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Chapter 10 — Friction Points
Author: Baruch Falcon
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Elias learned something important about the city that night.

It did not like being watched back.

He noticed it first in the pauses—those thin, uncomfortable hesitations where things lingered longer than they should. A traffic light held yellow for a breath too long. An automatic door stuttered before opening. A public screen refreshed twice, as if reconsidering what it was allowed to display.

Small errors.

Careful errors.

The kind that suggested restraint.

Elias kept moving.

He walked without destination, letting the city decide the route while he studied the margins. That had become his skill now—not prediction, not obedience, but awareness of friction. The places where the system rubbed against reality and produced heat.

The pressure sat low in his chest, steady and alert. It wasn’t warning him. It wasn’t guiding him.

It was measuring.

A street camera followed his movement for three steps too many.

Elias stopped.

The camera stopped adjusting.

A slow, involuntary smile tugged at his mouth.

“So,” he murmured, “you feel it too.”

The pressure tightened slightly.

No voice followed. No instruction. Just resistance.

He turned into a pedestrian tunnel that ran beneath a railway line. The lights inside were dim and uneven, some flickering with the exhaustion of long neglect. The tunnel had always smelled of damp concrete and old water. Tonight, it felt insulated—as though the city hadn’t fully claimed it.

His footsteps echoed too clearly.

Halfway through, the pressure shifted.

Not a command.

A suggestion.

Turn back.

Elias stopped walking.

“No,” he said quietly.

The pressure pulsed.

The lights flickered harder. One went out entirely.

Good, he thought. You react faster now.

He continued forward.

At the far end of the tunnel, someone was waiting.

The man wasn’t blocking the exit. He wasn’t hiding. He stood off to the side, hands in the pockets of a dark coat, posture loose enough to look careless. Mid-thirties, maybe. Hair pulled back. Eyes sharp—not intelligent sharp, but survival sharp.

“You’re late,” the man said.

Elias slowed but didn’t retreat. “I didn’t agree to meet anyone.”

The man smiled. “That’s what makes it interesting.”

The pressure surged—not painful, not instructive. Alert.

Not approved.

Not prohibited.

Elias stopped a few steps away. “Do I know you?”

“No,” the man said. “But the system does.”

That earned him Elias’s full attention.

“And you?” Elias asked.

“I work around its blind spots,” the man replied. “Or I used to.”

Used to.

The word stayed with Elias.

“You saw it glitch today,” the man continued. “On the bridge. You saw the overlays.”

Elias said nothing.

“Most people don’t,” the man added. “Some people can’t. And a few…” He tilted his head slightly. “A few aren’t supposed to.”

The tunnel hummed faintly. The lights steadied, listening.

Elias folded his arms—not defensively, but to anchor himself. “If this is a recruitment speech, you’re doing it badly.”

The man laughed once. Short. Real. “Good. Means you’re still thinking.”

“Who are you?”

“Jonah,” he said. “For now.”

The pressure twitched.

Aliases accepted.

Elias noticed.

“So,” Jonah went on, “you’ve met the rules. Felt the penalties. Learned the edges.”

Elias didn’t react.

Jonah’s smile thinned. “You didn’t ask how I know.”

“I don’t need to,” Elias said. “You wouldn’t be here otherwise.”

Jonah studied him, reassessing. “You adapt fast.”

“Necessity,” Elias replied. “What do you want?”

Jonah glanced back into the tunnel. “To see if you’d stop when it told you to.”

“And?” Elias asked.

“You didn’t.”

The pressure tightened again—deeper this time. Not anger.

Concern.

Elias felt an unexpected flicker of satisfaction. “Is that bad?”

Jonah’s eyes hardened. “It’s dangerous.”

They stepped out into open air. The city swallowed them instantly—noise, light, movement. Elias felt the pressure ease, just a little, now that they were back in mapped space.

Jonah noticed him noticing.

“It prefers witnesses alone,” Jonah said.

They walked side by side without agreement, matching pace. Not allies. Not enemies.

“There are others like me,” Elias said.

Jonah scoffed. “Not many. Fewer every year.”

“Why?”

“Burnout. Compliance. Or…” He shrugged. “Removal.”

Elias stopped walking.

Jonah took two more steps before stopping too.

“Removal?” Elias asked.

“Starts soft,” Jonah said. “Jobs vanish. Records break. People stop calling back. Later…” He met Elias’s eyes. “Accidents.”

The word hit hard.

“And you?” Elias asked. “Which one were you headed for?”

Jonah smiled without humor. “I stepped sideways.”

“How?”

Jonah tapped his temple. “Same way you are. By not doing what it expects.”

They stood at a crowded intersection. Hundreds of people passed without noticing either of them.

“What happens if I walk away?” Elias asked.

Jonah thought about it. “Short term? Nothing. Long term?” He gestured upward. “It closes the gap.”

“And if I don’t?”

Jonah’s smile sharpened. “Then it has to adapt.”

The pressure spiked—not pain, not command.

Threat recognition.

Elias exhaled slowly. “You’re telling me this because?”

“Because you’re at the fork,” Jonah said. “Quiet men usually stay quiet. You didn’t.”

Elias looked at the cameras. The screens. The lights pretending not to flicker.

“What’s the cost?” he asked.

Jonah didn’t answer immediately.

“That depends,” he said at last, “on how much you’re willing to lose before you learn how to push back without being erased.”

The pressure pulsed once. Heavy.

Eligibility reassessment ongoing.

Elias felt it—not as fear, but as clarity.

He nodded.

“Then,” he said, “we should talk.”

Jonah grinned. “Careful. That’s how it starts.”

They crossed the street together.

Above them, unseen by everyone else, the system recalculated—not because Elias had broken a rule, but because he had introduced a variable it could no longer predict.

And for the first time since it noticed him, the city hesitated.

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