2025-12-18 04:42:03The voice wasn’t some booming god or a shimmering fairy. It was digital. Cold. Absolute.
It sounded like the startup chime of a high-end combat drone, cutting through the sludge in his brain and the fever in his lungs with the precision of a scalpel.
{ERROR! MISSION OBJECTIVE FAILED.}
Ethan’s eyes snapped open. The world was still a sewer, but now a translucent blue interface was stitched into his retinas.
It didn't just hover in front of him; it felt like it was hard-wired into his nervous system.
{FAILURE DETECTED: Total Effort Expended (98.4%). Objective Goal Achieved (10.1%).}
{ANALYZING FAILURE STATE: Target—Physical Stamina & Environmental Contaminant Resistance.}
Ethan coughed, a glob of green phlegm hitting the floor. He watched the numbers scroll.
The System wasn't judging him for being weak. It was calculating his sincerity.
It had watched him break his back against that wall of sludge, watched his heart nearly explode from the effort, and it had verified one thing: he hadn't quit. He had simply been outmatched by reality.
{HIDDEN CONDITION MET: "The Sincere Loser."}
{FAILURE GRANTS POWER: [Pestilence Immunity (Level 1)] ACQUIRED.}
The shift was violent.
It wasn't a gentle healing spell; it was a total biological overhaul. Ethan’s lungs, which had felt like they were filled with crushed glass, suddenly expanded.
The agonizing heat behind his eyes vanished, replaced by a cool, refreshing clarity. The dizziness—the "mana-flu" that had turned his limbs to jelly—dissipated like mist in the sun.
He took a breath. A deep, lung-filling breath of the foulest air he’d ever smelled.
It still stank like a rotting grave, but it didn't hurt anymore. The "poison" was now just a smell.
Ethan pushed himself up from the filth. He gripped the shovel, his hands no longer trembling.
He felt… solid.
"Holy hell," he whispered. His voice was steady.
He wasn't stronger in the way a knight was stronger. He hadn't gained bulging biceps or the ability to throw fireballs.
But he had gained something much more dangerous: the ability to ignore the things that killed everyone else.
The power didn't come from a victory. It had been forged in the white-hot furnace of his own absolute defeat.
A slow, wild grin spread across his grime-streaked face. For years, failure had been the weight that dragged him under.
On Earth, if you failed to pay your debt, the interest just grew. If you failed at your job, you were fired.
Failure was a dead end.
But here? In this broken, bureaucratic hellscape of Aetheria? Failure was a resource.
He looked at the remaining 80% of the sludge blockage. Technically, the mission was already a bust.
The timer in his hand was blinking a mocking 00:00. According to Kaelen’s rules, Ethan was already slated for the lash and a docked paycheck.
"Fine," Ethan muttered, slamming the shovel into the purple mass. CRACK.
This time, the sludge yielded. Without the fever draining his strength, his "weak" E-minus muscles were actually capable of doing the work.
He attacked the blockage with a manic, rhythmic energy. He wasn't doing it to save his job—he was doing it to test the boundaries of his new toy.
As he worked, a new notification pinged in his peripheral vision.
{SYSTEM WARNING: User must not seek out failure intentionally. All efforts must be genuine. Intentional failure or "sandbagging" will result in the permanent deletion of the System and proportional loss of all existing abilities.}
Ethan paused, wiping sweat from his brow with a muddy sleeve. The grin didn't fade; it just got sharper.
"So I have to actually try," he said to the empty tunnel. "I have to fight like my life depends on it, and then lose. I can't just stand there and take a punch; I have to throw everything I’ve got and still get flattened."
It was a terrifying philosophy. To grow, he had to pick fights he couldn't win.
He had to seek out the most miserable, impossible, and lethal situations Aetheria had to offer, give them 100% of his effort, and pray that his failure was spectacular enough to trigger a reward.
He was going to become a connoisseur of his own crushing defeats.
He spent the next thirty minutes clearing the rest of the tunnel. He didn't have to—the penalty was already locked in—but he wanted the satisfaction of finishing the job.
He wanted to walk back to Kaelen not as a broken dog, but as a man who had looked at a death sentence and asked for seconds.
When the last of the solidified sludge was shoveled away and the stagnant sewer water began to flow again, Ethan stood back. He was covered in filth from head to toe.
He smelled like a chemical spill. He was physically exhausted, his muscles screaming for rest.
But inwardly, he was vibrating.
He trudged back through the dark corridors toward the staging area. The blunt iron shovel dragged against the stone path, sparking occasionally in the gloom.
