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Chapter 4: Muscle Memory
Author: Ravenelle
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Chapter 4: Muscle Memory

Two men came through the doorway fast and professional, the kind of entrance that told me everything I needed to know. These weren't cops. Cops announce themselves, follow procedures, hesitate for half a second before committing to a room. These men moved like they had done this a hundred times before and expected it to go exactly the way it always did.

They were wrong.

The first one through the door caught the lamp directly to his temple. I swung it before I even realized I was moving, sixteen years of working in kitchens translating into something I had never expected. When you spend that long handling knives and hot pans, moving fast in tight spaces, your body learns to react before your brain catches up. I had burned myself exactly once in my career. After that, my hands always knew where the danger was.

The man dropped like someone had cut his strings, and I was already turning toward the second one.

He was reaching for something at his belt, probably a gun, definitely something that would end this fight in his favor if I gave him half a second to use it. I didn't give him half a second. I threw the lamp at his face and lunged forward before it even connected, slamming the door as hard as I could on his arm.

The sound his bones made when they broke was something I would remember for the rest of my life. He screamed, loud and raw, and I yanked the door back open and drove my knee into his face before he could recover. Blood sprayed across my pants. He went down next to his partner, both of them groaning on the floor of my hotel room, and I knew I had maybe thirty seconds before one of them got back up.

I turned to Jerome. He was conscious, barely, trying to push himself up from the wall with shaking arms.

"Can you move?"

"I don't know," he said, but he was already reaching for my hand.

I grabbed him and pulled him toward the window, the only exit that didn't involve stepping over two men who wanted us dead. The window opened onto a rusted fire escape that looked like it hadn't been inspected since the building was condemned, but right now it was the most beautiful thing I had ever seen.

"Fire escape," I gasped, shoving the window open. "Go."

Jerome went. He half-climbed, half-fell down the metal stairs, his feet clanging against the rusted steps, one hand pressed against his head wound. I followed right behind him, the USB drive clutched in my fist so tightly my knuckles ached.

Behind us, I could hear the attackers recovering. Voices shouting, someone talking into a radio, the heavy thud of footsteps moving toward the window. We had seconds, maybe less.

Jerome hit the alley first, stumbling on the uneven pavement. I landed beside him and looked around frantically for options. We couldn't run, not with Jerome barely able to stand. We needed a vehicle.

And there it was, parked at the mouth of the alley like a gift from whatever god had decided to take an interest in my survival. A black SUV, engine running, probably belonging to the men who had just tried to kill us. They had expected a quick extraction. In and out, grab the targets, drive away. They hadn't expected to need a getaway car themselves.

I had never stolen anything in my life, not even a pack of gum from a convenience store when I was a kid. But desperation is an excellent teacher, and right now I was learning fast.

I shoved Jerome into the back seat and jumped behind the wheel. The keys were in the ignition, just sitting there waiting for me. I turned them and the engine roared to life, and I floored the accelerator before I could think about what I was doing.

We tore out of the alley and into the Tenderloin, the streets empty at four in the morning except for a few homeless people who barely glanced up as we flew past. I ran the first red light without slowing down, then the second, my hands white-knuckled on the steering wheel as I tried to remember how to breathe.

Behind me, Jerome was bleeding again. I could see it in the rearview mirror, fresh red soaking through the bandage I had made from the Vesper towels. He was slumped against the seat, eyes closed, barely conscious.

"Stay with me," I said, but I didn't know if he could hear me.

I didn't know where to go. Hospital was out of the question—they would find us there, whoever they were. Police was even worse, not if federal agents were involved in whatever the hell was happening. I needed somewhere safe, somewhere no one would think to look, somewhere we could hide long enough for me to figure out our next move.

And then I remembered.

After Vesper closed, after the bankruptcy auction sold off everything I had worked for, there had been equipment left over. Stuff that didn't sell, stuff that wasn't worth the cost of moving. It had all been stored in a warehouse in Bayview, a building that was scheduled for demolition but kept getting delayed because the city couldn't agree on what to do with the land. The place had been sitting empty for months. Nobody checked it. Nobody cared about it.

We could hide there, at least for a little while.

I turned the SUV south and drove, trying to keep my speed under control, trying not to attract attention. Sirens wailed somewhere in the distance, probably responding to reports of gunshots or screaming or both. I just had to get us to Bayview before anyone figured out we were in this car.

We crossed Market Street, and that was when everything changed.

My vision blurred without warning, like someone had smeared vaseline across my eyes. I blinked, trying to clear it, but instead of getting better it got worse. Symbols appeared at the edges of my perception, floating characters that looked like numbers and letters but weren't quite either. They pulsed with a faint light that shouldn't have been visible in the darkness of the car.

And then a voice spoke directly into my mind.

It wasn't audible, not exactly. It was more like a thought that wasn't mine, words forming in my head without passing through my ears first. Clear and cold and completely impossible.

"Debt acknowledged. Contract initiated. Your suffering has purchased power."

The car swerved. I gripped the wheel and tried to focus on the road, but the voice kept going, each word burning itself into my consciousness like a brand.

"KARMIC DEBT SYSTEM ACTIVATED."

A screen appeared in front of me. Translucent, floating in midair, hovering between my face and the windshield like a hologram from a science fiction movie. Text scrolled across it, numbers and symbols that made no sense, information that my brain couldn't process because my brain was too busy trying not to crash the car.

I glanced in the rearview mirror. Jerome was unconscious again, slumped sideways across the back seat, completely unaware of what was happening. He couldn't see it. This was only for me.

"What the hell," I whispered, but the words came out weak and shaky. I was losing my grip on reality. I had to be. Head trauma, stress, sleep deprivation—something had finally broken inside my brain and now I was hallucinating while driving a stolen car through San Francisco at four in the morning.

But the screen didn't go away. It stayed right there in my field of vision, glowing softly, waiting for me to acknowledge it.

The text changed, resolving into something I could actually read.

CURRENT BALANCE: -∞

SURVIVAL MODE: ACTIVE

WELCOME, MARCUS WEST.

I stared at the glowing interface, my hands frozen on the wheel, the car drifting across the empty street while the impossible words burned themselves into my vision.

Welcome, Marcus West.

Whatever this was, it knew my name.

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