The Flawed Prodigy
last update2026-04-26 15:42:24

Chapter 8–

“First… this is first,” Hilda said, lifting the book slightly. “You will be learning all kinds of magic spells that exist within the capital.”

She walked calmly to the center of the training ground, her steps measured and precise. Raising her staff toward the three circular targets, she gathered mana effortlessly. A chill spread through the air as frost began forming around the tip of her staff.

“Ice Bullets.”

Shards of ice condensed instantly, sharp and glimmering, before shooting forward at high speed. They struck the targets with deadly precision, shattering them into fragments as a cold mist lingered in the air.

“That was a level-one ice magic skill,” she said, turning back toward Nolan. “Simple to execute.”

Nolan stood there, unable to move, his eyes fixed on the destroyed targets.

“The method is simple,” Hilda continued. “Open your mana channels, imagine frost forming—sharp and condensed—and release it.”

She stepped aside slightly and gestured toward the targets. “Now… your turn.”

Nolan walked forward, his steps slow but steady. Stopping in front of the targets, he took a deep breath and raised his hand. Closing his eyes, he focused inward as mana began to stir faintly around his body.

I can feel it… the flow is there…

He concentrated harder.

A frozen land… endless ice… shape it into spikes…

His fingers tightened slightly.

“Now… shoot.”

“Ice Bullets!!!”

He opened his eyes sharply only for nothing to happen. The mana dispersed instantly, leaving nothing behind.

“…Huh.”

His face paled with embarrassment.

“Ice!!”

Nothing.

“Ice!!!”

Still nothing.

Again and again, he tried, his voice rising with frustration but each attempt ended the same way. Empty. Silent. Failed.

“That’s enough!!” Hilda snapped, her voice cutting through his attempts. “Never have I seen someone this flawed.”

Her expression hardened. “Try fire. The same method.”

Nolan clenched his jaw, determination returning to his eyes. “This time… I’ll succeed.”

He turned back toward the targets, focusing again. Mana gathered weakly as he repeated the process, visualizing flames this time burning, sharp, destructive.

Minutes passed.

Nothing happened.

He stood there, motionless, his shoulders slowly dropping as tears formed in his eyes.

“I’ve tried all the elements… and failed,” he muttered bitterly. Damn system… why won’t you let me use magic…?

From the side, Issabella watched with a pale expression. “He’s bad at this…”

“I agree,” Ralph added quietly.

Hilda exhaled sharply. “How can one fail at all magic? You truly are the worst of them all.”

That was enough to snap something in him.

“That’s not it!” Nolan shouted, his face flushing red with anger. “Your teaching is flawed. Give me that book!”

Before she could react, he snatched the book from her hands and flipped it open.

“It says right here—focus your energy, imagine the result, and it happens!” he argued, raising his hand again. “Now for earth… the simplest one.”

He focused again, forcing mana to gather.

“Stone Bullets.”

Nothing.

Not even the slightest reaction.

“…Yeah. I knew it,” he muttered, tossing the book aside carelessly. “This thing’s fake.”

He turned away with a dismissive smile and instantly froze.

The air grew heavy.

Hilda’s mana flooded the area, suffocating everything in its path. Issabella staggered slightly under the pressure, while Ralph remained steady, though tense.

“You do realize…” Hilda’s voice dropped, cold and sharp, “…you just threw my book on the ground.”

She stepped forward.

Nolan instinctively stepped back, forcing a nervous smile. “Now now… let’s calm down… we can talk like civilized people…”

“Oh?” she replied, her staff glowing faintly. “Is that how civilized people behave?”

“I—I’ll pick it up! Just calm down!”

He quickly reached toward where the book had landed but before his hand could touch it, the book disintegrated, breaking apart like ash carried by the wind.

A sharp crack echoed in his mind, and for a brief moment, everything went dark.

That’s it… I’m dead.

But then... Something changed.

