The world returned to life with a bitter jolt of suddenness. The ghost chime faded, but the pressure within Elian's head remained, a numbing, insistent ache of pain and presence. He knelt, his palms raw from the rough concrete of the sidewalk.
A gutter rat, no more than ten, stared up at him with wide, curious eyes before being pulled away by an irritable-looking woman. The traffic roared, unheeding. The city went on, a huge, uncaring beast. He leaned upward, his body strangely heavy and light, both at the same time. The words—Betrayal Registered, Integrity Logged—echoed in the still backrooms of his mind, not as memory, but as fresh, irreducible truth. He had not imagined it.
Something had happened. A crack in his reality had appeared, and he had felt… something vast. But there he stood, wiping the dirt off his jeans, and the feeling went away, leaving only the residue of a seismic change and the heavy, tired weight of his life. Approaching the office once more was a blur. He anticipated that others standing around him would stare and point, having witnessed his tumble. But no one flinched. He was a ghost, an invisible person.
He crept back into his cubicle, the flickering light now pulsating to the beat in his head.
For the rest of the day, he did nothing.
He stared at the spreadsheets, the numbers capering mockingly, their reality appearing instantly whimsical and pointless.
The hammer struck the next morning.
He was summoned to Mr. Bello's office even before he could hang up his tattered jacket on his chair. Bello had company. Adekunle leaned by the window, looking out with an air of proprietary satisfaction.
Athen," Bello began, wasting no time on pleasantries. His expression was grim and forced, his face set in an unmistakable look of disappointment. "The Omni-Global account. A mountainous opportunity for this company. They're looking for a new, single logistics provider. Their requirements are. stringent."
A chill congealed in Elian's stomach. Omni-Global was a global giant. Their account was served by a specialized team, a team Adekunle had been trying to get in charge of for months.
"I've reviewed the departmental burden, and honest to God, Adekunle's team is buried by the Petro-Gulf fiasco," Bello continued, the lie slipping from his mouth with practiced ease. Petro-Gulf was the account Elian had been denied, the bonus earned. "You, however, have shown to have. a certain focus. A nitpicky disposition. I am assigning you the Omni-Global pitch. The entire pitch. Market research, cost projections, logistical considerations, the whole nine yards. It's done in seventy-two hours."
Elian's blood went cold. It couldn't be done. A proper proposal for a client of that magnitude required five people, over two weeks at the very least. To give it to one man, in three days, was not only cruel; it was an act of deliberate sabotage.
"Sir," Elian answered, his voice strained. "With all due respect, the Omni-Global plan is a massive undertaking. For one man, in this time period… it can't be done."
"Feasibility is an attitude, Athen!" Bello retorted, his voice rising to the forced heights required for Adekunle's benefit. "This is your chance to show your commitment! To show that your much-vaunted 'hard work' can actually produce concrete results. Or are you saying you can't do it?"
Adekunle twirled back from the window, a condescending little smile spreading across his face. "I offered to go ahead, of course, Mr. Bello. But you're right. Elian should have a chance to show what he can do. We can't prevent him."
This was perfect. They were offering him a hangman's rope and asking him to try it out.
Elian looked from Bello's unyielding face to Adekunle's victorious one. Ghost pressure in his head hissed a sharp, pounding ache. He felt an odd, fleeting urge—to speak something bitter, to denounce them both. But the armor of a lifetime, the stillness he'd worn so long, was secure. To object was to be weak. To acquiesce was to step into the trap.
He swallowed, the wad in his throat closing off speech. "I will do my best, sir." Bello's smile was a thin, unforgiving line. "Good. I demand nothing less than your very best." --- The next seventy-two hours were a descent into a hell of their own creation. Elian became an office creature.
He survived on cheap, bitter coffee and tasteless sandwiches from the street vendor below. Sleep was a pleasure he was unable to afford, snagged in brief, catnap-like seizures at his desk, his head propped against a stack of printer paper. Beyond the windows of the office, the world moved from day to night and back again, a remote planet from which he was no longer part. He labored with a manic, desperate fervor he did not know he possessed. He cross-referenced a thousand data points, charted shipping lanes, matched competitor prices until his eyes were burning.
The strange clarity that had followed when he fainted in the street would occasionally recur in flashes of brief moments.
Once, staring at a very complex tariff calculation, the numbers rearranged themselves in his mind, the solution occurring to him in an instinctive bound that felt not like him.
He chalked it up to exhaustion.
He glanced up to see Adekunle and Chijioke glancing his way, their whispering and sly smiles a constant reminder of what was to come. They would walk past his cubicle, their footsteps with mock concern.
"Burning the oil late into the night, Elian?" Chijioke would say. "Such dedication. I hope it will be worth it."
Adekunle would merely shake his head, a jest of pity. "Pride is a cruel master, my friend.".
Elian kept quiet. He hid the anger, the shame, deep down, using it as a source of energy for the hard work. He was painting a masterpiece, knowing well that it would be stolen from him and defaced.
