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The Legendary Hairfall System CHAPTER 69
For many days straight, Delma stayed next to Jake throughout the clock, while also working out.She ran around the pond, and then did bodyweight workouts.She did pushups with the deer sitting on her back.She did pull ups on tree branches, with birds sitting on her shoulders.She pushed herself more and more so that her progress would skyrocket, all in order to reach her goal faster.During meal time, she feld soup to Jake with a spoon.He was able to move his mouth and swallow now, but he still couldn’t speak.A layer of his skin was only starting to show.Delma felt like it might take at least a week more before he could make a decent recovery.Jake could see everything around him.And every time Delma fed him soup, he felt terrible for treating her badly before.Her kindness was like a big slap to his face.Later in the evening, Delma made him sit in a reclining chair.She sat next to him and enjoyed the cool breeze next to the pond. The deer, peacock and the swans were busy eatin
The Legendary Hairfall System CHAPTER 70
A few days later.Delma was singing by the pond, and the deer were enjoying her voice.Jake was also pleasantly surprised by it. How can such a fat woman have such a beautiful voice?Delma didn’t sing a song but only some rhymes, yet she was very good at it.Delma eventually came to him and said, “How are you feeling today? Any improvement?”“Yeah,” Jake was able to talk much better now.This excited both of them.“Your progress is faster than expected. This is great,” Delma openly said. “If you work hard, you will get back to your old looks sooner than you think.”Delma then brought delicious items and shared them with Jake and the animals. “Do you like sweets? I love sweets. Some days, I eat a lot of them.”“Don’t take it the wrong way, but you shouldn’t eat sweets if you want to get slim,” he said with effort.“It’s only one sweet,” Delma pitifully said. “And that also because of your recovery progress.”“O-Okay.”A few seconds of silence passed.“Can I ask you one thing?” Delma lo
The Legendary Hairfall System CHAPTER 71
In the Blake mansion.Trisha brought a new stylist to Melvyn’s room, saying that he was the one who styled their dad’s hair.The stylist worked for two hours to bring out Melvyn’s old hairstyle, as much as he could, but Melvyn wasn’t satisfied with the output.He stabbed the stylist’s heart with the scissors and said, “He did better than others, but that’s all he is.”Melvyn was still wearing the fake wig that the stylist had made for him. “I’m tired of waiting here, so I will find a solution to this problem myself.”He walked out of the room in quick but heavy footsteps.As he was coming down the stairs, he heard the maids talking.“Hair(here) me out,” the maid said. “The hairline(airline) company workers are all so bad.”Melvyn frowned.“What are you two doing hair(here)?” the butler yelled at the maids and sent them away.Melvyn’s frown deepened. Why did he keep hearing words the wrong way? He was sure that the maids and the butler weren’t saying those words, but he still heard them
The Legendary Hairfall System CHAPTER 72
Prisha was combing her hair before the mirror. Seeing the hair stuck in the comb, she cried, “Mom, I’m stressed because of the hair fall. Isn’t there a way to strengthen the roots of my hair?”“Just stop stressing yourself over hair fall, and you’ll be fine,” Felicia replied while eating pomegranates.“Huh? That doesn’t make sense.”“Just stop worrying. Don’t they say even the hair on your head has a count to them, and one of your hairs don’t fall without God’s permission?” Felicia said. “So, stop worrying. Otherwise, every time you comb your hair, you see hairs in the comb. Every time you eat food, you see hair in the food. Every time you bathe, you find hair coming off your buttcrack, too. And everytime you sleep, the pillow seems like it’s growing hair.”“S-Stop it, Mom,” Prisha looked scared. “I shouldn’t have asked you for advice in the first place. I’ll go and ask someone else.”Prisha left the room.As she roamed around, she found Delma. Only now, she noticed that Delma’s hair
The Legendary Hairfall System CHAPTER 73