Energy surged through his body, far stronger than before. Stone fragments began forming midair, gathering rapidly.

“Huh…?”

Hilda’s eyes widened slightly.

Ralph and Issabella leaned forward in shock.

The stone bullets fully formed—

—and launched.

They tore through the targets instantly, piercing straight through and embedding deep into the wall behind them. Dust erupted into the air as the impact echoed across the training ground.

Silence followed.

“He… did it…” Ralph muttered in disbelief.

No one spoke.

As the dust cleared, the damage became visible deep punctures in solid stone, far beyond what a basic spell should produce.

Hilda slowly turned her gaze toward Nolan, her expression unreadable.

How did he do that…?

Nolan stared at his own hand, equally stunned.

“How…?”

A chime echoed in his mind.

[System Activated.]

[Host absorbed magic spell: 4 elemental magic.]

[Ability class updating…]

[Update complete.]

[Status Window]

Name: Nolan Weldon

Age: 18

Class: Mage (4 Element User)

Level: 10 (Tier–1)

HP: 195/196

Mana: 120/120

Abilities: Fire Lv1, Earth Lv1, Wind Lv1, Water Lv1

Strength: 20 | Speed: 22 | Agility: 21 | Intelligence: 24

Free Tokens: 12

“Woah… but how…” he whispered, reaching toward the system.

“Explain.”

Hilda’s voice cut through his thoughts, colder than before. “And where did you take my book?”

“I… don’t know,” he replied, glancing toward where it had vanished. “It just… happened.”

“Hmph.”

She turned away.

“That’s enough training for today. Get some rest. Tomorrow… real training begins.”

With that, she left.

Later that night, Nolan lay on his bed, staring at the system.

“So books can be absorbed… and I gain the abilities directly…” he muttered. “Level one skills… locked progression…”

A knock interrupted him.

“You can come in.”

The door opened, and a young man stepped inside. He looked to be around seventeen, his posture refined and composed. Dark hair framed his sharp features, and his eyes held a calm but calculating gaze. His noble attire was flawless, tailored perfectly to his frame.

Nolan’s eyes narrowed slightly.

No doubt about it…

“Greetings, dear brother.” The male said with a mocking grin.

Nolan’s expression turned cold.

“…Hello, Victor,” he said quietly. “…dear little brother.”

---

Continue to read this book for free
Scan the code to download the app

Latest Chapter

  • The Hand of a God

    Chapter 31. "What was that...?" One of Isabella's knights stared at the dimming light on the horizon, his sword hanging limp at his side, his face pale with awe. The golden radiance had faded to a faint glow, then to nothing, leaving behind only the memory of something impossible. Isabella smiled. It was small, tired, but real. She looked down from her perch in the tree and released a heavy breath, her shoulders dropping, the tension of the day finally leaving her muscles. "We rest here for the night." She jumped from the branch, landing silently on the moss below. "You all better get some rest." --- On the far end of the forest, Nolan collapsed. His body hit the ground like a puppet with its strings cut, his remaining arm flung out, his eyes rolling back. The purple flames had died. The wind had stilled. All that remained was a boy, broken and bleeding, who had given everything he had. "Master!" Xavier ran to him, sliding to his knees, his hands shaking as he checked f

  • Absolute Light

    "Arrrggghhhhh!!!"Xavier's scream tore through the void, raw and broken, as electric shocks crawled over his body like living snakes. He fell to one knee, his head hanging low, his whole body convulsing. Around him, dozens of golden strings lay dead and dull on the black floor, their light extinguished, their magic spent."Another wrong string chosen..." The voice echoed through the darkness, dripping with mockery, with amusement, with the cruel patience of something that had watched mortals fail for centuries. "This sure is entertaining. Which one will you choose next? Another wrong string, or..."Without another thought, Xavier reached out and pulled another. It turned gray in his hand, the light dying before it could even flicker.His eyes widened, horror flooding his chest."Wrong yet again."Electricity surged through Xavier's body, ten times stronger than before. He screamed, his voice cracking, his eyes rolling back until only the whites showed. He collapsed to the ground, twit

