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Chapter 5: A Detective's Intuition
Author: D. Safitri
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Caevrik stepped into the dim hallway of the Lowside tenement, the scent of damp wood and boiled cabbage clinging to the peeling wallpaper. He reached the door to 2B, his fingers instinctively checking the thin, transparent hair he’d wedged into the frame earlier. It was gone.

He didn't reach for a weapon. He didn't have one, and more importantly, he didn't need one. He simply adjusted his posture, letting his shoulders slump and his eyes lose their predatory sheen. He pushed the door open.

"You’re late for a man who’s supposed to be hiding from the world, Dorneth."

Detective Othran Velk was sitting in the room’s only chair, his feet propped up on the edge of the sagging bed. He was flipping through a stack of grainy, black-and-white printouts.

Caevrik leaned against the doorframe, letting out a long, weary sigh. "The bus system in the Lowside isn't exactly calibrated for convenience, Detective. What are you doing here? I thought I gave my statement."

"You gave a statement, yeah. It was a very moving story. The loyal valet, the crawlspace, the shadows. I almost teared up," Velk said, tossing one of the printouts onto the small desk. "The problem is, I spent my afternoon looking at security footage from the Grand Meridian. You know, from the Gala where Ormav Deyl decided to have a public meltdown?"

Caevrik walked over to the sink and began filling a cracked mug with tap water. "I heard about that on the news. Sounds like the city’s losing its favorite villains one by one."

"It’s a tragedy," Velk said, his voice dripping with sarcasm. "But here’s the funny part. I saw a waiter in the background of about six different shots. Tall guy. Very professional. He had this way of moving... like he wasn't really there. Like he was part of the furniture."

"Most waiters are, Detective. That’s the job."

"Sure. But this waiter looked an awful lot like a man I talked to this morning. A man who was supposedly too traumatized to leave his cousin’s house." Velk stood up, walking toward Caevrik until they were inches apart. "Care to explain why 'Arthur Pringle' has your face and your fingerprints all over the champagne flutes?"

Caevrik took a slow sip of the water, his expression remaining perfectly blank. "I needed the money, Detective. My masters are dead. My bank accounts were linked to the estate and are currently frozen for probate. Did you expect me to starve for the sake of a mourning period?"

"I expected you not to lie to my face," Velk snapped. "And I certainly didn't expect you to be standing five feet away when Evelyn Deyl received a very interesting envelope."

"I don't know anything about an envelope. I was serving drinks. If a guest drops something, I pick it up. That’s what I’ve done for twenty years. It’s muscle memory at this point."

Velk paced the small room, his eyes scanning every corner. "You’re good. I’ll give you that. You’ve got that 'humble servant' act down to a science. But Ormav Deyl is ruined. Jarev Malken is currently screaming at his lawyers because someone leaked his dockworker payoffs. And both of them were Krossel’s biggest rivals."

"It’s a bad week for the neighborhood," Caevrik said quietly. "Maybe God finally got tired of them."

"God doesn't leak bank statements to the D.A., Dorneth. People do. People with access. People who spent two decades listening at keyholes."

Caevrik set the mug down and looked Velk in the eye. "You think I did this? You think I, a valet with a third-grade education and a soot-stained suit, managed to take down two of the most powerful men in this city in forty-eight hours?"

"I think you’re a lot smarter than you let on," Velk said. "And I think you’re holding a grudge that could level a skyscraper."

"If I were half as capable as you're suggesting, Detective, I wouldn't be living in a room that smells like a wet dog. I’d be on a beach in the South Seas."

"Maybe you like the smell of wet dogs. Or maybe you just like watching them bleed."

Caevrik shook his head, a small, sad smile touching his lips. "You’re looking for a mastermind where there’s only a survivor. If you want to know who’s really benefiting from all this, you’re looking at the wrong page of the ledger."

Velk stopped pacing. "What’s that supposed to mean?"

"Deyl and Malken weren't the only ones who wanted the Krossels gone," Caevrik said, his voice dropping to a confidential whisper. "They were just the loudest. But they’re amateurs compared to someone like Tharvik Solren."

Velk frowned, his brow furrowed in thought. "Solren? The shipping magnate? He wasn't even at the Gala."

"Exactly," Caevrik said. "He’s never where the noise is. But did you know he’s been buying up Krossel’s debt for the last three years? He’s the one who’s going to end up with the deeds once the dust settles. If anyone had the resources to frame Deyl and Malken while getting rid of the Krossels, it’s him."

"Solren’s a ghost. We’ve never been able to pin a single thing on him."

"Because he uses people like me, Detective. Or people who look like me. If I were you, I’d stop worrying about a waiter and start wondering why Solren’s personal security team was spotted near the Krossel estate two nights before the fire."

