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The First Test
Author: NB LMO
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The first real test wasn't on parchment. It was in the air.

A week after the study group formed, Master Kaelen strode into the Evocation practice yard and didn't tell them to breathe. He stood, arms crossed over his broad chest, his red robes stark against the grey morning.

"Enough theory," his voice boomed, silencing the nervous chatter. "You've attuned. You've listened. You've felt the cosmic flow." He said the last words with a twist of his mouth, as if he knew half of them had been daydreaming. "Today, you make a mark."

He held up his hand. This time, no gentle light orb appeared. A tiny, brilliant spark of white-hot energy crackled to life between his thumb and forefinger. It sizzled, throwing off miniature, snapping arcs of light. The smell of ozone spiked sharply.

"This is a lumen spark," Kaelen said. "The most basic evocation of energy. It is light, heat, and raw force in its simplest, most unstable form. Your task: create one. Sustain it for a count of five."

A wave of pure fear washed through the students. Creating light was one thing. This was like being asked to catch a lightning bolt in your hand.

"Sir," a brave—or foolish—boy named Jarret spoke up. "What if we... can't control it?"

Kaelen's grin was all teeth. "Then it will bite you. A lumen spark is a living impulse. It wants to release its energy. Your will is the only cage that holds it. If your focus wavers..." He snapped his fingers. The spark vanished with a sharp pop. "...it winks out. Or worse, it jumps. To your robes. To your neighbor." He looked pointedly at Jarret. "That is why we practice in stone circles with containment runes. Now. Positions!"

They scrambled into the white-stone circles on the grass. Elian's mouth was dry. He could feel his own heartbeat in his throat. He looked to his left. Lira was already in her circle, eyes closed, her breathing slow and deliberate. To his right, Felix looked like he was about to be sick.

"Begin!" Kaelen roared.

Elian closed his eyes. He tried to find the quiet place from the cliffs, the place where he could hear the birds. But all he could hear was the panicked rustle of forty-nine other students, the wind, and the ever-present deep hum of the academy, which today felt like a taunt.

Gather the energy. Not steal. Ask.

He pictured the sunlight. But the day was overcast. The air was cool. There was no warmth to gather.

He tried to remember the feeling of the silvery ink flowing, the intent behind the line. But this wasn't about a line. This was about a point. A single, furious point of creation.

He held out his hand, palm up. He concentrated until his head ached. He imagined a spark. A tiny star. A piece of the sun.

Nothing.

A sharp yelp and a sizzle came from a few circles over. Elian's eyes flew open. A girl was shaking her hand, a tiny black smudge on her thumb. Her spark had flared and died instantly, shocking her.

"Focus, Miss Tel!" Kaelen barked, not unkindly. "You gripped it like a dagger. It is a bird. Hold it gently, or it will panic and peck you."

Elian tried again. A bird. Not a dagger. He thought of the gulls of Hearthaven, how they would land on a post, light and nervous, ready to fly at the slightest threat. He imagined not seizing energy, but offering his palm as a perch.

He breathed in. He didn't imagine pulling energy to him. He imagined creating a space in the air above his hand where energy would want to be.

A tingle began. Not in the air, but in his palm. A prickling heat. He held his breath.

A tiny, wavering point of light flickered into existence. It was no bigger than a pinprick, dull yellow, and it trembled violently. But it was there. His heart leapt.

"Hold it!" Kaelen's voice was suddenly right beside him. Elian hadn't heard him approach. "Don't celebrate. Hold it. Feed it your calm. One... two..."

The spark sputtered. It was so hard. It was like trying to balance a drop of water on a needle. He could feel it fighting him, a wild, buzzing thing trying to explode.

"Three..."

His focus slipped. The image of the gull vanished. He saw only the spark, its instability, the potential for pain. Fear washed in.

The spark flashed bright, let out a minuscule crack, and stung his palm like a hot needle before vanishing.

Elian gasped, clenching his fist.

"Loss of focus," Kaelen said, matter-of-fact. "You feared it, so it feared you. And it bit. Again."

Across the yard, there was a sudden, louder POP and a flash of blue light. Everyone turned. Lira stood perfectly still in her circle, her face a mask of serene concentration. Hovering an inch above her upright palm was a perfect, steady, blue-white spark. It hummed softly, casting a pale light on her focused features. It didn't waver.

Kaelen strode over. "Five," he counted, his voice approving. "Well done, Miss Lira. A stable, cool-burning spark. Excellent control. You may release it."

Lira let out a slow breath. The spark dimmed and vanished, leaving no trace. A murmur of admiration and envy rippled through the class.

Felix hadn't even managed a flicker. He was staring at his own empty hand with a look of deep betrayal.

For the rest of the hour, the air was filled with the sounds of pops, sizzles, and occasional yelps. One boy set the cuff of his robe smoking. By the end, only three others had managed to sustain a spark for the full five-count, and theirs were weak, sputtering things next to Lira's calm star.

Elian tried twice more. He got a flicker. Then a brief, painful sting. The third time, he felt so frustrated he almost forced it, and the spark flared angrily before dying, leaving his palm red and tender.

When the chime sounded, Elian felt drained and bruised, not physically, but deep in his mind. It was a new kind of tired.