Later that night.Delma, Prisha, and Davis together went to the party in a Rolls Royce, with the head butler Weber escorting them as a driver and a bodyguard.There were more bodyguards, too, but they kept their distance and followed in other vehicles.“It feels like we’re important politicians or something,” Prisha laughed out loud, liking how she was surrounded by security.“I just hope that Tessa would come to the party,” Davis expressed his wish.“She’s likely going to come,” Delma told him.“She will?”“Yeah, she uses these parties to build connections, so she can’t miss a party like this,” Delma opined.“That’s great to hear. I hope I can impress her this time,” Davis voiced his mind.“You talk like you fell in love with her, bro,” Prisha nudged her shoulder against him. “What’s the deal? Did you really fall for that blonde with a sharp, sexy hairstyle?”Davis blushed. “What’s wrong with falling for her?”“Nothing is wrong about that, except that a million guys would have alread
The Legendary Hairfall System CHAPTER 74
On the 70th floor.“Are you really not dating anyone, Mr. Melvyn?” a young named Korvin was smiling cheekily. “At this rate, you are wasting the peak time of your life.”“Why would I put myself through something as degrading as dating?” Melvyn calmly replied. He was wearing a wig that resembled his old hairstyle, and he secured the wig so tightly so that it wouldn’t easily get blown away from the wind.“How is dating degrading?”“I don’t mind paying for a woman, but I don’t want to pay for a pussy,” Melvyn replied.“Haha, but that’s what dating is for. Everything else you get is a bonus.”“That’s why I said dating is degrading,” Melvyn said and walked away.Korvin snorted. “This guy’s ego is through the damn moon.” As he roamed around, he spotted a brunette who looked pretty hot in her green dress. He walked up to her and said, “I’m sure we haven’t met before because I wouldn’t forget a face like yours.”The brunette, Prisha, smiled slightly because Korvin was handsome. His tall build
The Legendary Hairfall System CHAPTER 75
“If you are planning on getting my number, then don’t sweat for it,” Melvyn told her straightforwardly.Prisha felt a little embarrassed, but she still said, “Why? Do you not like it when a woman sweats for you?”“Yeah, with all that ugly makeup on your face, you’ll look uglier if you sweat,” Melvyn replied.“U-Ugly?” Prisha was a bit stunned. “Nobody has ever told me that I’m ugly. You’re joking, right?”“I’m not. You are the one who needs a reality check,” Melvyn lifted his hand and rubbed his finger on her cheek. “Look at this cream and powders that you covered your face with. These cosmetics literally kill your cells, and yet you put these on your skin every day.”“A-Are you saying that makeup is dangerous?”“You can find more chemicals in this cream than in a dirty river,” Melvyn told her. “If you keep using these dangerous items, you’ll get reproductive issues and many other health issues without knowing why. After all, your blood carries all these harmful, cancer-causing chemic
The Legendary Hairfall System CHAPTER 76
Later that night.Delma, Davis, and Prisha returned home in the Rolls Royce.Prisha and Davis didn’t look happy as things didn’t go as they expected. Prisha didn’t get the number of a single man.“Why are these rich young men so stingy?” Prisha snorted. “Why couldn’t they give me their number?”Davis didn't really care for Prisha right now because he failed to have a successful conversation with Tessa.Because he was bothering her, Tessa told him to show her how much he could drink. Davis drank too much to carry himself properly, which helped Tessa to mind her own business.“Don’t think you’ll get everything quickly,” Delma told her. “Getting a boyfriend is not like ordering a pizza and expecting it to be delivered quickly. We are used to ‘instant gratification’ so much these days, and I’m fighting with myself every minute to get slimmer. I wish there was a faster way to instantly get slimmer, but even if I get slim fast, would I be able to appreciate it?”“Are you suggesting that if