  • The Burn and the Choice

    'Chapter 29 The knight kept running, Nolan slung over his shoulder like a sack of grain. Blood soaked through the knight's armor, warm and sticky, painting his back in dark ribbons. Nolan's face was hidden in shadow, his eyes invisible, his body limp and silent. He had not spoken a word since they left the clearing, had not moved, had not breathed in any way that suggested consciousness. The knight ran on, branches whipping his face, roots threatening to trip him with every step. His lungs burned. His legs ached. But he did not stop. Could not stop. "Hey, you..." The voice came from behind him, low and dark and completely wrong. It did not sound like a wounded boy. It sounded like something that had crawled out of a grave and decided to keep walking. The knight paused mid-step, his eyes widening, his whole body freezing in place. "Ma... Master?" "Don't you think you've done enough running around for the day?" Nolan asked, his expression still hidden, his voice carrying an e

  • The Price of Survival

    Chapter 28 The defense dragged on for over twenty minutes, each second stretching into eternity. Nolan stood alone in the offense, his magic tearing through the darkness, fire and wind and earth exploding from his palms in desperate bursts. Blood sprayed across the forest floor, black and red, painting the leaves in streaks of death.The lizards learned. They adapted. Their attention switched to him alone, abandoning the shielded knights to focus on the mage who burned their kin. They attacked in groups, coordinated, silent, shadows given fangs and claws.His men stepped in, defending him as much as they could, their swords flashing, their shields rising, their bodies becoming walls between their lord and the monsters."Give me your sword."Nolan didn't wait for permission. He snatched the blade from a knight's hand and stormed into the fray, his movements wild, reckless, driven by adrenaline and fear. He slaughtered lizard after lizard, steel meeting scales, magic meeting flesh. But

  • The Chosen One

    'Chapter 27 -"Young Master Nolan!!! Are you injured?!"One of the knights rushed over, his boots crunching through leaves, his face pale with worry. He reached out a hand, then stopped, his whole body freezing in place.Nolan slowly turned.His expression was dark and serious, his purple eyes glowing brighter than ever before, two burning embers in the shadow of the forest. He stared at the knight for a long moment, silent, assessing, seeing something the others couldn't.The knight took one step back. Blonde hair. Blue eyes. A silver piercing on his right ear catching the dim light. Young. Maybe seventeen. Scared but trying to hide it."I'm alright. Tell me... what's your name?" Nolan asked, his voice calm, cool, controlled."My name is Xavier, my lord." The knight gave a slight bow, his hand trembling at his side.Nolan's heart skipped a beat. His blood turned cold."It truly is him..." he thought, his mind reeling. "Why is he appearing so early in the book? And in this family's ho

  • The Shadow Looms

    Chapter 26Hours passed at the far north, where Hilda and her army pushed deeper into the forest. They had cleared six stages of different beasts, each one more vicious than the last. Blood painted their armor in streaks of green, black, and crimson. Their swords dulled. Their shields cracked. But they kept moving."We stop here for now."Hilda stood at the edge of a small clearing, her eyes scanning the darkness between the trees. The forest ahead seemed to breathe, its branches swaying without wind, its roots trembling with something buried deep beneath the earth.Her men dropped to the ground, gasping, their bodies hitting the dirt with exhausted thuds."Thank the heavens above... I thought we were still going." One knight sprawled on his back, staring at the canopy, his chest heaving. Others relaxed against tree trunks, their armor clinking softly, their faces pale beneath the grime."Eat up and drink water. Tend the wounded. We head out in an hour's time." Hilda's voice was flat,

More Chapter
Explore and read good novels for free
Free access to a vast number of good novels on MegaNovel app. Download the books you like and read anywhere & anytime.
Read books for free on the app
Scan code to read on App