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Chapter 5 - The System and it's maker
Author: KJS
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Adrian Cole pulled himself back from the edge of darkness, the metallic taste of blood and cold iron filling his mouth. His skull felt like it was being split by a hammer, and the room spun as his mind struggled to make sense of the shadows.

He was sitting upright, his body lashed to a heavy steel chair in the middle of a massive, quiet warehouse.

The floor was cold concrete, and old rusted beams crisscrossed the ceiling high above. Somewhere in the dark, he could hear the steady drip-drip of water. His arms and legs were tied down, but not with normal ropes. Instead, he was bound by thin, glowing threads that looked like captured starlight. They felt freezing against his skin. When Adrian tried to pull away, the threads didn't stretch or break; they just held him with a terrifying, silent strength.

He realized then that no normal human had caught him.

Three men stood in a half-circle in front of him. They weren't wearing masks anymore. They were tall and perfectly built, dressed in white tactical clothes that looked strange on them, almost like they weren't used to wearing fabric at all.

The one on the left, Cariel, spoke first. His voice was soft, like falling snow, and his eyes looked sad. “You’re awake, Adrian. That is good. We don’t want to hurt you for long, you who carries the Ledger.”

The one in the middle, Sariel, leaned against a rusty pillar with his arms crossed. His voice was deep and sharp. “Don’t waste time being nice, Cariel. He is just a host. He has to give the system back. One way or another.”

The third one, Barachiel, was grinning. He was playing with a combat knife, spinning it between his fingers. “Oh, let the man catch his breath! He’s survived a fire, a divorce, and a kidnapping all in one week. That’s a new record, buddy. I respect that.”

Adrian stared at them, his throat feeling like sandpaper. “You’re... the guys from the van.” He remembered the vision he had seen. He knew how they were supposed to die, and a part of him wanted to save them—if they were worth saving.

He also knew that Shadow was coming. Not just for him, but for them too.

“We are protectors,” Cariel said gently. “We keep the balance.”

Sariel snapped, losing patience. “We are angels, Adrian. Whether we are fallen or not, we have a job to do.”

Adrian let out a dry, hacking laugh. “Angels? Yeah, right. And I’m the king of England.” He couldn't believe it, even though the red screen had called them angels earlier.

Barachiel’s grin got even wider. He stepped forward and moved his shoulders. Suddenly, the air around him began to glow. Two massive wings burst out—bright white feathers tipped with gold. They were so large they nearly touched the walls of the warehouse. His skin started to shine, and his eyes turned into glowing bronze. Cariel and Sariel did the same. Cariel’s wings were soft and bright, while Sariel’s were dark and tipped with shadows.

Adrian’s jaw dropped. He had seen crazy things since the fire, but this was like something out of the Bible. He couldn't deny it anymore. He watched them in wonder, his old doubts disappearing in an instant.

Cariel spoke again, his voice filled with a strange peace. “And on the seventh day, God rested. But we did not.”

Adrian could only stare, his mind completely blown.

Cariel continued the story. “A long time ago, we three were told to experiment. We were meant to test the limits of death and the choices humans make. We built tools to help us. One of those tools was the Alchemist Ledger. It was a system made to weigh and manage souls at the edge of life. It was meant for a neutral judge in the afterlife. But recently, it escaped. It looked for a human heart that felt exactly the right amount of anger and pain. It found you in that fire.”

Sariel’s voice was as cold as ice. “The Ledger is a rogue program now. It tempts people. It steals souls. It has to be taken back so we can fix it. The only way to force it to return home is for the host—you—to kill its creators. That means you have to kill us. Only then will the balance be reset.”

“What?” Adrian shouted.

Barachiel laughed and flipped his knife. “It’s poetic, right? You kill us, and the system snaps back to where it started like a rubber band. We’ll eventually come back to life in heaven—it's a perk of the job—but the Ledger gets dragged back for judgment.”

Adrian’s head was spinning. It was all becoming too much. He was already worried about the deaths he was seeing in his visions, and now he was talking to angels about the balance of the universe. He shook his head. “So... I just kill three angels and then I’m free?”

“Free of the Ledger, yes,” Cariel said. “And free of the ghosts.”

Everything went quiet. But then Adrian remembered the creature that was hunting him. “Who is Shadow?” he asked, narrowing his eyes.

The three angels looked at each other. Sariel shrugged, and Barachiel whistled a low note.

Cariel sighed. “It won't matter soon. Once the Ledger is gone, Shadow will disappear with it.”

“No,” Adrian said, his voice becoming firm. “I need to know. Tell me the truth.”

They whispered to each other for a minute in a language that sounded more like music than words. Finally, Barachiel leaned in, his face turning serious.

“Shadow is the voice of everyone you didn't save. Every soul the Ledger takes doesn't just go away. They stay behind and whisper to you. After a while, those whispers turn into Shadow. It is a monster made of everyone who has a grudge against you. Right now, Shadow wants you dead so it can take the Ledger for itself. It wants to send souls straight to Hell to help its master win an election down there. But the Ledger belongs to us. We need to keep the balance.”

Silence fell over the warehouse again. Adrian understood now. Shadow was an avenger for the dead.