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THANK YOU::The Legendary Hairfall System… I managed to finish it in about 100 chapters as I planned.Of course, the ending has a cliffhanger, but Melvyn just has that devil’s luck, so it can’t be helped.Wait, is the devil lucky?We all know what the devil’s future is, and he sure ain’t lucky. He just makes the world think he’s lucky, that’s all. The same is the case with Melvyn.Anyway, thanks to O4igins Master and all my dear readers for reading this novel. I hope you enjoyed every chapter as I tried to make it engaging and entertaining.CHARACTERS::I hope you can take away some memorable characters from this novel, whether they be good or bad. My personal character would be Delma. She’s strong, straightforward and likeable. Having her as your friend would make your life a lot better, I think.What about you? Who inspired, or impressed you?LOOSE ENDS::What about Anne Boone? The slender girl that Jake had kissed in the first chapter? Well, she’s out to prove her own worth instead
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A few months later.Guests from all around the world arrived at Hamilton mansion, their laughter and chatter echoing like music through the opulent halls on this grand wedding day.Many of those who knew Elmond well paid their respects at his grave which was built in the backyard.Jake’s schoolmates were also arriving in helicopters arranged by the Hamilton family, and this genuinely made them proud to see how far Jake had come. They were greeted by soldiers wielding guns who shot at them, not with bullets but flowers.The flowers rained on the guests and rubbed their natural fragrance on them, making them feel like they were entering heaven.The honeyed wedding cake was as big as a swimming pool, and the pools weren’t filled with water but pristine wine.There were top professional photographers capturing images and videos, but there were also world-famous painters who were capturing the essence of the wedding with their speed drawings.The atmosphere around the whole 30,000 acres of
CHAPTER 100
The next day.Jake opened his eyes and found himself inside his guest room in the Hamilton mansion.He got up from the bed with effort.As he walked, he stopped by the mirror. He still looked like he weighed less than eighty pounds after he had received fluids and recovered overnight.This made him realize that he had really pushed himself to the limits during the fight with Melvyn.After taking a long, deep breath, Melvyn stepped out of the room.He could hear Prisha’s happy voice, saying how excited she was to get an admission into MIT for the psychology department.How the hell did she get an invite from MIT? Jake wondered.Did Delma work behind the scenes and made it possible?At the same time, Davis was telling his parents how he wanted to buy a fast food chain, and so he wanted some capital from them.“I will become successful, and in one or two years, I will make Tessa look at me differently!” Davis told his parents.“If you can catch a trillion-dollar woman with a few million
CHAPTER 99
“Ethereal Bane Fists!”Poisonous fog blasts rained down on Jake without end, his voice thick just like the swirling tendrils of dark smog. On top of it, Melvyn used the telekinesis power to send big rocks flying at Jake.Jake blocked and deflected as many as he could and tried to break through Melvyn’s defenses.Despite raging in wrath, Melvyn was actively dodging Jake’s attacks, his eyes like chips of obsidian themselves.The fog around him solidified, churning and darkening, hinting at the terrible power it held.“You look cute without hair,” Jake commented, hoping it’d make Melvyn lower his guard.Melvyn’s intensity of attacking increased even more, and this helped Jake land a few hits in.But they didn’t do as much damage as he thought, or at least Melvyn was in too much of rage to be stopped by just any attacks. And he was using his telekinesis ability to reduce the impact of Jake’s attacks while strengthening his own.At some point, the black flames thickened and exploded.“Hell
CHAPTER 98
A couple of days ago.“Miracles don’t just happen,” Elmond was talking to Jake after soundly beating him during practice. “A lot of unseen work goes before one can pull off those jaw-dropping victories. To defeat Melvyn, you will certainly need a lot of raw power, but more than that, you should be able to suppress your own fears. Otherwise, you won’t be able to beat his fog.”“Suppress my own fears?” Jake looked puzzled. “I don’t get what you mean.”“Why do you think you got crystallized even when you had the shedding system?” Elmond said. “It’s because you couldn’t overcome his fog even when he wasn’t using his full strength.”“Y-You’re telling me.. His fog can do a lot more?”“It’s a world ending power… just like your system,” Elmond stated. “That’s why they’re called legendary systems. There are only a dozen or so systems like yours around the world, starting with the alpha system. When you’re competing at the top level, you’ll need to observe not just your opponent but also yourse