Velk’s eyes sharpened. "You saw them?"

"I saw black SUVs with tinted windows. I saw men who didn't look like they were there to deliver the mail. I told Master Krossel, but he wouldn't listen. He thought he was untouchable."

"Why didn't you put this in your statement?"

"Because I was scared! I still am. You think Solren is going to let me live if he knows I’m talking to you? I’m a valet, Detective. My only protection is being invisible."

Velk leaned against the desk, rubbing his jaw. "Solren. It fits the profile. He’s been trying to monopolize the ports for a decade."

"He’s the one you want," Caevrik urged, stepping closer. "He’s the one with the motive and the means. I’m just a man trying to find his next meal without getting a bullet in the back of his head."

"If you're lying to me, Dorneth, I’ll personally make sure you spend the rest of your life in a cell with the people you’ve 'accidentally' inconvenienced."

"I have no reason to lie. I just want this to be over. I want to sleep without hearing the screaming."

Velk stared at him for a long beat, searching for a crack in the mask. Caevrik gave him nothing but a look of exhausted honesty. Finally, the detective sighed and headed for the door.

"Don't leave the city," Velk said, his hand on the knob. "And for God’s sake, stay away from Galas. You're a terrible waiter."

"I’ll try to remember that, Detective. Thank you for the advice."

"Yeah, whatever. I’m gonna go look into Solren. If even half of what you said about those SUVs is true, I might actually get a promotion out of this mess."

"I hope you do. You look like you could use a win."

Velk grunted and stepped out into the hallway. "Lock your door, Dorneth. This isn't the kind of neighborhood where you want to leave the welcome mat out."

"I intend to," Caevrik said.

He watched the door close and listened to the heavy thud of Velk’s boots receding down the stairs. The moment the building’s front door slammed shut, Caevrik’s face shifted. The weariness evaporated, replaced by a cold, sharp focus.

He walked over to the desk and sat down. He pulled the laptop from its hiding place and flicked it open.

"Vane, you there?"

"I’m here, C. That was a close one. I thought for a second the detective was gonna cuff you."

"He’s a good man, but he’s looking for a story that makes sense. I just gave him one. How’s the feed on Solren?"

"He’s already biting. My scripts are flagging his name in the police database. Velk is making calls. You just put a massive target on Solren’s back."

"Good," Caevrik said, his fingers dancing across the keys. "Solren was next on the list anyway. This just saves me a few steps. If the police do the heavy lifting, I can focus on the logistics for the pier."

"You’re playing a dangerous game, man. If Solren finds out you’re the one who pointed the finger..."

"He won't. By the time he realizes what’s happening, he’ll be too busy defending himself from a racketeering charge to worry about a dead man’s servant."

Caevrik reached into his coat and pulled out the small, black ledger. He laid it on the desk and opened it to the page where Jarev Malken’s name was written. He picked up the red pen, the ink bright and aggressive against the white paper.

"C? You still there?" Vane’s voice crackled.

"I’m here. I’m just finishing some paperwork."

"Right. Well, I’ve got the files you asked for. The offshore account links for the Krossel shell companies. It’s all ready to go."

"Transfer them to the encrypted drive. I’ll review them tonight."

"You got it. Get some rest, C. You look like hell."

"I’ll rest when the book is closed, Vane."

Caevrik hung up and stared at the ledger. He felt a strange sense of calm. The city was a machine, and he had finally figured out where to stick the wrench to make the whole thing grind to a halt.

He stood up and walked to the window, looking out at the skyline. Somewhere out there, Ormav Deyl was crying into a glass of cheap scotch, and Jarev Malken was packing a bag for a meeting he would never return from. And soon, Tharvik Solren would find his world collapsing under the weight of a detective who thought he was a hero.

"You should have looked at the man holding the tray," Caevrik whispered to the distant lights.

He turned back toward the bed, but his heart stopped for a fraction of a second.

The ledger.

It was still sitting on the desk, open to the page with the red lines. And next to it, the door was slightly ajar.

He moved to the door, his heart hammering. He looked out into the hallway. It was empty. But then, he looked down at the floor.

A single, half-burned cigar stub lay on the floorboards, still smoldering. The same brand Detective Velk had been smoking at the manor.

Caevrik looked back at the desk. The red ink was dry, but the message was clear. Velk hadn't left. He had circled back. He had seen it.

The valet closed the ledger slowly, his mind already racing to find a way to fix the one variable he hadn't accounted for. The detective wasn't just competent. He was patient.

"Well played, Detective," Caevrik murmured, the cold clarity returning to his eyes. "I guess the chess match isn't over after all."

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