"Remember this feeling!" Kaelen called as they trudged away. "That is the weight of real magic! It is not free. It costs focus. It costs will. Those of you who failed today, you paid the price. Good. Debt is a powerful teacher!"

The defeat in the practice yard hung over Elian for the rest of the day. In Herbology, while they learned about fire-resistant moss, all he could think about was his own inability to create a tiny, controlled flame. At lunch, he pushed his food around his plate.

"Cheer up," Felix said, though he looked just as gloomy. "At least you made a light. I made a grand total of one warm feeling and a strong desire to cry."

"It's not about the light," Elian said, frustrated. "It's about control. Lira had it. I didn't. I lost it the second I got scared."

"Everyone's scared," a quiet voice said. Lira had sat down across from them with a bowl of soup. She looked at Elian. "I was terrified."

Elian blinked. "You didn't look it."

"That's the control," she said simply, stirring her soup. "Not controlling the spark. Controlling yourself. My father is a clockmaker. He says a single grain of fear is like sand in the gears. It jams everything. So you must clean the gears first. Before you even pick up a tool."

It was the most Elian had ever heard her say at once. "How do you clean the gears?" he asked.

She shrugged slightly. "For me, I don't think of it as my spark. I think of it as a separate thing. A small creature I am asking to sit quietly. If I am nervous, it is nervous. So I must be calm." She took a sip of soup. "You are from the sea, yes? You understand currents. You cannot command a current. You must understand its nature and move with it. A spark is a current too. A very fast, hot one."

Her words clicked. He had been trying to command it. To cage the bird. Kaelen had said "hold it gently," but Elian had still been thinking of holding. Of gripping. Lira was talking about coexistence.

"Thanks," he said, feeling the gloom lift a little.

Felix looked between them. "So I need to ask the tiny lightning bolt politely to exist? I've been demanding. No wonder it's refusing."

That made even Lira smile.

The real, parchment-and-ink test came two days later. Proctor Brom's promised quiz on the History of Magic.

They filed into Lecture Hall 3. Brom stood at the front, not with a staff, but with a stack of parchment. His expression was unreadable.

"You have one hour," he said, his dry voice cutting through the tension. "Answer all questions. Clarity and understanding will be valued over rote memorization. Begin."

He flicked his wrist. The stacks of parchment lifted into the air, floated smoothly to each desk, and settled without a sound.

Elian turned his over. The questions were not what he expected.

1. Explain, in your own words, why Sage Elyria's shift from sympathetic magic to runic formalism was both a leap forward and a profound loss.

2. Describe one practical consequence of the "Great Dissonance" of 422 A.A. that is still felt in modern spellcraft.

3. The Founding of Aethelgard was motivated by more than a desire for a school. What was the secondary reason hinted at in the primary texts?

These weren't questions with one right answer. They were questions that demanded thought. Elian's nerves quieted. This was like listening. Like understanding the grain of the wood.

He picked up his quill, dipped it, and began to write. He wrote about the loss of nuance, about speaking to the world instead of shouting at it. He wrote about how the Great Dissonance—a massive magical backlash—made all later mages cautious of combining certain schools of magic, leading to the strict divisions they studied today.

The third question made him pause. The secondary reason for the Founding... the texts were vague. They spoke of "securing a confluence," "warding a site of power," "maintaining a vigil." Cassia's words came back to him: "The veil between worlds is thin here."

He wrote about protection. Not just teaching magic, but guarding a place where magic was too strong, too wild. He wrote about the academy as a lighthouse, and the founders as its first keepers, warning ships away from a dangerous shore as much as guiding them.

He wrote until his hand cramped again, filling the parchment with his careful, clear script. When the hour chime sounded, he set down his quill with a sense of solid satisfaction. He might not be able to hold a spark yet, but he could understand a story. He could see the shape of history.

As the papers floated back to the front, Brom gathered them. His sharp eyes scanned the room. "Some of you listed facts," he said. "Some of you repeated my words. A few of you..." his gaze seemed to rest for a fleeting moment on Elian, then on Cassia, "...thought. We shall see which approach bears fruit. Dismissed."

That evening, the study group reconvened in the library, buzzing with post-test energy.

"I wrote about the lighthouse!" Cassia exclaimed. "The guardian theory! Did you?"

"I did," Elian said, smiling.

"I wrote about how the founders probably wanted a cool place to hang out without being bothered by villagers," Felix said. "I may have missed the point."

Lira was quiet. "I wrote about containment," she said softly. "The texts don't say what they were guarding against. Only that something needed to be watched. That felt... important."

Her words sent a fresh chill through Elian. Containment. Watched. It connected to the hum. To Kiera's feeling of being listened to.

Before they could discuss it further, a shadow fell over their table. Prefect Selene stood there, her expression stern. "Elian Vance. Proctor Brom wishes to see you in his study. Now."

The good feeling from the test evaporated. Felix's eyes went wide. Cassia looked worried. Lira just watched him, her face still.

Elian's heart sank like a stone in a cold sea. What had he done wrong? Had his answer been foolish? Had he failed?

"Good luck," Felix whispered as Elian stood, his legs feeling unsteady.

He followed Selene out of the library, the deep hum of the academy stones seeming to grow louder with every step, a deep, pulsing drumbeat matching the fear in his chest. The first test was over. Now, it seemed, he was about to face the result.

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