CHAPTER 97
Delma used the satellite towers she owned to check in the direction Jake and Melvyn had gone.It didn’t take her more than a couple of minutes to spot their location.“They went to Lemuria…” Delma frowned.“The lost continent?” Drake was startled. “Don’t the reptilian hybrids live there?”“I’m heading over,” Delma said and rushed away. “Bring all our forces there!”“What about Benson Blake?” Drake quickly said.“Kick him out!” she yelled.Benson looked quite upset with himself for many reasons. He looked up at Drake. “Let me accompany you to Lemuria. I will help you deal with my son.”“You think I’ll take you for your word?” Drake retorted.“Please!” Benson urged.Meanwhile, on the Lemuria continent.The exchange of attacks between Jake and Melvyn destroyed everything around them.They moved around on the massive content like rays of light.From ashy grounds to gardens of giant olive trees with fruits many times bigger than humans, they kept fighting without bothering about what’s aro
CHAPTER 96
At Hamilton mansion.Drake started attacking Benson, but Benson’s right-hand man, Jack intervened.“I’ll leave it to you, Jack,” Benson said and walked ahead.Drake and Jack fought viciously along with both the armies without holding back.“Dad, you seriously are not going to destroy the Hamilton family, are you?” Tessa asked.“Move!” Benson waved his hand, creating a gust of hot vaporous wind that pushed Tessa out of his way.Benson then pointed his palm toward the mansion building and released a strong arrow of blue flame, with the intention to utterly destroy the whole building that spanned many acres.But something blocked the flame arrow with both hands.It was Delma.She squeezed the flame arrow with both hands and suppressed it into nothing.Benson looked pissed off. “How could you kill my eldest daughter, Delma? If you had qualms with my son, you should have fought him instead. How could you kill Trisha?”“What sort of bullshit are you talking about?” Delma leaped at him and u
CHAPTER 95
The captain of guards, Drake, immediately activated a defensive shield around the Hamilton mansion.The missiles launched by the fighter jets couldn’t get past the barrier, but the sky was filled with huge sparks of explosion that were visible not just in the city but from far away places, too.Benson jumped out of the plane and unleashed a flame pillar through the barrier and broke his way inside.He landed in the garden, in the midst of many soldiers of the Hamilton mansion and released a burst of flames in every direction, roasting all the soldiers alive.“Come out, Elmond!” Benson roared. “Show yourself, Delma! Today is the day the Hamilton mansion will bite the dust.”Both Drake and Tessa appeared before him.“Dad, what the hell are you doing?” Tessa asked aloud. “Have you gone crazy?”Seeing the wounded Tessa, Benson’s expression changed. “Do you know what they’ve done to your eldest sister?”Tessa frowned deeply. “She got killed by Brother Melvyn.”Benson was startled for a se
CHAPTER 94
The next day.Delma woke up, only to hear of her grandfather’s demise.Her hand trembled as she touched the frozen crystal boulder, which was her grandfather.The last thing she remembered was him taking her and escaping from the island, but she didn’t think Elmond would die.What hurt her even more was that she didn’t even get to see Emond’s face anymore, as it had been fully crystallized.Resting her head on her grandfather’s head, Delma cried like a child.Seeing her like this, Weber also cried.Jake was also there, but he just put on a serious poker face, trying to control all of his anger and frustration deep inside so that he could later use it to destroy Melvyn.Elsewhere in the mansion.Prisha was watching television with her mother Felicia.In the live stream they were watching, Melvyn was the chief guest of the city-level school event and was talking on the stage right now.“He looks pretty handsome, doesn’t he?” Felicia opined. “What do you think?”“He’s definitely handsome
