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Chapter 9- Going Home
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The medical leave ended on a gray Tuesday morning.

Derrick Stones stood in front of the bathroom mirror adjusting the collar of a clean shirt. The dressing on his temple had been reduced to a small adhesive bandage that could pass for a minor cut. His reflection looked almost unchanged—the same sharp features, the same controlled expression—but the blue interface hovered between him and the glass like a second layer of reality.

Remaining Lifespan: 41 Days 22 Hours 07 Minutes

He had lost addition
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