Adrian sat perfectly still, his thoughts crashing together. He could end all of this right now. He could kill the angels, give back the system, and never see another vision or ghost again. They were offering him a peaceful way out. A clean death, they promised, without the weight of the world on his back.

He looked at their glowing faces and swallowed hard. “If the Ledger goes away... do the deaths I’ve seen still happen? Does Julian still kill Beatrice? Does he still sell Elena and Maya?”

Sariel answered him flatly. “Yes. I don’t know what you saw, but fate happens with or without the Ledger.”

Cariel added softly, “But you wouldn’t be here to see it. The Ledger is the only thing keeping you alive, Adrian. You actually died in that fire. The system restarted your heart. If you give it back, you will finish dying.”

Barachiel chuckled. “Think about it. You’re a guy who already lost everything. Give us the system and die quietly this time. No more fire. No more falling houses. Just a quick, tidy end.”

“Wait... I would die too?” Adrian asked.

“Yes,” Barachiel replied.

“Don’t tell him that yet,” Cariel whispered to Barachiel.

“We don’t lie, do we?” Barachiel asked, and the others just shrugged.

There was another long silence. Adrian took a deep, slow breath.

“So Julian still kills Beatrice... and he still sells Elena and Maya into a nightmare?”

Cariel nodded sadly. Sariel’s eyes were cold. Barachiel just shook his head.

“No,” Adrian whispered, then he shouted it: “No! Give me one more day to fix this, and then we are done.”

“No!” the three angels yelled at the same time.

“I won't do it!” Adrian said.

“Then we don't have a deal,” Adrian told them.

Sariel stood up straight. “Then we will force you to do it.”

Adrian lifted his chin, staring them down. “You’re too late. I’ve already seen how you die. Shadow is coming right now, and soon, your heads will roll on this floor. If you keep me tied up here, we will all die, and Shadow will rip the Ledger out of my chest.”

“That is a lie!” Cariel shouted.

Barachiel looked toward the warehouse doors, his grin disappearing. “Actually, he’s right. I can feel it. The smoke and the darkness—the guy has a dramatic entrance.”

Cariel’s voice was urgent now. “Then finish this the right way, Adrian. Kill us. Give back the Ledger. Save yourself the pain.”

Sariel pulled out a long sword. “Do it now, host. Or we will make you.”

Barachiel laughed, spinning his own weapon. “Come on, big guy! Let’s go!”

Adrian pulled against the glowing threads again, but they wouldn't break. “I have a little girl to save!”

Cariel looked at him with pity. “The more people you save with that Ledger, the shorter your life becomes. Your hair turns gray, your heart gets weak. You feel their pain in your own body. You know this is true.”

“I know,” Adrian said quietly. “But I have to save her.”

“This is why the system picked him,” Cariel said to the others. He turned back to Adrian. “It answers our question: Why him? Why not a demon? Why not one of us? It's because you, Adrian, have a heart that wants to save people. You could save so many more by letting go right now.”

“Ask me again tomorrow,” Adrian said.

Suddenly, thick smoke started to fill the warehouse. It looked just like the smoke from the hotel.

Sariel looked at the doors. “Shadow is here.”

Barachiel cheered. “Showtime!”

Cariel sighed. He reached out and touched the threads holding Adrian. He said a single word in a language that sounded like a song. The glowing cords turned into sparkling dust and disappeared.

Adrian’s arms were free. He stared at his wrists—the marks were gone, and his skin was healed.

The three angels raised their swords together, forming a circle around him.

Cariel spoke one last time. “Every soul you save with that Ledger will cost you years of your life. But every person you save will also bind a fallen angel to you. You will build an army of the disgraced, and they will be loyal only to you. Now that we are about to die, there is no turning back. Protect the Ledger.”

Sariel added, “Run or fight. But choose now.”

Barachiel laughed. “I vote for running! It's more fun!”

The presence of Shadow pressed against the doors like a flood of black water.

Adrian didn't wait. He stood up and bolted for the exit.

He crashed through a rusty side door and ran into a thick forest. Pine needles poked his bare feet, and the cold night air hurt his lungs. Tree branches hit his face as he ran blindly through the dark, his heart thumping in his chest.

Behind him, he heard the sound of metal hitting metal. He heard the angels' voices shouting as they fought.

His phone was still in his pocket. He pulled it out as the signal bars appeared. He opened his maps: he was forty-three miles away from the city. Away from Julian’s apartment. Away from Maya.

He kept running, his breath coming in gasps and his legs feeling like they were on fire.

Suddenly, the Ledger flared up. Red words scrolled across his vision faster than ever.

ALCHEMIST LEDGER

TRADE COMPLETE

Cariel - $1,000,000,000 claimed

Another line appeared.

Sariel - $1,000,000,000 claimed

The final line popped up.

Barachiel - $1,000,000,000 claimed

BALANCE: $3,000,000,000

Adrian tripped and caught himself on a tree trunk, his chest heaving.

He was a billionaire. In just a few seconds.

Shadow had done the killing for him.

He stared at the glowing numbers in his eyes, then looked back at the dark forest. The warehouse lights were gone.

“Let me save Maya,” he whispered to the night. “Then I can die.”

He turned toward the distant lights of the city and began to run faster than he ever had in his entire life.

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