He reached the heavy iron door and pushed it open.
The staging area was just as grim as he’d left it. Commander Kaelen was sitting behind his desk, sharpening a wicked-looking dagger with a whetstone.
He didn't even look up when Ethan entered.
"You’re late," Kaelen growled, the stone rasping against the metal. "The timer went off ten minutes ago. I assume you’re here to tell me the blockage is still there and you want to beg for mercy?"
Ethan didn't say a word. He walked to the desk and slammed the rusty timer down.
It was covered in purple slime.
"The blockage is cleared," Ethan said, his voice cold and flat.
Kaelen paused his sharpening. He looked at the timer, then up at Ethan.
He took in the grime, the sweat, and the fact that Ethan—an E-minus who should be currently convulsing from mana-spores—was standing perfectly straight.
"Is that so?" Kaelen stood up, his massive frame casting a long shadow over the desk.
"I don't care if you finished it late. You failed the time trial. In the Cleanup Corps, speed is survival. You cost the upper wards ten minutes of cooling. You know the penalty."
Kaelen reached behind his desk and pulled out a coil of black leather. It wasn't a standard whip; it was laced with silver wire that shimmered with a faint, aggressive blue light.
A mana-conductive lash. It was designed to hurt more than just the skin—it was designed to shock the soul.
"Strip your shirt," Kaelen commanded.
A group of other scavengers—haggard men who looked like they’d had the hope beaten out of them years ago—stopped what they were doing to watch. Some looked away in pity.
Others had that hollow, hungry look of people glad it wasn't them.
Ethan didn't hesitate. He dropped the shovel and peeled off his soaked shirt, tossing it onto a crate.
His back was lean, scarred from a childhood of hard work, but now it was a blank canvas for the lash.
He felt the cold air of the staging area hit his skin. He felt the eyes of the other men.
And he felt the familiar surge of adrenaline.
Bring it on, you scarred bastard, Ethan thought.
He wasn't afraid. He was calculating.
He was an E-minus with zero physical defense. A lashing from a mana-whip should, by all rights, kill him or leave him paralyzed.
It was a guaranteed, 100% failure of his physical integrity.
He gripped the edge of a wooden crate, bracing himself.
"Do it," Ethan said, his voice echoing in the silent room.
Kaelen’s eyes narrowed. He didn't see the fear he expected.
He saw a man who looked like he was about to cash a paycheck.
"Have it your way, Rylan," Kaelen said, stepping back and unfurling the whip.
The leather hissed through the air.
CRACK.
The world exploded into white light and agony. The silver wire bit into Ethan’s shoulders, sending a surge of raw, magical electricity through his spine.
It felt like being branded with lightning.
Ethan’s knees buckled, his teeth grinding together so hard he thought they might shatter.
{ANALYZING FAILURE STATE: Target—Dermal Integrity & Neural Pain Threshold.}
Crack.
The second strike crossed the first, ripping skin and sending a fresh wave of fire through his nervous system. Ethan let out a strangled groan, his forehead slamming against the crate.
Crack.
The third strike was the one that broke him. His vision went dark.
The pain was too much for the human brain to process. He felt his consciousness slipping, the sheer force of the "punishment" overriding his will to stay upright.
But right before he blacked out, that cold, digital voice rang out in the theater of his mind, more beautiful than any melody.
{FAILURE GRANTS POWER: [Hardened Soul-Skin (Level 1)] ACQUIRED.}
{[Hardened Soul-Skin]: Converts 40% of incoming physical and magical trauma into temporary Stamina. Passive.}
Ethan’s eyes snapped open. The fourth strike landed, but this time, something was different.
The pain was still there, but beneath it, he felt a sudden, violent surge of energy. It was like the whip was charging a battery inside his chest.
Kaelen swung for the fifth time, putting his full weight into it.
Ethan didn't collapse. He stood up.
He turned his head, looking over his shoulder at the Commander. His back was a mess of blood and burnt silver-marks, but his eyes were glowing with a terrifying, unearned strength.
"Is that all?" Ethan asked.
The room went dead silent. Kaelen froze, the whip hanging limp in his hand.
He’d given hundreds of lashings, but he’d never seen an E-rank—or even a B-rank—stand up after three strokes of the silver wire, let alone ask for more.
Ethan felt the "temporary stamina" flooding his veins. He felt like he could run through a stone wall.
He’d paid the price in blood, and the System had settled the debt with interest.
"I'm ready for my next shift," Ethan said, reaching for his shirt. "Since I've been 'processed,' where do you want me next?"
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