I closed my eyes, and in the darkness, I saw Lysander again. My friend. My brother in arms. His laughter echoing in the barracks, his steady voice during late-night missions, his unshakable loyalty. And then—his last moment. A crimson spray, a lifeless stare. Gone.

The presidents words hammered inside me: Bring Sahil down, or everything weve built will crumble.

If I fail, I lose not just my promotion but my honor. Worse—I doom the people we swore to protect.

I whimpered despite myself, the sound slipping out like a wounded animal. The paramedics kept working, tying tourniquets, checking my vitals. I hated feeling so weak, so helpless. I was supposed to be the God of War. And here I was, broken, crawling at the edge of death.

And then—she arrived.

At first, I thought my mind was playing tricks on me. A presence cut through the smoke, tall and steady, carrying herself like the battlefield was her home. She moved with precision, her boots finding ground as if even the rubble bowed to her steps.

Reinforcements have arrived!a soldier shouted, his voice a mix of relief and awe.

I forced my eyes open. Through the haze, I saw her clearly.

A woman.

Her stance was unlike anything Id seen. Cold. Calculated. Every inch of her radiated control, power, and something powerful—something I couldnt place.

Who is that?I rasped. My throat was dry, my voice barely more than a whisper.

The paramedic glanced down at me, then back at her. Commander Shawn. Shes leading the reinforcements. Sent by higher command to ensure Sahil is either captured or killed.

Shawn.

The name alone clawed at the edges of my memory. I had seen her—or someone like her—once before. Long ago, in the worst night of my life. When my parents and siblings were slaughtered, when I thought all was lost… someone had saved me. A presence in the firelight, faceless but unforgettable. And now, staring at Shawn, that same aura wrapped around me.

Could it be?

She barked orders with a voice like steel, sharp enough to cut through the gunfire. Suppressive fire on the ridge! Two teams flank left! Push them into the cave choke point!

Her soldiers moved like extensions of her will. No hesitation, no wasted motion.

Then she reached for a grenade.

I couldnt look away. The way her hands moved—smooth, practiced, almost casual. She pulled the pin, lobbed it high. The arc was perfect. Too perfect.

The explosion ripped through the rocks where Sahils men were hiding. Dust and smoke billowed, bodies hurled into the air like ragdolls. Screams followed, then silence. Five terrorists down in one flawless move.

My jaw clenched. That wasnt just experience. That was mastery.

She didnt pause. Her eyes locked on the ridge. Ten of her soldiers broke off, sliding into the cave entrance near the rocks. The eruption of gunfire told me all I needed—theyd found their prey.

Shawn moved forward, calm amid chaos. Her rifle rose, steady as a mountain. She fired in controlled bursts, each shot purposeful, each one claiming a life. Her focus narrowed, her gaze tracking one target alone.

Sahil Riyas.

My blood boiled at the sight of him, scrambling in the depths of the ridge, barking orders to his men. This was the man who had orchestrated the ambush, who had stolen Lysanders life. The man who had haunted my missions for years.

Shawn didnt hesitate. She advanced, her steps relentless. Bullets whipped past her, grenades shattered the earth nearby, but she didnt flinch. No armor, no cover—just her weapon, her skill, and her will.

Who fights like that?I muttered, my voice shaking.

The paramedic beside me gave me a quick glance. Someone who doesnt fear death.

Fear? No. That wasnt it. There was something else in her movements, something chilling. Precision born not just of training, but of obsession.

Then it happened.

Her rifle cracked. Once. Twice. Then the third shot.

Sahil jerked backward. The bullet struck clean through his head. His body slumped, falling like a puppet with its strings cut.

Silence.

The place froze, as if the world itself held its breath.

Sahil Riyas—the ghost who had plagued us, the mastermind, the monster—was dead.

And it was Shawn who had killed him.

I gasped. Relief should have flooded into my mind, but it didnt. Instead, something heavier settled in my chest. Horror. Awe. Confusion.

Shawn lowered her weapon, smoke curling from the barrel. Her soldiers cheered, some shouting her name, others rushing to secure the corpse. But she didnt celebrate.

She turned.

For a minute, her eyes met mine.

It was only a glance, brief as a knifes flicker, but it pierced me. I couldnt breathe. In that gaze, I saw recognition. Or maybe it was judgment. Maybe both.

My hands trembled. My mind spun back to that night long ago. The fire and horrible screams from my siblings and parents.. And the Presence that pulled me from death.

Could it truly be her?

The paramedic noticed my reaction. Commander? You look like youve seen a ghost.

Maybe I had.

I swallowed hard, my throat looking tight. Everybit of me and my instinct screamed at me to ask her, to confront her. But the words wouldnt come. Not yet. Not while my body lay broken, while my mens blood still stained the earth.

Instead, I whispered to myse

lf, the words almost torn from my soul.

I gasped in shock… If this is truly my savior, Im ready to know more of her.