At break of day on the third morning, when a pale, sickly dawn seeped across Lagos, he finished it. The paper was a work of art. Well-researched, passionately debated, financially solid. It was, he knew with hard, cold anger, the best he had ever written. He typed it out, took one copy, and staggered on unsteady legs to Bello's office.
Bello took the thick dossier without a word of thanks, his eyes already scanning the executive summary. Elian saw a flicker of something—surprise, perhaps even shock—in the man’s eyes before the familiar mask of disdain slid back into place.
“It’s done,” Elian said, his voice hoarse from disuse and fatigue.
“We’ll see,” Bello replied dismissively. “You may go.”
Elian left, his body trembling with exhaustion and a strange, hollow sensation of anti-climax. He drove home and slept for twelve dreamless hours.
---
The following day, he returned to the office in a festive mood of celebration. A company-wide email from Mr. Bello throbbed on every screen, subject line: "A Triumph for Bello & Associates: We Land Omni-Global!"
Elian's heart pounded inside his chest as he left it open.
"Team," the message began, "I am thrilled to report that following a highly competitive selection process, Bello & Associates was chosen as Omni-Global's preferred logistics partner in West Africa! This milestone achievement is a testament to our firm's determination to innovate and steadfast commitment to excellence."
Elian scanned the text, his eyes searching for his name. It was not there.
"I would like to personally thank Adekunle Jacobs," the letter continued, "whose creative vision and tireless work on the proposal was, in the words of Omni-Global's executives, 'a masterclass in strategic logistics.' Adekunle's team has raised the bar for this company."
There it was. The theft was complete. Brazen and absolute.
He looked up. Across the room, Adekunle was delivering a stand-up, a circle of sycophants cheering him on. He held in his hand a photocopied copy of the proposal—Elian's proposal—and waved it as he was elaborating on some legendary strategic wisdom.
Their eyes met across the sea of cubicles. Adekunle's smile broadened. He gave Elian a slow, calculated wink before returning to his audience, the successful hero basking in his stolen glory.
The pressure of the headache came back into Elian's head with a vengeance, a sharp, stabbing ache at the back of his eyes. The world tilted for a moment, colors bleaching away to greys, sounds of celebration receding to a dull, water-muffled roar. A line of print, green and crisp, blazed at the edge of his eye, more biting than ever before:
System Integration: 78% Complete. Stand By.
And then it vanished.
The following week was a lesson in flawless torture. All anyone would discuss was the Omni-Global offer. Adekunle got a promotion and a hefty bonus, which he showcased wearing a brand-new wristwatch that probably cost more than Elian made in a year.
Elian, meanwhile, had to untangle a logistical nightmare inherited from one of Adekunle's earlier, poorly managed projects. It was a liability of mistaken deliveries, angry customers, and missing documents. A punishment detail.
He worked at it with zeal, his temper battered but not broken. He succeeded, sheer dogged perseverance, in cutting his losses, regaining most of the lost revenue and pacifying the most valuable client.
The day he closed the case, he gave his report to Bello, a brief write-up on a piece of paper summarizing the issues resolved and the money regained.
He was summoned to Bello's office an hour afterward. The man's face was beet-red.
"Athen! What is this?" Bello barked, waving Elian's report. "The client of the retrieved account just phoned. They are angry. They complained that your attitude was 'abrasive' and 'unprofessional.' They are about to withdraw two other contracts! It was a lie. A bald-faced, out-and-out lie. Elian had spoken to the client earlier that morning themselves; they'd been overly grateful. "Sir, that's not true," Elian attempted, the words feeling useless even as he spoke them. "The client was thoroughly satisfied. I have an email exchange—"
"I don't care about your email exchanges!" Bello yelled, pounding his hand on the desk. "I care about perception! Your ham-fisted handling of this has reduced a solved problem to a new one. This is exactly what I'm talking about, Athen.
You lack the flair, the politics.
You may get the technical work done, but you leave destruction behind you.
This is going on your permanent record.
A formal written warning for gross incompetence.
Elian stayed where he was, the charge so outrageous, so unjust, that it took the very air out of his lungs. He had succeeded, and the credit had been taken from him. He had succeeded again, and the blame had been made up. There was nothing he could do, nothing he could say, that would not be turned back on him and used against him. Truth was not a defense; it was a target.
He gazed at Bello, at this man's theatrics of rage, and he saw the whole, corrupt system in his eyes. A system where lying was rewarded and telling the truth was punished. A system where winning meant becoming like them.
And yet, as icy, warm silence lay between them, Elian found he had nothing to say. Protests would be useless. Indulgence in anger was a luxury he couldn't afford. He just nodded, a quick, stiff jerk of his head.
He turned and exited, quietly closing the door behind him. He made his way back to his cubicle, Adekunle and Chijioke's smiling faces, who most likely orchestrated the entire act, passing him by. He sat back in his chair, overhead light flickering, casting dancing shadows on the written warning now sitting atop his desk. He was silent. He clung to the tattered strands of his pride, not that it provided him with anything, but because nothing else was left to him. It was the last, broken brick in the walls of his ego. And at the black, empty core of his soul, where the phantom system swirled, he knew that this silence was not defeated. It was quiet before the tempest.
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